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Gado
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| Subject: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 9th March 2015, 8:11 pm | |
| Name: Base Seal: Primary Elemental Sealing Method Classification: Fighting Style Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: This is the fuinjutsu technique style which leads into powerful elemental sealing, without this technique it is impossible to know the precise seal formulae to seal away elemental chakra based techniques. Regardless the Elemental Sealing Method is only the gateway to the most basic chakra nature transformations, meaning Fire Sealing Method, Water Sealing Method, Earth Sealing Method, Wind Sealing Method, Lightning Sealing Method and Bone Sealing Method are now available for learning. * Requires Knowledge of: 1. Base Sealing Method: Storage Formula. 2. Modification Seal: State Formula = to the state of the nature release transformation (i.e = Fire must have Modification Seal: Energy State Formula already learned)
Name: Runic Carving Classification: Fuinjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Passive Range: N/A
Description: This is the fuinjutsu method that involves the user turning their finger into some type of chakra pen to carve the fuinjutsu on their bodies instead instead of using an ink pen on a scroll. This way, carved fuinjutsu has a passive condition added to its current mechanics, serving as a passive add on when that condition is met.The carving strength is equivalent to the seal being carved, and can only be removed by seal removals of that level or higher.
Name: Conditional Fuinjutsu Classification: Fuinjutsu/Fighting Style Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A Description: Conditional fuinjutsu is applied when a fuinjutsu seal takes effect when a specific condition is met. These conditions will serve as an evoker and can range from anything, using ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjusu , or even simple actions. | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 9th March 2015, 8:53 pm | |
| Primary elemental sealing is already a jutsu
2nd jutsu is inkan exclusive
3rd jutsu approved |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 10th March 2015, 2:53 am | |
| -Signature- Name: Elemental Genjutsu Style Classification: Fighting Style Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A Description: This is the basic requirement to learn Elemental genjutsu, genjutsu that uses the users chakra affinity as an assisted requirement to invoke genjutsu when ninjutsu, ninkenjutsu, or nintaijutsu of the chakra nature is being used. Invoked requirements depends on the chakra nature, and the fulfilled requirement of the imposed genjutsu.
Name: Elemental Genjutsu- Based God Classification: Fighting Style Rank: D-rank Class: Passive Range: N/A Description: One of the special traits about the Elemental Genjutsu style is to transfer the real world properties of that genjutsu upon it being broken. If the inflicted were to break out of an Elemental Genjutsu, the applied element and its productivity that were in the genjutsu technique can manifest as as the actual element and its in the same spots that they were originally in the genjutsu at the cost of an additional chakra cost equivalent to that genjutsu in order for it to alternate into a ninjutsu upon being broken. The user must possess the chakra nature of that elemental genjutsu in order to convert it.
Name: Elemental Genjutsu- Fire Illusion Classification: Fighting Style Rank: D-rank Class: Passive Range: N/A Description: Req*Must have Elemental Genjutsu style in order to learn this* The user of this can now use fire ninjutsu or nintaijutsu as a substitute requirement in order to invoke their genjutsu. The sight of fire can invoke sight based genjutsu, the sound of the flames can be used as an requirement invoke for sound based genjutsu, the smell of the smoke that flames produce can invoke aroma based genjutsu, and direct hits by the fire ninjutsu/nintaijutsu or experiencing the heat being emmited from them can invoke touch based genjutsu
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 10th March 2015, 3:10 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 10th March 2015, 8:20 pm | |
| Name: Residual Flames Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Passive Range: N/A Description: Amon's tenacity as a ninja greatly reflects his chakra nature. After using a fire jutsu of any kind, residual flames from the jutsu would remain from its use around the area starting for 5 turns, going up 5 for very rank that amon goes up as a ninja. This could disrupt someones chakra vision, due to the fact that those residual flames would retain Amon's signature due to being the remnants from the last fire technique that he used.
Name: Fire Illusion- Flare Classification: Genjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Varies Description: This is one of the setup jutsu that Amon could stack on to his fire jutsu . The usual initial base for this jutsu without the fire support is Amon's initial movement of firing the technique after using his handsigns. With the support of the fire the requirement base, the fire covers sights based when the opponent catches a glimpse of the fire jutsu that's being used against them in any way or the sight of the residual flames that was produce from the Jutsu' use. What flare does is have the opponent see occasional small flames around the area, which could serve as residual flames resulting from the fire jutsu. The next post, the flames star to spread from all around the inflicted, all they would see is fire around them, taking their sight away. This is also a great way to chain other jutsu with, fire illusion jutsu being used after will be increased by 1 rank. If the residual flames from the jutsu used in unison with the fire jutsu remain while the inflicted individual tries to break out or override, they would be unable to as long those flames are still around.
Name: Fire Illusion- Fumes Classification: Genjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Varies Description: This is one of the setup jutsu that Amon could stack on to his fire jutsu. With the support of the fire the requirement base that the fire covers is aroma based genjutsu from the burning smell that the fire jutsu produces after its use, whether it burned an object or the smoke being produced by residual flames. What smoke does is have the opponent smell occasional smoke that's usually produced by fire. The next post, the smell of burning smoke would engulf the inflicted's nose, giving them a coughing fit from the illusion of the constant exposure to fire fumes and having it be the only thing that they smell. This is also a great way to chain other jutsu with, fire illusion jutsu being used after will be increased by 1 rank. If the residual flames from the jutsu used in unison with the fire jutsu remain while the inflicted individual tries to break out or override, they would be unable to as long those flames are still around.
Name: Fire Illusion- Heat Classification: Genjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Varies Description: This is one of the setup jutsu that Amon could stack on to his fire jutsu. With the support of the fire the requirement base that the fire covers is Touch based genjutsu from the Heat that the fire jutsu produces after its use, whether it hit the opponent, came close to the opponent in order for him to feel it, or the heat being produced by residual flames. What Heat does is have the opponent fee occasional hot spots, their skin would be irritating to them. The next post, the irritation would increase and they would feel like their skin is being scalded, a feeling that's equivalent to boiling water. This is also a great way to chain other jutsu with, fire illusion jutsu being used after will be increased by 1 rank. If the residual flames from the jutsu used in unison with the fire jutsu remain while the inflicted individual tries to break out or override, they would be unable to as long those flames are still around. This jutsu does mental equivalent to its rank.
Name: Fire Illusion- Heat Classification: Genjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Varies Description: This is one of the setup jutsu that Amon could stack on to his fire jutsu. With the support of the fire the requirement base that the fire covers is Touch based genjutsu from the Heat that the fire jutsu produces after its use, whether it hit the opponent, came close to the opponent in order for him to feel it, or the heat being produced by residual flames. What Heat does is have the opponent feel occasional hot spots, their skin would be irritating to them. The next post, the irritation would increase and they would feel like their skin is being scalded, a feeling that's equivalent to boiling water. This is also a great way to chain other jutsu with, fire illusion jutsu being used after will be increased by 1 rank. If the residual flames from the jutsu used in unison with the fire jutsu remain while the inflicted individual tries to break out or override, they would be unable to as long those flames are still around.
Name: Fire Illusion- Cinder Classification: Genjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Varies Description: This is one of the setup jutsu that Amon could stack on to his fire jutsu. With the support of the fire the requirement base that the fire covers is Sound based genjutsu from the sound that the fire jutsu produces after its use, whether its heard from the opponent after its ignition, or the sound being produced by residual flames. What Cinder does is have the opponent hear occasional sounds of fire getting louder by the second. The next post, the sound would be at its loudest and all the inflicted would hear is the sound of fire and burning flames. This is also a great way to chain other jutsu with, fire illusion jutsu being used after will be increased by 1 rank. If the residual flames from the jutsu used in unison with the fire jutsu remain while the inflicted individual tries to break out or override, they would be unable to as long those flames are still around.
Name: Fire Illusion- Flame Hell Skeletons Classification: Genjutsu Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Short- Mid Description: This is one of the setup jutsu that Amon could stack on to his fire jutsu. With the support of the fire the requirement base that the fire covers is sight based genjutsu from the sound that the fire jutsu produces after its use, whether its heard from the opponent after its ignition, or the sound being produced by residual flames. This genjutsu creates eerie Flaming ninja skeletons, which appear one by one from trees and rocks, and corner the enemy. Their movements are slow, but when attacked they multiply, and in this way they appear like ghosts inhabiting the flames. This genjutsu grows stronger over time, having the skeletons move at speeds and inflict mental damage equivalent to the strength of the genjutsu. Engaging the skeletons will decrease the post requirement rank by 1 each time, also increasing the amount of ninja by 1. This is also a great way to chain other jutsu with, fire illusion jutsu being used after will be increased by 1 rank. If the residual flames from the jutsu used in unison with the fire jutsu remain while the inflicted individual tries to break out or override, they would be unable to as long those flames are still around. The opponent must have equal to greater rank of barrier tier to dispell the gen
Example: C rank : You try to attack the fire skeleton with a kunai. They fall down, split into four fire skeleton. 4 fire skeleton more and 1 less post requirement for the jutsu to upgrade to B rank.
C Genjutsu- 1-3 Posts -3 Fire Skeletons B Genjutsu - 4-6 Posts- 6 Fire Skeletons A-Genjutsu - 7-9 Posts- 9 Fire Skeletons S-Genjutsu - 10-12 Posts- 12 Fire Skeleton SS- Genjutsu- 13-15 Posts- 15 Fire Skeletons | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 11th March 2015, 4:50 pm | |
| approved
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 26th March 2015, 3:46 pm | |
| Name: Leaf Whirlwind Classification: Taijutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Offensive Range: Short Description: A taijutsu where one launches a succession of high kicks and low kicks. Firstly, the opponent's evasion margin is restrained upon seeing the high kick, thus augmenting the chances for the low kick to hit the mark. So originally the high kick is little more than a feint. Because of the feint, the opponent needs reaction tiers equivalent to the speed of the attack on order to catch on and react to it.
Name: Cloud-Style Crescent Moon Beheading Classification: Kenjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Offensive Range: short Range Description: The user swings their sword in a single, large, crescent moon-shaped arc, which occurs with such ferocious velocity that the technique can be employed in situations where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously. (If) there a chakra flow channeled from within the blade, this technique can be used to counter ninjutsu as well. The chakra flow has to match the rank of the jutsu. Amon already has a sword that can produce chakra flow, which is why this can be used in this way as well.
Name: Cloud-Style Reverse Beheading Classification: Kenjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Offensive Range: short Range Description: The user does a powerful spin, generating the momentum needed to slash at any opponents behind them. The user can also utilize this spinning motion to trick an enemy that's in front of them. The enemy is fooled into thinking the user will attack them, but instead the user attacks the targets behind the user.
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 28th March 2015, 9:52 pm | |
| First youve doubled posted the beheading jutsu.
Second hmm... d ranks are usually super basic little game changing. I kinda wanna say yes to the firdt but because beheading can also have chakra channeled through it i wanna say make.it a c rank cause of its diversity | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 28th March 2015, 10:00 pm | |
| Make the first beheading c rank and itll be pre-approved | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 29th March 2015, 6:20 pm | |
| edited *********************** Self Reminder - Spoiler:
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 29th March 2015, 6:21 pm | |
| Approved *********************** - Indra T. Erlang:
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 1st November 2017, 1:26 pm | |
| Name: Heat Haze Classification: ninkenjutsu Rank: A-Rank Class: Offensive Range: Short-Mid
Description: By channeling his fire chakra through a weapon/item that's made of the special metal that can be infused with chakra flow, Amon is able to unleash a heated shockwave that can travel up to 30 and deals A rank hybrid fire damage. The default speed for the shockwave is A rank, but can move faster if Amon swings the weapon at higher speeds than A. Due to the wave rapidly heating up the atmosphere before being unleashed, the damage has a scalding effect that deals an additional A rank amount of lasting pain in the form of 2nd-degree burns unless healed. When used with strength tiers , it adds a distance modifier to the wave that also serves as a knockback effect equivalent to the strength of the user unless the opponent has equivalent strength tiers to hold themselves in place.
Strength Tier- Wave distance modifier/Knockback Distance D - + 3 Feet/ 2 Feet C - +6 Feet / 4 feet B - +9 Feet / 6 Feet A - +12 Feet / 8 Feet S - +15 feet / 10 Feet
Name: Residual Flames Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Passive Range: N/A Description: Amon's tenacity as a ninja greatly reflects his chakra nature. After using a fire/blaze jutsu of any kind, residual flames from the jutsu would remain from its use around the area starting for 5 p.t, going up 5 for very rank that amon goes up as a ninja. This could disrupt someone's chakra vision, due to the fact that those residual flames would retain Amon's signature due to being the remnants from the last fire technique that he used. In addition to that, these remeant flames can be used as materia that's two rank lower than the jutsu used.If the materia drop exceeds D rank, no materia can be collected from the residual flames. The damage received when someone or something makes contact with the residual flames is one rank lower than the technique rank
Rank- Flames Lasting P.T D -5 C - 10 B - 15 A - 20 S - 25
Name: Demonic Illusion: Rewinding Visage Classification: Genjutsu Rank: D Class: Supplementary Range: Long (Sight) Description: This technique is a sight based Genjutsu which utilizes the action's of Amon. It could range from doing a tai or kenjutsu, or even bopping to his own perferred stance. However, this only activates through the fluid movements of the user, preferably when using an interception style. There is an imprint mirage shimmer that acts as a lag for the target's sight to the opponent's current movements, giving off the impression that the opponent is still acting in a way from the turn before. The target will be experiencing the previous turn twice in a visual sense. This technique ends when the opponent takes damage, or when 2 p.t after the technique's activation. If the opponent has D rank barrier tiers, this technique only lasts for 1 p.t, along with this technique being completely negated if they have C rank barrier tiers. This technique is particularly well in fooling Time Slowing Dojutsu and enhanced viewing, due to the fact that mirage shimmers creates a false image that causes interpretive faculties of the human mind, now being of their mind's own creation.
Name: Intercepting Fist- Closed Alignment Classification: Taijutsu Rank: B-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: This is one of the two stances that Amon created to utilize with the intercepting fist style. His right let serves as the leading foot, while being on his toe with his left, giving it an arch and keeping both legs 40 degrees apart. His right arm is slightly stretched out, with his left a few inches apart and closer to his chest. Closed alignment provides better mobility and reach, doubling the intercepting radius of intercepting fist. However, the power of Amon's strikes go down 2 tier levels in exchange. When the user does not possess any speed tiers this technique has an activation delay as the user moves their body into the right positioning however with additional skill the delay is reduced while if the user has B-rank or above speed there is no delay and the stance is changed immediately. There is also no delay when the Kyougan is in use. If there is a delay with getting into a stance, this delay is halved when switching from a stance into no stance at all due to not needing precise positioning when lacking a stance.
Skill Level - Activation Delay (P.T) D - 5 C - 4 B - 3 A - 2 S - 1
Name: Intercepting Fist- Push shuffle Classification: Taijutsu Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: When using this tehnique, the arched heel is actually launcher that hold's alot of power when it comes to movement, causing the user to either, advance or retreat, it's called a shuffle because of it's ability to switch between the two. When used to advance, the next taijutsu attack is treated as one rank higher in strength, but defensive physical techniques used the following turn will be one rank weaker. When being used to avoid something, Amon can dodge at one rank higher than his speed, but offensive physical techniques are one rank lower in strength the following turn.
Name: Intercepting Fist- Tenma Shurettou Classification: Taijutsu Rank: A-rank Class: Offensive Range: Short(Strike, Contact) , Mid(Jump)
Description: Using his unbelievable strength and speed, Amon bounces up to the air and crashes down on the opponents with an outside knifehand strike. The default damage and speed of this technique is A rank, but higher stages of kyougan can be used to increase the output. Those within the intercepting radius at any time will be unable to perceive the jump if they do not meet the requirements and only register the fall if able. This can be used to target ground targets and aerial targets. If used on a ground target, that attack would do the default physical damage or damage equivalent to the strength tiers used. If used on an aerial target, the target will be brought down with the chop, receiving additional elemental physical damage depending on that they made contact into. The damage from the ground impact or etc is also equivalent to 1 rank lower than the default/strength amon used. The distance of the jump is dependent on amon's strength tiers.
Strength - Jump Distance D - 5 feet C - 10 feet B - 15 feet A - 20 feet S - 25 feet
Name: Economy of Motion- Tremor Step Classification: Taijutsu [-2 Stamina] Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: The usual free and fluid motions of mobility by using speed alone now introduces strengnow acts as distance modifier for physical movement Not only does this allow Amon to cover mid-range distances instead of short, his movements also create tremors with the amount of strength he possesses. Those who do not possess strength tiers equal to 1 tier level below amon's will lose their footing and be floor prone. Those who also have a balancing technique one rank lower than Amon's strength can be stable.
Str Tier - Radius of Shaking Ground (radius/diameter) D - 1 ft (2) C - 2ft (4) B - 3 ft (6) A - 4 ft (8) S - 5 ft (10) *********************** Self Reminder - Spoiler:
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 1st November 2017, 9:48 pm | |
| Approved, unless another mod has any problems with the techs *********************** ~~~~~~~~~~~~ | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 8th November 2017, 7:47 pm | |
| Name: Fire Style: Dance of the Sun Halo- Hazed Blade Classification: Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu Rank: B-rank (Power Varies With Cycled Chakra) Class: Supplementary/Offensive Range: Self (Blade)
Description: This is an advanced chakra flow technique which Amon channels Fire Release chakra in order to greatly increase their cutting power through miking melting points of heat with the blade & Fire Release chakra damage equal to the chakra circulation being transferred through the blade, capping at S rank. In addition due to revolving around chakra flow this technique does not consume chakra so long as Amon is able to maintain contact with the weapon being circulated. Haze ninkenjutsu techniques do not require a chakra price if the chakra flow of the blade matches the needed price. The main drawback however to this technique is that by cycling chakra into his weapon it removes the cycled chakra from his max chakra reserves this chakra being unable to be utilized for anything else. When forcibly separated from his weapon or chakra disruption techniques are utilized on him the chakra cycled is lost unless he is able to deactivate it in time. This form of chakra circulation adds the added benefit of the melting status effect that starts at 2 ranks below the chakra circulation of the technique. Each strike will add stacking melting damage to the object in question, without B-Rank chakra tiers or B rank Heat Resistance. If the stacked melting damage is equivalent or exceeds the durability of the inflicted object, the object will break. This status effect does not affect the weapon being used with the chakra circulation technique, and also transpires through Amon's kenjutsu and Ninkenjutsu techniques.
Name: Intercepting Style- Weapon Cross Classification: Taijutsu/Kenjutsu Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A Description: This is a special technique that Amon had invented himself when it came to deciding to between using a blade or his fists when choosing an intercepting style. Deciding on both, Amon melds the intercepting fist and sword style together for them to be used at the same time. This means that techniques that benefit from using intercepting fist can also benefit intercepting sword, and vice versa. However, for each interchange intercepting technique, it'll cost amon -3 stamina per conversion. If it's a stance conversion, it would last for a full round. *********************** Self Reminder - Spoiler:
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 9th November 2017, 2:26 pm | |
| Approved *********************** ~A message to all~ I am always available to help if you need it! Just send me a message here or on Discord, hope you enjoy your time here.
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 9th November 2017, 4:34 pm | |
| Name: Fire Style- Intercepting Sword- Haze Parry Classification: Ninkenjutsu Rank: C-rank Class: Defensive Range: Short
Description: Based on the intercepting sword style, the user with Kyougan infused strength can knock away at the opponent's limbs in order to interrupt the action and knock them back. This can also be used against items and weapons as well, knocking them away. When used with Hazed Blade, this technique completely focuses on defense with the assisted chakra circulation and instead the usual melting capabilities, the melt status occur as one rank lower than the chakra circulation. Since this technique is used as a punishing move, the physical damage will be exchanged with physical pain instead. However, with Hazed blade, the physical pain experienced will be doubled. As soon as the target is within range of the parry, they won't even be able to register the parry if they do not meet the requirements of intercepting sword. With this, they will only experience the feeling of being knocked back 10 feet, with this technique having a distance modifier depending on strength being used. The knockback status equivalent to the Kyougan strength tiers in use, with the opponent needing equivalent strength tiers or balancing technique equal to the rank of the strength to stay upright. If strength isn't used, the requirements are either a C rank balancing technique or C-rank strength, with default physical pain being equivalent to the chakra circulation.
Strength Tier - Knockback Distance - Size of Target (Fall Dmg Sustained) D-Rank - +5 Feet - Small (N/A) C-Rank - + 10 Feet - Humanoid (D) B-Rank - + 15 Feet - Meduim S (3D) A-Rank - + 20 Feet - Medium M (C) S-Rank - + 25 Feet - Medium L (B)
Name: Fire style- Flame Control Booster Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Long Range Description: This is treated as an C rank air movement technique. Using Fire release, Amon utilizes the consecutive bursts of flame to move around the air as naturally as if he was on the ground for a set period of time depending on his rank as a ninja. The speed of the air movement is equal to the paid chakra price for this technique, capping at S rank. However, his strength tiers are treated as a distance modifier with how far he can travel within a single post by forcefully blasting himself in a direction with his hands or feet. The max distance that Amon leaves the ground is 5 feet. This jutsu only covers him with fire release aura and allows for the possibility to move through the sky. After the initial hand signs, Amon can simply pay another chakra price to reactivate it after the p.t without using handsigns. This Justu can also be deactivated at any time by Amon.
Ninja Rank/strength rank - Distance Modifier with strength tiers in play D- 1 p.t - None C- 3 p.t - x1.5 B- 5 p.t - x2 A- 7 p.t - x2.5 S- 9 p.t - x3
Name: Heat Haze Shadow Classification: ninkenjutsu Rank: S-Rank Class: Offensive Range: Short-Mid
Description: By channeling his fire chakra through a weapon/item that's made of the special metal that can be infused with chakra flow, Amon is able to unleash a heated shockwave that can travel up to 60 feet and deals S rank hybrid fire damage. The default speed for the shockwave is S rank, but can move faster if Amon swings the weapon at higher speeds than S. Due to the wave rapidly heating up the atmosphere before being unleashed, the damage has a scalding effect that deals an additional A rank amount of lasting pain in the form of 2nd-degree burns unless healed. When used with strength tiers, it adds a distance modifier to the wave that also serves as a knockback effect equivalent to the strength of the user unless the opponent has equivalent strength tiers to hold themselves in place.
Strength Tier- Wave distance modifier/Knockback Distance D - + 5 Feet/ 4 Feet C - +10 Feet / 6 feet B - +15 Feet / 8 Feet A - +20 Feet / 10 Feet S - +25 feet / 12 Feet
Name: Intercepting Sword- Instant Attack Classification: Kenjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Offensive Range: Long
Description: The user, while within the intercepting radius of the opponent at any given time, appears to instantly flicker to intercept the opponent and stab them in a vital spot with the blade. The opponent would need one tier level higher reaction tiers that the user is moving in order to even process the movement, or else it'll look as if the opponent was instantly stabbed. When a chakra circulation is used with an instant attack, the user can use it to cut away at ninjutsu that enters the intercepting radius as long as the chakra circulation is equal to or higher than the ninjutsu. However, when using elemental circulation over ambient, it shares the same strengths and weaknesses. *********************** Self Reminder - Spoiler:
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 10th November 2017, 1:31 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 10th November 2017, 8:10 am | |
| Haze Parry - No, the melt status would be upgraded to one rank below the chakra circulation rather than two ranks, not one rank above, that's absurd. *********************** ~A message to all~ I am always available to help if you need it! Just send me a message here or on Discord, hope you enjoy your time here.
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 21st November 2017, 4:48 pm | |
| - Tika's Scrolls:
Name: Paper Bomb Replacement Trap Classification: Shurikenjutsu Rank: D Class: Offensive Range: Varies
Description: A shurikenjutsu based trap that acts as a counter or bonus when being targeted by the Body Replacement technique or using it yourself. During mid-replacement, multiple paper bombs are placed on the object being switched with. The paper bombs are then set off like normal, with a simple hand seal trigger or timed explosion. The amount of paper bombs and the damage they cause is intertwined and is determined by the skill of the shinobi. The more skilled the shinobi the more paper bombs can be set which allows for more damage. The damage one takes from this jutsu is determined by the rank of the shinobi seeing as higher rank opponents can likewise afford to purchase better explosive tags in order to fashion Paper Bombs (each Paper Bombs is comprised of 3 Explosive Tags). Rank - No. of Paper Bombs D - 1 C - 2 B - 3 A - 4 S - 5
Name: Natural Chaos: 0th Level Classification: Fuintaijutsu Rank: D Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: Req. possession of Kyougan to be learned. Drawing on the power of Natural Chaos Mode and isolating it within the user's body has resulted in the stockpiling of their strength in order to give the user D-rank+ Strength. Furthermore while natural based techniques are unable to harm the user for the duration of this technique (D-rank Piercing lower duration by -1 P.T, D-rank Bypassing harm the user if higher Levels have not been learned), they are able to disperse D-rank Natural Based techniques on contact. If this is used to make contact with a Natural Based technique currently being utilized on an opponent's body then in addition to dispersing it the victim is unable to utilize natural based techniques for 1 P.T which stacks with additional contacts.
Name: Fire Release: Will of Fire Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: C Class: Supplementary Range: AoE
Description: The user creates hand seals and then places their hand on the ground, focuses their fire release technique into the ground. The fire release chakra then spreads out along the surface of the solid ground before igniting itself, becoming a sea of flames with a radius of 80 ft that are two feet high off the ground. The color of these flames are different depending on the person who uses this technique and can used to future set ups or merely to make the user's fire techniques look more flashy. The flames are ore ethereal as they do absolutely no damage to those within the area, but instead serve a supplementary effect. While this technique is active C-rank & below heat sensory is no longer effective as the entire area seems to be the same temperature and remains so unless this technique is destroyed by a C-rank Water Release AoE or terrain changing technique or a B-rank or higher Area Clearing technique. All Fire Release techniques used while this is in effect become a color dependent on the Fire Release user's will, meaning that though this technique may produce blue flames, other's fire release techniques could be either the same color or different colors.
Name: Natural Chaos: 1st Level Classification: Fuintaijutsu Rank: C Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: Req. currently active Kyougan. Drawing on the power of Natural Chaos Mode and isolating it within the user's body has resulted in the stockpiling of their strength in order to give the user C-rank+ Strength. Furthermore while natural based techniques are unable to harm the user for the duration of this technique (C-rank Piercing lower duration by -2 P.T, C-rank Bypassing harm the user if higher Levels have not been learned), they are able to disperse C-rank Natural Based techniques on contact. If this is used to make contact with a Natural Based technique currently being utilized on an opponent's body then in addition to dispersing it the victim is unable to utilize natural based techniques for 2 P.T which stacks with additional contacts.
Name: Fire Release: Heat Effect (Signature) Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: B Class: Passive Range: Self (Fire Release techniques)
Description: Tikatchi was in the process of creating an alternate use for his Fire Release techniques however was unable to train it himself before his death, as a result left in his scrolls was the method of which to modify Fire Release techniques to give off more heat. This technique results in the user's Fire Release techniques being able to dehydrate individuals on contact resulting in them sustaining stamina loss just from being within proximity of the user's flames. However because of this the user's Fire Release techniques are now weak against Scorch Release, despite maintaining their elemental match-ups against every other element and have a unique white coloration. Once this technique is learned it results in all of the users current Fire Release Techniques having to be re-trained in order to burn at normal temperatures while any Fire Release techniques which are learned after only burn extra-hot. The fire release techniques of this type have a unique relationship with water release techniques as while they are put out as easily as other flames they reduce the size of the water release technique after they are put out due to some of the water being evaporated on contact (size is decreased up to half of the size of the fire release technique put out). Rank of Fire Release - Dehydration Trigger Stamina Loss (Contact Range, Being Hit) D - 1 each P.T (2) C - 2 each P.T (4) B - 3 each P.T (6) A - 4 each P.T (8) S - 5 each P.T (10)
Name: Natural Chaos: 2nd Level Classification: Fuintaijutsu Rank: B Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: Req. currently active 1st Stg Kyougan. Drawing on the power of Natural Chaos Mode and isolating it within the user's body has resulted in the stockpiling of their strength in order to give the user B-rank+ Strength. Furthermore while natural based techniques are unable to harm the user for the duration of this technique (B-rank Piercing lower duration by -3 P.T, B-rank Bypassing harm the user if higher Levels have not been learned), they are able to disperse D-rank Natural Based techniques on contact. If this is used to make contact with a Natural Based technique currently being utilized on an opponent's body then in addition to dispersing it the victim is unable to utilize natural based techniques for 3 P.T which stacks with additional contacts.
Name: Ekotsu (Signature) Classification: Kenjutsu Rank: A-Rank (A-rank Chakra Price + Optional B-rank Chakra Price Per Arc) Class: Offensive/Supplementary Range: Self (Chakra Conductive Bladed Weapon), Short-Mid
Description: Ekotsu is a kenjutsu technique created by Tikatchi Mishura, for use alongside chakra conductive bladed weaponry. It involves the user channeling chakra into their weapon of choice which gives rise to a shroud resembling flame around the weapon, this shroud empowers the weapon and is utilized in order to give rise to various Ekotsu related kenjutsu techniques which deal Hybrid Based damage onto an opponent. The shroud adds chakra based damage to whatever kenjutsu technique is used essentially giving rise to "Ninkenjutsu", resulting in all of the kenjutsu techniques used while Ekotsu is active dealing Hybrid Based damage. Ekotsu can be focused for use in combat in two ways: *Strike = Strike essentially entails the basic use of this technique which involves either utilizing the shroud by itself or with elemental chakra which results in the Hybrid damage being converted to elemental and inflicting the status effect native to the element being used albeit requiring either A-rank Chakra Tiers or S-rank Endurance Tiers (albeit sustaining B-rank Hybrid Damage) in order to be unaffected by the status inflicted on them. *Arc = Arc essentially entails having the shroud extend outward at Vacuum Release speeds (or higher speeds depending on the user's strength tiers) in a crescent to deal chakra based damage for an optional chakra price for each arc released, this becomes more efficient with higher rank as the user becomes more proficient in controlling their chakra. However this can be done in two ways; the first being multiple crescents which cover up to 40 ft away, or the latter which is a singular crescent larger than the multiple ones which covers up to 20 ft away. Regardless of which type is chosen this technique consumes chakra from ones max reserves rending the chakra unusable for it's duration unless the user is hit which causes them to break their concentration and thus use up the chakra devoted to the technique. Otherwise after the duration is up the chakra is then taken from the user's reserves normally, in addition when utilizing the Arc form, the chakra is taken from the user's reserves directly which allows both Strike and Arc to be able to be used in conjunction with one another in combat. Rank - Duration (End Modifier) - Singular Arc Size (No. Released in Multiple Arc) D - 1 P.T (D = +1) - 4 ft Radius (1) C - 2 P.T (C = +2) - 8 ft Radius (2) B - 3 P.T (B = +3) - 12 ft Radius (3) A - 4 P.T (A = +4) - 16 ft Radius (4) S - 5 P.T (S = +5) - 20 ft Radius (5) *Note: This technique can only be used with bladed weapons which are chakra conductive, if used with non-chakra conductive weaponry (meaning said property is not listed with the weapon) then all of this techniques chakra costs are 1-rank higher. In addition when the multiple arc version is used each crescent has a 2 ft radius.
Name: Natural Chaos: 3rd Level Classification: Fuintaijutsu Rank: A Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: Req. currently active 2nd Stg Kyougan. Drawing on the power of Natural Chaos Mode and isolating it within the user's body has resulted in the stockpiling of their strength in order to give the user A-rank+ Strength. Furthermore while natural based techniques are unable to harm the user for the duration of this technique (A-rank Piercing lower duration by -4 P.T, A-rank Bypassing harm the user if higher Levels have not been learned), they are able to disperse A-rank Natural Based techniques on contact. If this is used to make contact with a Natural Based technique currently being utilized on an opponent's body then in addition to dispersing it the victim is unable to utilize natural based techniques for 4 P.T which stacks with additional contacts.
Name: Empty Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: A-rank Class: Offensive Range: Contact (Impact), Short (Blast Radius)
Description: Empty is a chakra based technique revolving around the concept of chakra ratioing initially it simply refers to the accumulation of chakra which is outbalanced favoring either Physical or Spiritual (Yang or Yin) in addition to normal chakra or the opposite if the user possesses Yin-Yang Release. The result is an imbalance and a volatile mixture forming a densely packed cube of chakra so concentrated it actually looks pure black albeit just being a very very deep shade of blue if not seen without chakra vision. Empty gains more power over time as the compression effect is time-sensitive and thus when forming it remains unseen to normal eye-sight though any type of chakra vision can see it quite clearly. Upon striking an opponent the cube can be launched outward a set amount dependent on the user's skill level before detonating resulting in a large crater which is completely empty of materials hence it's name. Empty is notorious for it's destructive capabilities as everything within it's blast radius is disintegrated unless a victim possesses equal rank Chakra Tiers or 1-rank above Endurance Tiers (sustain half the ambient chakra based damage as a result in the case of the latter) to the damage dealt by this technique. Victims who have been hit by it and live aren't able to simply heal their injuries via medical ninjutsu unless it involves techniques which forcibly stimulate the cells to grant regeneration after the injuries are first reopened. This technique likewise requires the user to be fast enough to get out of the blast radius at either Samurai Level A-rank Speed or above lest they are caught in their own technique. SKill Level - Launch Distance - Blast Radius - Max P. T to generate Empty* - Dmg inflicted D - 1ft - 5ft 10 - D C - 2ft - 10ft - 9 - C B - 3ft - 15ft - 8 - B A - 5ft - 20ft - 7 - A S - 6ft - 25ft - 6 - S *Note: The more skilled the user is the lower the max P.T is for instance a S-rank shinobi can generate a S-rank strength empty in 6 Posts (Total) however with a reduction in increments of 1 they can produce a B-rank strength Empty in 4 Posts or a D-rank strength Empty in 1 post.
Name: Natural Chaos: Activated Strength Classification: Fighting Style Rank: A-rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: Req. Natural Chaos Mode to be learnt & Kyougan currently active. Tikatchi while unable to perfect his own method of merging his strength tiers gained from Natural Chaos Mode with those granted by the activation of his Kyougan left behind knowledge on how to do so for his apprentice. This technique results in a Tier-Chain conferring Strength+ Tiers onto the user's body at the cost of isolating the effect of Natural Chaos Mode to negating the use of Natural Based techniques on the user, while opponents or natural based techniques are capable of either having their natural based technique use being negated for a set amount of time through contact (opponents) or being dispersed if struck with strength and being a lower rank than the strength exerted by the user of this technique. Because of this the duration of Natural Chaos Mode is likewise affected when this technique and others within it's line are used. This technique differs from the original use of Natural Chaos Mode in that it merely acts like a defense against natural based techniques as while piercing based techniques lower it's duration by a set amount, bypassing natural based techniques will affect the user normally. Rank - Natural Chaos Mode Duration - Rank of Def Piercing Natural Tech. (Duration Lowered By) D - 20 P.T - D (1), C (2) C - 30 P.T - B (3), A (4) B - 40 P.T - S (5), SS (10) A - 60 P.T - SSS (15), Z (45) S - 70 P.T - False X (70)
Name: Natural Chaos: 4th Level Classification: Fuintaijutsu Rank: S Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: Req. currently active 3rd Stg Kyougan. Drawing on the power of Natural Chaos Mode and isolating it within the user's body has resulted in the stockpiling of their strength in order to give the user S-rank+ Strength. Furthermore while natural based techniques are unable to harm the user for the duration of this technique (S-rank Piercing lower duration by -5 P.T, S-rank Bypassing harm the user if higher Levels have not been learned), they are able to disperse S-rank Natural Based techniques on contact. If this is used to make contact with a Natural Based technique currently being utilized on an opponent's body then in addition to dispersing it the victim is unable to utilize natural based techniques for 5 P.T which stacks with additional contacts.
Name: Natural Chaos Mode (Exclusive) Classification: Fuinjutsu Rank: S-rank Class: Passive Range: Self
Description: As the name says it’s the curse brought upon those who call themselves the Bringers of Kaosgakure. This mode allows them to suppress the combat ability of everyone in the topic for the duration of Chaos mode not allowing any one to use natural based techniques. During the battle the user gains a strength tier equal to their rank for the duration of this mode allowing them an even greater advantage over their opponent in battle. Natural Chaos mode has duration first starting with 15 posts (total) at B-rank, 25 posts total at A-rank and finally 35 posts at S-rank.
Name: Natural Chaos: 5th Level Classification: Fuintaijutsu Rank: SS Class: Supplementary Range: Self
Description: Req. currently active 4th Stg Kyougan. Drawing on the power of Natural Chaos Mode and isolating it within the user's body has resulted in the stockpiling of their strength in order to give the user SS-rank+ Strength. Furthermore while natural based techniques are unable to harm the user for the duration of this technique (SS-rank Piercing lower duration by -10 P.T, SS-rank Bypassing harm the user however below that are unable to harm user upon being learned), they are able to disperse SS-rank Natural Based techniques on contact. If this is used to make contact with a Natural Based technique currently being utilized on an opponent's body then in addition to dispersing it the victim is unable to utilize natural based techniques for 6 P.T which stacks with additional contacts.
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 21st November 2017, 6:55 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 30th November 2017, 8:42 am | |
| Name: Fire Style - Burst Flame Clearance Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: C-rank (Variable Chakra price ) Class: Supplementary Range: AoE Description: After forming the tiger hand seal, Amon exhales a small ball of flames on the ground that quickly expand around him in a ring-like fashion. Afterwards, the fire expands in an Aoe radius, clearing mist dispersal techniques that are equal to or lower than the chakra used. The dispersal is as far as 80 feet, but the fire itself deals no damage. For more chakra put into this technique for the dispersal check, the limit of chakra that can be put in caps at S rank. A constant chakra price of c rank per p.t can also maintain the area dispersal until the user cancels the technique.
Name: Intercepting Fist - Instant Defense Classification: Taijutsu Rank: C-rank (-2 Stamina) Class: Defensive/Passive Range: Self
Description: One of the great things about using the intercepting radius with the intercepting fist is the ability to anticipate incoming assaults that enter the frame of range that the intercepting radius this particular style covers. Even with the added benefit of the Kyougan's time slowing abilities, The particular style of instant defense allows for the user's dodge requirements for a technique that enters or is initiated within his intercepting radius to be decreased by one tier level. This allows for a more fluid range of movement and ease when dealing with fast attackers.
Name: Intercepting Fist - The Thunderbolt Classification: Taijutsu (-3 Stamina) Rank: B-rank Class: Defensive Range: Varies (Intercepting Radius)
Description: Returning to the roots of the intercepting style and how it's reaction based in nature, this is considered as one of Amon's more powerful punches. Using the intercepting Radius in order to pinpoint the potential physical action or the physical movement of the opponent while they are within the proper intercepting radius of the target. The radius itself is used as the range of motion as the user shifts his body, crouching slightly in preparation for the follow-through as he uses the opponent's forward against them and punishes them with a right or left strike. Since the opponent's momentum is used against them, this counter is utilized against an individual using equivalent speeds or one rank higher in speed that the user is moving. If "The Thunderbolt" is used right after a dodge by the user, the user will automatically shift into the Target's blind spot. When this is done, the new interception radius requirements in order to dodge the attack or even notice it now requires a combination of reaction tiers euql to the speed that Amon was moving, and a speed that's one rank higher than the tier speed that was baited for "The Thunderbolt." Those within the intercepting radius at any time will be unable to perceive the strike if they do not meet the requirements and only the damage. The default damage and speed of this technique is B rank, but higher stages of kyougan and Amon's natural tiers can be used to increase the output.
Name: Intercepting Fist - Motionless Jab Classification: Taijutsu Rank: B-rank (-2 Stamina per punch) Class: Offensive Range: Varies (Intercepting Radius)
Description: The motionless Jab is a flurry of attacks that have no build-up in the user's shoulder or elbow. This is accomplished by keeping one's fist and shoulder completely lined up while the Target is within or is beginning to enter Amon's intercepting range. By tricking the opponent into second-guessing Amon's very own striking range, the end result is a punch that flies straight out of the user's stance, that doesn't even look like the user got out of original positioning to strike the target in the first place. The amount of strikes that are thrown in this position is dependent on Amon's ninja rank, following the intercepting radius qualifications and increasing the intercepting speed capabilities to one rank higher than the user's speed. Those within the intercepting radius at any time will be unable to perceive the strike if they do not meet the requirements and only the damage, with it looking like Amon didn't even move into striking position at all. The default damage and speed of this technique is b rank, but higher stages of kyougan and Amon's natural tiers can be used to increase the output. These punches are per post total, costing -2 stamina for each punch.
Ninja Rank - # Of Flurries D - 1 C - 2 B - 3 A - 4 S - 5
Name: Flame Illusion Style Classification: Fighting Style Rank: B-rank Class: Passive Range: N/A Description: The user of this can now use fire ninjutsu, ninkenjutsu or nintaijutsu as a substitute requirement in order to invoke their genjutsu. The sight of fire can invoke sight based genjutsu, the sound of the flames can be used as a requirement invoke for sound based genjutsu, the smell of the smoke that flames produce can invoke aroma based genjutsu, and direct hits by the fire ninjutsu/nintaijutsu or experiencing the heat being emitted from them can invoke touch based genjutsu. This genjutsu style can also greatly compliment kyougan arts genjutsu. Genjutsu performed this way will only be able to be detected by chakra sensory techniques that are capable of analyzing the amount of chakra within a technique, or a genjutsu detection technique equal to the genjutsu in question. If they do not possess either of these, the Genjutsu isn't required to be put in spoilers. To kai of it, the inflicted needs endurance tiers that match the rank of the highest genjutsu in the chain.
Name: Ninja Conditioning Classification: Taijutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A
Description: Every human has a code of ethics which define themselves. It is because of that their natural stamina has been hardened. These ethics has allowed Amon to develop a natural cardio pacing that allows him to exert less energy when he uses physical techniques that cost stamina. Stamina priced techniques will now cost -1 stamina less than the cost.
Name: Monk Conditioning Classification: Taijutsu Rank: C-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A
Description:An advanced code which grants Amon a natural cardio pacing that allows him to exert less energy when he uses physical techniques that cost stamina. Stamina priced techniques will now cost -2 stamina less than the cost.
Name: Indomitable Conditioning Classification: Taijutsu Rank: B-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A
Description: Never Give up. Never Surrender. Those who phrases are etched to every human's frame of being. These ethics has allowed Amon to develop a natural cardio pacing that allows him to exert less energy when he uses physical techniques that cost stamina. Stamina priced techniques will now cost -3 stamina less than the cost.
Name: Unbreakable Spirit Conditioning Classification: Taijutsu Rank: A-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A
Description: After Brutal training and countless battles the human has become used to taking blows from opponents. This also grants the user's body a natural altitude of overcoming the stress of any kind and to handle the amount of energy needed to perform tasks. These ethics has allowed Amon to develop a natural cardio pacing that allows him to exert less energy when he uses physical techniques that cost stamina. Stamina priced techniques will now cost -4 stamina less than the cost. *********************** Self Reminder - Spoiler:
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 11th December 2017, 6:31 pm | |
| Burst Clearance - This is just an Area Dispersal technique. Remove that it clears weather changing or "atmosphere hiding" techniques. Also, the range of an AoE is 80ft, not 800. 800 sq ft is the area of the AoE. Also, add in that this technique requires a constant chakra price each post (total) to keep up the area dispersal effect.
Instant Defense - Change the dodge requirement decrease from one rank to one tier level. Also add in a -2 Stamina Price when dodges are made with this reduction.
The Thunderbolt - "requiring one rank higher in Rank and tier level in reaction tiers that the speed Amon is moving at." Please clear this up and make it easier to understand, because at this point I have no clue what is going on there.
Motionless Jab - Make sure you specify that these punches are per post (total). Also, this will incur a -2 Stamina price per punch thrown.
Fire Illusion - This should be called "Flame Illusion Style". The prices for the Genjutsu cannot be substituted by materia, so remove that. These illusions can only be broken through Kai if the victim possesses Endurance Tiers equal to the rank of Fire Release used. The genjutsu added onto Fire Release will only be able to be detected by chakra sensory techniques that are capable of analyzing the amount of chakra within a technique, or a genjutsu detection technique equal to the genjutsu in question. If they do not possess either of these, the Genjutsu isn't required to be put in spoilers. *********************** ~~~~~~~~~~~~ | |
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 21st December 2017, 9:27 am | |
| edited, need a stamp of approval *********************** Self Reminder - Spoiler:
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| Subject: Re: Amon Mishura -Jutsu- 30th April 2018, 4:38 pm | |
| Your techs may be Fire Release but they're really not warming me up...
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