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Mist
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|  Subject: Phade's Forbidden Techniques  29th December 2012, 12:47 pm | |
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Thread Release: Body of Thread:
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: N/A
Description: Phade has tampered with her body using her thread release. Her experiements have gone so far as to make her body completely made of thread, her organs and other vital body parts she can move around inside her body at will, she had no skeleton, so she can move her body in ways normal people wouldn't be able to. Regardless of this, she still looks like a normal person on the outside. Phade can detach her hands from her arms, her forearms from her upper arms, her arms from her shoulders, ect. Pretty much any joint in her body she can detach to where it will only be connected by threads. In these openings she can release these threads. Just with this ability the threads have no fighting abilities.
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Thread Release: Razor Threads:
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Threads can extend to reach as far as long range.
Descrption: Through further Research, Phade has learned better control of her threads, because of this she has learned to harden them to make them sharp as a blade. She has also learned to move them at speeds equal to her own speed, making them like body parts to her.
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 29th December 2012, 12:53 pm | |
| The first one needs a bumb up to C at the least, really sounds like a low B but C should be fine.
The second one should also get kicked up to C and they are fine. | |
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Mist
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 29th December 2012, 1:04 pm | |
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 29th December 2012, 1:06 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 2nd January 2013, 1:16 am | |
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Heart Siphon
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short
Description: After defeating an opponent Phade has the ability to rip out their heart, (Cores for Nova). After ripping out the heart, Phade inserts the heart into her own body, this has a max of 5 hearts at a time. Phade can gain the chakra nature and any passives of whoever's heart she has taken, however she can only use one heart at a time, meaning even if she had 4 different hearts with different chakra natures, she could only use one of those natures at a time (She always has thread release active as well.) She cannot change her chakra nature in a topic, she can only start a topic with a different chakra nature (Must state what heart is being used in the first post.) Removing a heart takes a different amount of chakra depending on the rank of the person who's heart is being removed, if they are D-Rank it costs a D-Rank amount of chakra, if C-Rank then C-Rank chakra, ect.
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Kenji
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 2nd January 2013, 10:47 pm | |
| Approved *********************** - Indra T. Erlang:
- Roark Hokkai:
- Amara Jiko:
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Mist
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 8th January 2013, 10:11 pm | |
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Thread Entity
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Description: Phade has developed the ability to release thread from her body that forms itself into the shape of some kind of entity. The entity ranks up with her and always possesses endurance, strength, and speed equal to her rank. The awesome thing about this entity is she can put one of her hearts into it, giving it the ability to use that heart's passives, chakra natures, and any jutsu Phade knows that that heart can use. Phade can take the heart out of the entity if she chooses to, its not a permanent thing.
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Soul Thread
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-SS Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Description: Phade can combine her abilities as a soulless, and her thread release to release threads from her body to be used as an attack against people. The special thing about these threads is that they are covered in chakra to increase their power, this gives them a piercing power that the threads don't normally have, allowing them to pierce defensive jutsu up to 1 rank above Phades rank and below. These threads are made extremely sharp and specialize in killing.
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 8th January 2013, 10:17 pm | |
| Yawnz Approved. 4 Max at a time right for the Entities I mean. ***********************  - Past is Past:
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Mist
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 8th January 2013, 10:27 pm | |
| max is however many hearts I have, and my max of hearts is 5 | |
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 16th January 2013, 10:59 pm | |
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Evolution of the Primal Being IClassification: Kinjutsu Rank: D-Rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self Description: Phade's integration of threads into her body has led her to this series of techniques. For a cost of D-rank blood, Phade can rip a vein apart on the inside of her body with one of her threads, soaking the threads in her body with her own blood. This technique transforms her completely into a beast made of threads. In the first form Phade looks like this - Spoiler:
. This form is the weakest of the forms and can only be maintained for 10 posts, but it raises the rank of all her thread release jutsu by 1, this doesn't change the chakra cost of the techniques.
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Blood Threads
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementaty
Range: Mid
Description: Phade must sacrifice a D-rank amount of blood for this jutsu, but it allows her threads to be slightly more deadly. Basically it covers her threads in her blood, giving them the special ability of putting her blood into her opponent by so much as scratching them with her threads in this state, this jutsu has no particular use alone, but when combined with other techniques it can be deadly.
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Bloody Invasion
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: Through the research and tampering with her body, Phade has created special particles and put them into her blood. Basically these particles are slivers of her threads. This has no use alone, but when coupled with Blood Threads it can make her thread attacks much more deadly. The point of this jutsu is so that when Phade's blood is put inside the target with "Blood Threads" Phade can manipulate these slivers of threads to stretch and grow inside her targets body. This can cause extreme internal damage over time, Dealing D-rank damage every two posts the target makes.
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Hatta
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 16th January 2013, 11:00 pm | |
| Approved
*********************** - A Testament:
- What a terrible night for a curse...:
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Kenji
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 17th January 2013, 11:23 am | |
| Overriding Hat's approval really quick just to check some things. You are aware the bloody threads can only cut through D-rank things/cause D-rank damag yes? And I think invasion should be C, but that's just my take on it. *********************** - Indra T. Erlang:
- Roark Hokkai:
- Amara Jiko:
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 17th January 2013, 12:29 pm | |
| Yea Invasion is on hold atm anyway for other reasons. I'm waiting on cass before saying ok to it. | |
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 18th January 2013, 12:03 am | |
| Ok so let me start by droping Vix's thoughts here... - Quote :
It should be ruled against or limited to beating the opponent unconcious then forcibly taking over their body. I mean she could make it some avanced form of puppetry like how one can use Puppet Strings to control people but that would make it a much higher ranked skill. Honestly it's up to you but as it is now controlling people by slipping threads of blood into their body is a no. Because it's just like Tetsu's cept the part that she doesn't have blood release which makes it even less viable than his techniques.
And after reading over them a few more times I'm going to have to make this call. Blood threads can not force the users blood into the target without having blood release. Bloody Invasion as is needs to be C rank. It can not be increased to deal more than D-Rank damage every two posts uness its rank is greatly increased. So with those changes they can be approved but unless you can either find a new way to get thread fragments into the target or getting blood release they are of no use to your character. | |
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Mist
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 18th January 2013, 1:22 am | |
| Ok just gonna drop this in there... what Vix said makes no sense, because this jutsu has nothing to do with controlling people, the thread fragments inside them just expand and cause internal damage. | |
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 18th January 2013, 10:42 am | |
| I'm stilll saying they would need blood release, as is, to do what you want them to do. Vix had a bit of a round about way of saying that it would be easy for you to expand into other techs with this approved and used to make it much much much more deadly. | |
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Mist
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 18th January 2013, 3:50 pm | |
| mmk, thats fine, I'll just delete the two, as without one or the other they are useless. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 19th January 2013, 1:50 am | |
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Evolution of the Primal Being IIClassification: Kinjutsu Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self Description: Phade's integration of threads into her body has led her to this series of techniques. For a cost of C-rank blood, Phade can rip a vein apart on the inside of her body with one of her threads, soaking the threads in her body with her own blood. This technique transforms her completely into a beast made of threads. In the second form Phade looks like this - Spoiler:
In this form all Phade's Tiers are increased by 1 rank, but it doesnt retain the abilities of the previous form, however it does reduce the chakra cost of all her Thread Release jutsu by 1 rank, without reducing the rank of the jutsu itself. The tiers of course cap at S-rank, and the form only lasts 8 posts, even shorter amount of time then the previous one.
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 19th January 2013, 1:57 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 22nd January 2013, 4:29 pm | |
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Thread Defense
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-SS Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Short
Description: Phade's threads in her body have almost a mind of their own, and they love their master. Because of this they have self developed themselves to be able to be defensive, and whenever Phade is about to come into harm they spring into action to defend her. This of course has it's limits, as they can only block jutsu up to 1 rank above Phade and lower, also there is limit times this can be used per topic. It can be used Once a topic as AS, Twice a topic as Genin, and so on so forth by a 1 count interval.
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Thread Shadowing
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid
Description: Some of Phade's threads enter the ground, exiting from her feet so they remain unseen. They stalk Phade's opponents waiting for a good time to attack, when they do they will come out of the ground behind that person and impale them from behind. The good thing about this technique is that the jutsu doesn't have to be put up until the actual attack, it can be initially used just saying the threads entered the ground through Phade's feet. Of course Phade can move around freely like this, but if she does she risks exposing the threads coming out of her feet. She can detach these at any time, but after detaching them the jutsu is nullified.
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Threaded Constriction
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Long
Description: Exiting Phade's sleeves, threads come out at speeds equal to her speed. The threads will wrap around the target and constrict all their movement. The only way to break out of this technique is with strength up to 1 rank above Phade. This jutsu doesn't cause any damage it just restricts the target's movement.
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 22nd January 2013, 5:04 pm | |
| 1st one is Approved
Second one I just have on clearification needed. When your putting your threads into the ground, can phade move away or is she rooted to the ground untill after the attack.
3rd is approved, but once this tech connects to play fair, the turn after if it hasn't been said somewhere else in the topic, inform OOC what Phade's str is. | |
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Mist
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 23rd January 2013, 4:19 pm | |
| 2nd one: Phade is free to move, but it would risk letting the opponent see the threads.
3rd: Ok, will do. | |
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 23rd January 2013, 5:16 pm | |
| so basicly the threads are still connected to her. So if she moves a person would be able to see the threads. If thats right add it in that the threads remain connected to her. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 24th January 2013, 12:45 am | |
| Edited, made it a bit more clear | |
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| | Subject: Re: Phade's Forbidden Techniques 24th January 2013, 10:01 am | |
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