Dr.Alechmy Scrolls (Sora Tenshi)

Name: Actual Medical Technique: Kiss Of Life
Classification: Medical Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: Contact (Lip Contact)

Description: No matter the times or the Advancement in life, thousands of sea-lovers die to the ocean they love and hold dear so much. Sora has created this technique to ensure that those around him don't face the same harsh faith, this technique requires him to be within kissing distance to the target it. It works by transfer air from his mouth to someone else, this in change cause his breath-holding to go down by 2 P.T instead of 1 P.T. if they are lucky, which requires a success roll of anything except 1; if it lands on 1 the sora loses 4 P.T of breath holding instead of 2 P.T due to the excess air escaping into the water.

Name: Tekkai Kenpo: Crab Coil
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C (Various Stamina Drain)
Class: Offensive
Range: Contact, Short (Dash)

Description: Requires Tekkai Kenpo: Fist. This technique begins with a short dash of 10 feet in order to close distances with an opponent, and during the dash his fists are placed at waist level. Upon being within 3 ft, he applies tekkai to his fist then strikes out with both fists in a circular motion at the victim's chest requiring Reaction Tier equivalent to the speed that he had dashed in order to tense their body in time to avoid being knocked back. Upon impact this technique deals C-rank damage, while sending a victim flying back 10 ft with force equivalent to the speed that Sora was initially moving. This can cause them to sustain additional damage if they collide with something during their knock-back while if Sora utilizes strength tiers alongside this technique then the distance the victim is knocked back is increased causing them to sustain additional damage if they collide with objects.
Tekkai/Strength Tier - Knock-Back (Additional Physical Dmg from impacts)
None (Tekkai Only) - 10 ft (D)
D - 15 ft (3 D)
C - 20 ft (C)
B - 25 ft (B)
A - 30 ft (A)

Name: Tekkai Kenpo: Coiling Crow
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Class: Offensive
Range: Short (Strafe), Contact (Impact), Self (Victim).

Description: requires Tekkai Kenpo: Fist. this technique created through sora’s playfulness, yet when used seriously the technique can be quite devastating to those who get caught in this move. This move utilizes sora’s speed tier to move to the corner of the targets eyes as long as they are within 10Ft, this is done to make themselves look smaller to the opponent, the user applies tekkai onto their fist before smashing their fist into the stomach of the opponent. Due to entering the opponents blind spot it negates C-rank reaction tiers relaying on vision unless they possess Panoramic Vision or Mantra with briefly appearing smaller in their eyes. The punch knocks the opponent back 3 Ft unless backed by a Strength tier which increases the distance by 1 Ft.
Tekkai/Strength Tier - Knock-back (Strength Modifier)
None (Tekkai Only) - 3 (N/A)
D - 4 (D = +1 ft)
C - 5 (C = +2 ft)
B - 6 (B = +3 ft)
A - 7 (A = +4 ft)

Name: Alchemic Weaponry
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Alchemist as a whole focus on Essential and Classical style yet moved away from the concept of Alchemy, Equivalent Exchange, Sora noticed this while studying the basis of the essential and the classical Style. Soru can create weapons comprised of Gelel, through equivalent exchange and the type of weapon created is dependent on it's complexity. This is done by creating a transmutation circle from which the weapons manifest themselves after donating Gelel (or Gelel + Core materia) for the Equivalent Exchange. These weapons only last for a set amount of time which is dependent on his level of skill while when formed they deal Non-Elemental Hybrid Based damage rather than physical. Upon possessing the Inventor or/& Quartermaster positions this technique can be utilized with raw materials to create weaponry with the properties of the core materia used to create it, in addition to dealing Non-Elemental Physical damage. In either case the durability of the weapon is established by the Gelel Price (durability can increase or possess additional traits depending on materia used in it's composition), however it functions like a normal weapon relying on additional techniques (Kenjutsu, Kyujutsu or Shurikenjutsu) to deal damage.
Rank - Duration of Weapon (Inventor/Quartermaster, Both) - Max Core Materia Comprising Weapon
D - 1 Turn (2 Turns/3 Turns, 1 Topic) - 1 (If lacking Inventor/Quartermaster then Gelel Only)
C - 2 Turns (4 Turns/6 Turns, 2 Topics) - 2
B - 3 Turns (6 Turns/9 Turns, 3 Topics) - 3
A - 4 Turns (8 Turns/12 Turns, 4 Topics) - 4
S - 5 Turns (10 Turns/15 Turns, 5 Topics) - 5

Name: Alchemic Weaponry: Basic Creations
Classification: Barrier Juinjutsu
Rank: D (Variable Gelel Price & Up to 5 Variable Core Materia Prices)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (Transmutation Circle)

Description: Soru has learned many things yet the most important thing he learned and assisted in the development was the Alchemic Creations. It focuses on utilizing the properties of equivalent exchange to create weaponry which can be useful to the sora or other around him, by sacrificing a various amount of gelel he can exchange it for a specific weaponry. Upon the possession of Inventor/Quartermaster, one can add an optional Core Materia Price when creating weaponry, this bestows properties to the created weapon following the guidelines of Deconstruction Index & the Item Template section for Equipment, equal to the Core Materia Price. For example, paying an A-rank of Ignis Core Materia (F, X, H or Y), Able to be engulfed in flames equal to A-rank and below Flammable (F), The ability to explode, with the A-rank strength of the explosion while the number determines the blast radius (X), This refers to an items ability to conduct Heat without being destroyed in the process (H) or This refers to an items ability to resist Electricity up to A-rank without being affected (Y).

Weaponry - Gelel Price  
Dart - D
Kunai - 2 D
Shuriken - 3 D
Disc - 4 D
Boomerang - 5 D

Name: Alchemic Weaponry: Novice Creations
Classification: Barrier Juinjutsu
Rank: C (Variable Gelel Price & Up to 5 Variable Core Materia Prices)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (Transmutation Circle)

Description: Soru has learned many things yet the most important thing he learned and assisted in the development was the Alchemic Creations. It focuses on utilizing the properties of equivalent exchange to create weaponry which can be useful to the sora or other around him, by sacrificing a various amount of gelel he can exchange it for a specific weaponry. Upon the possession of Inventor/Quartermaster, one can add an optional Core Materia Price when creating weaponry, this bestows properties to the created weapon following the guidelines of Deconstruction Index & the Item Template section for Equipment, equal to the Core Materia Price. For example, paying an A-rank of Aqua Core Materia (D, B, J or S), can result in the weapon possessing either A-rank Physical Defense (D), A-rank Heat Resistance (B), the ability to absorb up to an A-rank of physical Recoil when wielded by the user before breaking (J) or has the ability to Corrode through A-rank Objects (S).

Weaponry - Gelel Price  
Blunt One-Handed - 2 D
Pierce One-Handed - 4 D
Single Edge One-Handed - C
Double Edge One-Handed - 8 D
Shield - 10 D

Name: Alchemic Weaponry: Adept Creations
Classification: Barrier Juinjutsu
Rank: B (Variable Gelel Price & Up to 5 Variable Core Materia Prices)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (Transmutation Circle)

Description: Soru has learned many things yet the most important thing he learned and assisted in the development was the Alchemic Creations. It focuses on utilizing the properties of equivalent exchange to create Anmo which can be useful to the sora or other around him, by sacrificing a various amount of gelel he can exchange it for a specific weaponry. Upon the possession of Inventor/Quartermaster, one can add an optional Core Materia Price when creating weaponry, this bestows properties to the created weapon following the guidelines of Deconstruction Index & the Item Template section for Equipment, equal to the Core Materia Price. For example, paying an A-rank of Aeris Core Materia (Y, Q, M or I), resist Electricity up to A-rank being affected (Y), paralyze a target resulting in paralysis upon constant exposure up to A-rank (Q), This refers to an items ability to be magnetized and resist being magnetized up to A-rank (M), or Transmits intangibility to an item allowing it to be wielded, harm, or shield from intangible things up to A-rank(I).

Weaponry - Gelel Price  
Senbon - 3 D
Bolt - C
Arrow - 9 D
Bullet - B
Cannonball - 15 D

Name: Alchemic Weaponry: Expert Creations
Classification: Barrier Juinjutsu
Rank: A (Variable Gelel Price & Up to 5 Variable Core Materia Prices)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (Transmutation Circle)

Description: Soru has learned many things yet the most important thing he learned and assisted in the development was the Alchemic Creations. It focuses on utilizing the properties of equivalent exchange to create weaponry which can be useful to the sora or other around him, by sacrificing a various amount of gelel he can exchange it for a specific weaponry. Upon the possession of Inventor/Quartermaster, one can add an optional Core Materia Price when creating weaponry, this bestows properties to the created weapon following the guidelines of Deconstruction Index & the Item Template section for Equipment, equal to the Core Materia Price. For example, paying an A-rank of Terra Core Materia (?, !, W or G), can resist up to an A-rank of mental damage without being destroyed (?),  can resist up to an A-rank of Chakra damage without being destroyed (!), can absorb up to an A-rank of liquid as well as corrosive material (W), or able to conduct up to an A-rank of Natural Energy (G).

Weaponry - Gelel Price  
Blunt Two-Handed - 4 D
Pierce Two-Handed - 8 D
Single Edge Two-Handed - B
Double Edge Two-Handed - 16 D
Polearm Two-Handed - 20 D

Name: Alchemic Weaponry: Master Creations
Classification: Barrier Juinjutsu
Rank: S (Variable Gelel Price & Up to 5 Variable Core Materia Prices)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (Transmutation Circle)

Description: Soru has learned many things yet the most important thing he learned and assisted in the development was the Alchemic Creations. It focuses on utilizing the properties of equivalent exchange to create weaponry which can be useful to the sora or other around him, by sacrificing a various amount of gelel he can exchange it for a specific weaponry. Upon the possession of Inventor/Quartermaster, one can add an optional Core Materia Price when creating weaponry, this bestows properties to the created weapon following the guidelines of Deconstruction Index & the Item Template section for Equipment, equal to the Core Materia Price. For example, paying an A-rank of Mercurius Core Materia (P, U, V or T), Able to retain up to an A-rank of poison (P), able to produce A-rank hallucinations (U), the ability to conduct up to an A-rank of Electricity (V), or Deals up to an A-rank of physical damage(T).

Weaponry - Gelel Price  
Chain - 5 D
Whip - 10 D
Flail - 15 D
Chain Weaponry - 20 D
Detachable Weaponry - 25 D

Name: Alchemic Weaponry: Grand Master Creations
Classification: Barrier Juinjutsu
Rank: SS (Variable Gelel Price & Up to 5 Variable Core Materia Prices)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (Transmutation Circle)

Description: Soru has learned many things yet the most important thing he learned and assisted in the development was the Alchemic Creations. It focuses on utilizing the properties of equivalent exchange to create weaponry which can be useful to the sora or other around him, by sacrificing a various amount of gelel he can exchange it for a specific weaponry. Upon the possession of Inventor/Quartermaster, one can add an optional Core Materia Price when creating weaponry, this bestows properties to the created weapon following the guidelines of Deconstruction Index & the Item Template section for Equipment, equal to the Core Materia Price. For example, paying an A-rank of Sulphur Core Materia (C, N, L or K), is able to conduct up to an A-rank of Chakra (C), able to conduct up to an A-rank of Nen (N), Able to resist up to an A-rank of nen (L), or able to Resist an A-rank of Natural Energy (K).

Weaponry - Gelel Price  
Slingshot - C
Bow - B
Launcher - A
Crossbow - S
Ballista - SS
Catapult - SSS
Cannon  - 2 SSS

Evil Shark Drain is a no, that isn't how Actual Medical Treatment works it's more like OOC medicine than anything special and nothing about your Alchemy deals in draining blood so I can not allow this technique for you.

T.S.: Restrict Blood I, you should name it Transmutation Circle: Bandage I. Also the way you have the latter part of the description is very confusing instead it should be:
By applying his Transmutation Circle onto a wound he his able to reduce the bleeding by 3 D-ranks or in exchange for inflicting 3 D-ranks of Pain to the patient this reduction of bleed damage can be increased to a C-rank.

Kiss of Life should follow this format: Actual Medical Treatment: Kiss of Life. Everything is fine however all Actual Medical Treatment have a roll attached to them, so have it be Success Chance with a roll if you get a 1 then your breath depletion goes up by 4 P.T instead of 1 P.T as some of the air escapes while you are giving the Kiss of Life.

Crab Claw = You need to put Req. Tekkai Kenpo: Fist. The Short Dash should be 10 feet as this is a C-rank technique, the rest of how you worded it is a bit confusing so it should look like this.

"This technique begins with a short dash of 10 feet in order to close distances with an opponent, and during the dash his fists are placed at waist level. Upon being within 3 ft, he strikes out with both fists in a circular motion at the victim's chest requiring Reaction Tier equivalent to the speed that he had dashed in order to tense their body in time to avoid being knocked back. Upon impact this technique deals C-rank damage, while sending a victim flying back 10 ft with force equivalent to the speed that Sora was initially moving. This can cause them to sustain additional damage if they collide with something during their knock-back while if Sora utilizes strength tiers alongside this technique then the distance the victim is knocked back is increased causing them to sustain additional damage if they collide with objects."
The Chart should likewise be altered to reflect that.
Tekkai/Strength Tier - Knock-Back (Additional Physical Dmg from impacts)
None (Tekkai Only) - 10 ft (D)
D - 15 ft (3 D)
C - 20 ft (C)
B - 25 ft (B)
A - 30 ft (A)

Coiling Crow: Remove the part about using your fastest speed tier, that's unnecessary, so long as when you use the technique you state what speed you are using during your post you'll be fine having that in the technique means you won't be able to use a lower speed tier if you ever wanted to. If you have it use your Shin, then you'll need Tekkai Kenpo: Shin, however if you change it to Fist then you don't have to learn another technique. Coiling Crow is a bit confusing, from the description essentially you are moving to the corner of your opponent's eyes before striking?

If that's the case then have the range be Short (Strafe), Contact (Impact), Self (Victim). Have the initial strafe be able to be used on an opponent within 10 ft, causing you to enter their blind-spot negating C-rank Reaction Tiers relying on vision unless they possess Panoramic Vision or Mantra with briefly appearing smaller in their eyes. Then he lashes out throwing a punch to their stomach and follow the same mechanics as Crab Coil however the knock-back is 3 ft (each level of strength increases the knock back by 1 ft).  

This technique is a no for various reasons, the first being that there is no fighting style, the second being that it will require both Gelel & a Terra Core Materia Price, the third being that it wouldn't scale with endurance but rather similar to Alchemic Creations would be completely dependent on the Gelel & Core Materia Price. Gelel for the Rank of Barrier Tiers, Core Materia Price for the Duration. Likewise the fighting style will have to follow the same forma of Alchemic Creations albeit using Inventor/Doctor instead of Inventor/Quartermaster. What you could do is have this Fighting Style be named Alchemic Creations and the other Alchemic Weaponry to distinguish the two. Finally in regards to the pricing for Alchemic Creations: Roko if you want to make it a standalone technique then you can have the Rank be equivalent to Gelel while the Core Materia Price is a multiple of that price to determine the total duration. (For example, D-rank Gelel & 4 Terra means whomever smokes the cigarette gains a D-rank of Barrier Tiers for 4 P.T.  

Alchemic Creations should be a B-rank Fighting Style and you need to make the following corrections:
". Soru can create weapons comprised of Gelel, through equivalent exchange and the type of weapon created is dependent on it's complexity. This is done by creating a transmutation circle from which the weapons manifest themselves after donating Gelel (or Gelel + Core materia) for the Equivalent Exchange. These weapons only last for a set amount of time which is dependent on his level of skill while when formed they deal Non-Elemental Hybrid Based damage rather than physical. Upon possessing the Inventor or/& Quartermaster positions this technique can be utilized with raw materials to create weaponry with the properties of the core materia used to create it, in addition to dealing Non-Elemental Physical damage. In either case the durability of the weapon is established by the Gelel Price (durability can increase or possess additional traits depending on materia used in it's composition), however it functions like a normal weapon relying on additional techniques (Kenjutsu, Kyujutsu or Shurikenjutsu) to deal damage."
Then make a chart like so:
Rank - Duration of Weapon (Inventor/Quartermaster, Both) - Max Core Materia Comprising Weapon
D - 1 Turn (2 Turns/3 Turns, 1 Topic) - 1 (If lacking Inventor/Quartermaster then Gelel Only)
C - 2 Turns (4 Turns/6 Turns, 2 Topics) - 2
B - 3 Turns (6 Turns/9 Turns, 3 Topics) - 3
A - 4 Turns (8 Turns/12 Turns, 4 Topics) - 4
S - 5 Turns (10 Turns/15 Turns, 5 Topics) - 5

For the various creations, I don't mind the prices however I feel like you should add this to the description: Upon the possession of Inventor/Quartermaster, one can add an optional Core Materia Price when creating weaponry, this bestows properties to the created weapon following the guidelines of Deconstruction Index & the Item Template section for Equipment, equal to the Core Materia Price. For example, paying an A-rank of Aqua Core Materia (D, B, J & S), can result in the weapon possessing either D-rank Physical Defense (D), A-rank Heat Resistance (B), the ability to absorb up to an A-rank of physical Recoil when wielded by the user before breaking (J) or has the ability to Corrode through A-rank Objects (S)

Find the other examples by looking at Deconstruction Index then going to Raw Material List & Item Template all the way down to the various properties when applied to equipment to figure out the other ways Core Materia can benefit the created equipment you make. Since you have 6 creation methods you should be able to fit 6 types of Core Materia, this way you don't have to go through that process (opening 3 tabs) when you are trying to figure what Core Materia gives what Property to your created weaponry.

Name: Taiyō to tsuki
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: The Style was created by sora when he was only 10, the emotions that he felt during the process of this style help him mold it to become its complete form known in common language as sun and moon or life and death, two contradicting points just like the choice weapons of this style, Yoroi-Dōshi, Often considered to be a Long knife; The practitioner wields both swords in separate hands. Technique from this fighting style are intimidating to those who witness the techniques from this style, with prolonged use of the fighting style will cause those around to undergo a barrier check one rank lower than the user bounty due to being intimidated by the user.

Bounty (Barrier Tier to resist) - Rank of technique (Intimidation Limit Depleted, Grade Sword Modifier)
D (N/A) - D (1, Unnamed = Affects Swabbies only)
C (D) - C (2, Named = Affects Swabbies & Pets)
B (C) - B (3, Skillful = Affects Swabbies & Tertiary Crew Members)
A (B) - A (4, Affects Swabbies, Tertiary & Secondary Crew Members)
S (A) - S (5, Affects Swabbies, Tertiary, Secondary & Primary Crew Members)

Name: Tekkai Kempo: Guringurin Akkusu
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Class: Offense
Range: Contact

Description: Requires tekkai + Soru Finding himself ready to discover another Tekkai Kempo Technique to make his own, sora began to read books, lots of them, only to find out he wasn’t as talented as he though with a book in his hand instead began to spar with his own shadow when the idea finally hit him. Sora’s idea brought him with quite a few surprise like by relaying on speed rather than strength he could get off more punches or deflect incoming strikes. This technique begins by sora applying tekkai to his fist before throwing a punch at his opponent with soru, the strength of the punch is determined by a tekkai he possess while the speed is determined by the soru he posses.

Rank of user - No. of punches thrown out in 1 P.T. (No. of strikes deflected in 1 P.T.)
D - 1 (2)
C - 2 (4)
B - 3 (6)
A - 4 (8)
S - 5 (10)

Name: Velo Velo no mi
Classification:  Fighting Style
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: self
 
Description: Req. Pirate to have eaten Devil Fruit (Dino Dino Fruit: Model - Velociraptor). This fighting style revolves around giving Sora the properties of the Velociraptor in addition to being able to shift into different forms at speeds equal to his rank like any other Zoan Devil Fruit eater. He possesses three forms, his natural state as a Zireh, his fully transformed form & finally his hybrid form which blends his body between man & beast. While within his Fully Transformed state, he gains the traits of the Velociraptor identically Including but not limited to; retractable claws in addition to a larger rear claw, enhanced tracking skill due to enhanced vision, the ability to formulate tactics learning combination technique in the middle of battle & the ability to glide for short distances. Due to being an Carnivore while in his Hybrid form he gains not only the abilities of his full transformation but likewise an increased physical condition of 6 Tier Levels higher than his other forms. This technique essentially acts as a gateway and upon unlocking forms he will eventually learn how to partially transform his body in order to harness his Devil Fruit Abilities.
Devil Fruit Match ups:
Strong = Salamander Salamander Fruit: Model - Newt
Weak = Land Land Fruit: Model - Great Maccao
Immune = Land Land Fruit: Model - Velocidrome
Rank - Skill Unlocked - Traits
D - Partial Transformation (Animal) - Larger areas of body capable of being transformed in order to benefit from Velociraptor traits temporarily, with more skill resulting in a longer duration of partial transformations.
C - Full Transformation (Animal) - Able to transform into a Velociraptor being about 3 ft in height with a body length of two & half feet & finally the fail which is 6 ft long. This results in his size in this form being Small (WL of 4) albeit with a 1/2x scale modifier instead the usual 1/3 most other small creatures have due to being a bit smaller than a Humanoid sized child.
B - Partial Transformation (Hybrid) - Larger areas of body capable of being transformed in order to benefit from halved Hybrid Bonus & effects of Partial Transformation (Animal) temporarily, despite having a greater cost than it's predecessor.  
A - Full Transformation (Hybrid) - Able to transform into an anthropomorphic Velociraptor being 4'6", his width decreasing by a quarter due to the feathers covering his body, his arms are partially winged with his forearms jutting out with extra skin covered in feathers for gliding, his feet are more muscular with him losing his feet instead gaining three clawed toes and a retractable opposable claw jutting out from his heel and he now possesses a eight foot long tail. This results in his size in this form being Medium more specifically Medium S (WL of 10) albeit with a 2x scale modifier instead of the usual 3x most other medium creatures have due to his animal form being smaller than Humanoid.
S - Partial Transformation (Mastery) - Able to partially transform parts of his body without a time-limit after paying price, to harness Velociraptor physical traits and Full Transformation (Animal) techniques at Half power (1-rank Below). Able to partially transform parts of his body to benefit from Hybrid Bonus without any reductions either; temporarily after paying price albeit at Half power or without a time-limit after paying price albeit at Quartered power (3-ranks Below)

Name: Velo Velo no Mi – Falconiforme
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This is the Basic fighting style for creating alternate Zoan forms for the Dino Dino Fruit: Model – Velociraptor. Each form focuses on two things, the first which entails shifting around the Tier Caps of the individual who has eaten this Devil Fruit, and the second being the special abilities of each of these new forms granted by this fighting style. These forms are known as “Falconiforme”, and as Sora gets more skilled he will be able to improve on each of these forms both in regards to his Tiers and the special abilities, which are expansions of the original abilities of a velociraptor, that they grant. In order to unlock each form he requires either a 500 Word Count to unlock it permanently or the use of 1 R-Candy in order to activate it, however regardless of how it is used any of the forms of this fighting style result in a 2x loss of stamina as a result of tier use while transformed. Each form takes up a D-rank technique slot after being unlocked and can be shifted both into and out of at Equal Rank Tier+ Speeds.
Rank – Tier Cap Shifting (+ or -) - Technique Theme (Technique Cap for Use)
D – 1-rank – Single Ability with mediocre benefit (D)
C – 2-ranks – Single Ability with minor benefit (C)
B – 3-ranks – Single Ability with moderate benefit (B)
A – 4-ranks – Single Ability with mahor benefit (A)
*Forms:
1. Name: Black Caracara
Tier Shifting: Minus from Speed, Plus to Defense
Appearance: This is a more avian version of Sora, with his skin becoming a bit rougher, almost like the scales of a reptile, while his upper torso, arms, and lower legs are covered in sleek feathers that stick close to his form. His hair is also replaced by similar feathers, though slicked back in a manner that still looks eerily like hair. The feathers themselves are colored black. His nails sharpen lightly to become claw-like, though outside of these traits he retains most of his human appearance. In this form, his height is increased by six inches, now standing at 6'6.
Special Ability: The Black Caracara is a hardy predator, and the ability granted to this form exemplifies this; his feathers form a protective "armor" of sorts over his body, being able to reduce Physical damage done to the user and after training this extends to Hybrid damage as well. A finer control over the Devil Fruit causes the user to feel no pain from damage dealt to their feathered areas, while also spreading the damage reduction effect to the rest of their reptilian-esque flesh. Finally with mastery of this form, their feathered portions become serrated and abrasive, actually dealing damage to anyone or anything coming into contact with them.
2. Name: Pygmy Falcon
Tier Shifting: Minus from Strength, Plus to Speed
Appearance: This is a more ferocious form of Sora, despite being less imposing than some of his other forms. His legs become reptilian, with clawed toes and the stabilizing back talon, and he gains a tail that is 10ft in length. His upper body is almost completely untouched by the transformation, though his teeth sharpen to fangs and a crown of feathers sprout at his hairline and grow backwards over his hair. They also gain a stabilizing row of feathers across both arms. In this form he actually becomes a foot shorter, standing at 5' even rather than his usual height. He also becomes slimmer and slightly more aerodynamic, losing a quarter of his width in this form.
Special Ability: While small, the Pygmy Falcon is a ferocious hunter like all of his other falconiforme kin, and his ability focuses on using his size to his advantage; initially, his ability to cross distances is enhanced allowing them to cross farther distances with his average speeds than others can, though after becoming more skilled with their fruit the user becomes able to jump farther than they could before as well. Finer control over the Devil Fruit allows them to conserve their energy while traversing the battlefield, enabling them to move at highspeeds while tiring themselves out at a slower rate. With mastery over this fruit, the user is capable of not only jumping farther and higher, they can slow their rate of descend to the point where they appear to "suspend" themselves in mid-air.

Name: Velo Velo no Mi – Strigiforme
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This is the Advanced fighting style for creating alternate Zoan forms for the Dino Dino Fruit: Model – Velociraptor. Each form focuses on three things, the first which entails shifting around the Tier Caps of the individual who has eaten this Devil Fruit, the second being the special abilities of each of these new forms granted by this fighting style and the last being the performance of the abilities of the form each of these advanced forms stem from. These forms are known as “Strigiforme”, and as Sora gets more skilled he will be able to improve on each of these forms both in regards to his Tiers and the special abilities, which are expansions of the original abilities of a velociraptor, that they grant. In order to unlock each form he requires either a 1000 Word Count to unlock it permanently or the use of 2 R-Candy in order to activate it, however regardless of how it is used any of the forms of this fighting style result in a 3x loss of stamina as a result of tier use while transformed. Each form takes up a D-rank technique slot and can be shifted into & out of at Equal Rank Tier++ Speeds.
Rank – Tier Cap Shifting (+ or -) – Special Abilities (Technique Cap for Use)
A – 2-ranks/1 Tier or 1 Tier/2-ranks – Single Ability with major benefit (S)
S – 4-ranks/2 Tier or 2 Tiers/4-ranks – Single Ability with major benefit in addition to being able to utilize old abilities of composite forms (SS)
*Forms:

Name: Velo Velo no Mi – Accipitriforme
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: A-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This is the Basic fighting style for creating alternate Zoan forms for the Dino Dino Fruit: Model – Velociraptor. Each form focuses on three things, the first which entails shifting around the Tier Caps of the individual who has eaten this Devil Fruit, the second being the special abilities of each of these new forms granted by this fighting style and the last being the performance of the abilities of the form each of these advanced forms stem from. These forms are known as “Accipitriforme”, and as Bardolf gets more skilled he will be able to improve on each of these forms both in regards to his Tiers and the special abilities, which are expansions of the original abilities of a velociraptor, that they grant. In order to unlock each form he requires either a 1000 Word Count to unlock it permanently or the use of 2 R-Candy in order to activate it, however regardless of how it is used any of the forms of this fighting style result in a 4x loss of stamina as a result of tier use. Each form takes up a D-rank technique slot and can be shifted into or out of at 1-rank Above Tier- Speeds.
Rank – Tier Cap Shifting (+ or -) – Special Abilities (Technique Cap for Use)
Z – 3-ranks/1 Tier, 2-ranks/2 Tiers, or 3 Tiers/1-rank – Single Ability with major benefit in addition to being able to utilize old abilities of composite forms (SSS)
X – 6-ranks/1 Tier, 4-ranks/2 Tiers or 3 Tiers/2-ranks – Single Ability with major benefit in addition to being able to utilize old abilities of composite forms (Z)
*Forms:

Name: Velo Velo no Mi - Celeriraptor
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: C-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
 
Description: This is the Basic fighting style for creating alternate Zoan forms for the Dino Dino Fruit: Model – Velociraptor. Each form focuses on two things, the first which entails shifting around the Tier Caps of the individual who has eaten this Devil Fruit, and the second being the special abilities of each of these new forms granted by this fighting style. These forms are known as “Celeriraptor”, and as Sora gets more skilled he will be able to improve on each of these forms both in regards to his Tiers and the special abilities, which are expansions of the original abilities of a velociraptor, that they grant. In order to unlock each form he requires either a 500 Word Count to unlock it permanently or the use of 1 R-Candy in order to activate it, however regardless of how it is used any of the forms of this fighting style result in a 2x loss of stamina as a result of tier use while transformed. Each form takes up a D-rank technique slot after being unlocked and can be shifted both into and out of at Equal Rank Tier+ Speeds.
Rank – Tier Cap Shifting (+ or -) - Technique Theme (Technique Cap for Use)
D – 1-rank – Single Ability with mediocre benefit (D)
C – 2-ranks – Single Ability with minor benefit (C)
B – 3-ranks – Single Ability with moderate benefit (B)
A – 4-ranks – Single Ability with major benefit (A)
 Forms*
1. Bambiraptor
Tier Shifting: Minus from Defense, Plus to Speed
Appearance: In this form Sora's arms loses nearly half of its length, while becoming slimmer as well, possess an aptitude of feathers. His once five finger become four sharp nail which are used to grab and hold onto things, his arms as well change hue into a bright yellow and his claws take a charcoal appearance. His lower body and torso take no significant chances, while his pupils turn into a thin vertical slit and possess a greenish hue.
Special Ability: While in this form, the bambiraptor, takes a different spin on his regular taijutsu. due to being able to proplerly closing his claws to make a fist he instead attacks with his claws, this deal bleeding damage(D-rank blood loss), with mastery of this the user is capable of dealing higher amounts of piercing damage to opponents.(2 D-ranks of blood loss)
2. Hesperonychus
Tier Shifting: Minus from Reaction, Plus to Defense
Appearance: in this form sora height shrinks to 5' tall while his torso becomes plump and covered in feathers, the covering of feathers extend onto his arms and hands while his legs seem unaffected by this transformation. Present in his face are hexagon patterned scales which seem to rise an cm outward from his face. Behind this plump, shrunken sora resides a tail that is four feet in length.
Special Ability: The Hesperonychus is a hardy predator, and the ability granted to this form exemplifies this; his feathers form a protective "armor" of sorts over his body, being able to reduce Physical damage done to the user and after training this extends to Hybrid damage as well. A finer control over the Devil Fruit causes the user to feel no pain from damage dealt to their feathered areas, while also spreading the damage reduction effect to the rest of their reptilian-esque flesh. Finally with mastery of this form, their feathered portions become serrated and abrasive, actually dealing damage to anyone or anything coming into contact with them.

Name: Velo Velo no mi - Raptor Mentality
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (combinations)
 
Description: Those whom have encountered a raptor know that raptor prefer to fight in groups rather than alone, as it increases their chance of winning the fight. They tend to move in groups of three or four and rarely do they move in larger groups, this technique from the Velo Velo no mi - Velociraptor fruit focus on the enhanced intelligence a raptor possesses and focuses it on their pack mentality. Allowing the user to learn combination techniques in battle at a cost of word count between them and whomever is involved in it, while at higher bounty he can add a i of people to the combination.

Bounty (Combo Available) - Tech Rank (In-Battle WC)
D (2 Man) - D (100)
C (2 Man/Pet) - C (200)
B (3 Man) - B (400)
A (3 Man/Pet) - A (600)
S (4 Man) - S (800)

Okay, a couple of things:
Bambi-Raptor would deal slashing not piercing damage however in either case it doesn't seem to really do much so instead you should have your attacks using your claws deal Bleed Damage. Have each limb deal additional D rank bleed damage when using claws with your taijutsu, and then have that bleed damage increase to 2 D ranks per limb when fully mastered.

Raptor Mentality: I like it just need to fix your chart a bit that's all. It should be Bounty (Combo Available) - Tech Rank (In-Battle WC).
Then have it be like this:
D (2 Man) - D (100)
C (2 Man/Pet) - C (200)
B (3 Man) - B (400)
A (3 Man/Pet) - A (600)
S (4 Man) - S (800)