Kugeki Jutsus and some Jikei stuff

Name: Spiraling Flares
Classification: Nintaijutsu
Rank: C-SSS rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Focusing their fire chakra to their hand, fire will appear and spiral around the user’s hand in a clockwise direction. Being released from these flames are flares which spiral around the users arm up to the elbow. As the user punches the target, the flames around the hand will deal damage equal to the amount of chakra wasted while the flares will explode upon the target dealing additional damage two rank lower than the chakra wasted, the flares do damage individually not as a whole.

These flares do stack in damage which gives this jutsu a set number of flares released being dependent on the chakra used: C-rank chakra will give 2 flares, B-rank will give 4 flares, A-rank will give 6 flares, etc by a 2 count.

I see no problem, approved

Name: Opposing Seal
Classification: Fuinjutsu/Kinjutsu (Kugeki Head Only)
Rank: S-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This was made with the blood of a Kugeki. Inside the seals formula lies the ability of the Kugeki’s Opposing Ace, the ability to perfectly fuse chakra natures of opposing elements without them neutralizing each other. Basically when this seal is placed on somebody they are capable of using the Opposing Ace ability, but this also forces their chakra natures to follow the Kugeki guidelines, their secondary must be the weakness of their primary and their tertiary must be the weakness of their secondary. Due to being a blood seal after some time(1 month RL time), this seal will completely fuse with the host’s body so it will be unable to be unsealed from them.

Hmm.. Approved

Name: Static Grind
Classification: Ninjutsu (Particle Aura Only)
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short (Varies on Vela Field)

Description: At the cost of drastically weakening the particles released from his body, Jikei can cause them to extend their range to that equivalent of his Vela Field. These weakened particles will now only send weak electrical surges through a person, enough so if placed in the right spot can cause their muscles to spasm. This means that Jikei has further control over the weakened particles than he does the normal ones, but he can only control them over the range of Vela Field and that he must have extensive knowledge over a races body.

Sure

Name: Flicker of the Forged Lightning Flash
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: SSS-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid to Long

Description: Rotating their wind chakra around their arm, the user will focus their lightning chakra to three points around their fist, creating a ring of lightning above their fist, the ring hovering above their fist like a halo. This process does not stop after the first ring is created; if the user chooses so they can continue to focus their lightning chakra to those three points creating more rings of lightning. As more rings of lightning are created, the rings already created will be pushed upward along the user’s arm, giving the appearance that the user’s arm is completely surrounded by halos.

It takes two posts to create a new ring of lightning, but this does not require the user to stand completely still while doing so rather they cannot use anything that requires chakra while doing so. There is no true limit on how many rings the user can have around their arm, but make note once all the rings are gone this jutsu is ended, this also means that each ring can only be used once. When attacking, a ring will move above the user’s fist and simply hover there. As the user throws a punch, the ring will shatter releasing a massive flash, which covers a radius of 50 feet, completely blinding everybody excluding the user for 5 posts. Because this flash is chakra based, chakra sensing dojutsus will only see a massive amount of chakra rendering them useless during this flash. When the rings shatter and the flash is released, compressed wind bullets entangled in lightning rings will fly at the target at Echoing Flash speeds, 20 bullets in total. These bullets can only pierce through jutsus SSS-rank and lower but when they collide with a person’s body; they will explode with a 3 foot radius. Due to the combination of lightning and wind, the explosion released from the bullets are capable of assaulting a person’s chakra system, in which if somebody takes a hit from 5 bullets their chakra system will be completely destroyed.

Name: Gate of the Wraiths
Classification: Void Tech/Kinjutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description: Using a D-rank amount of blood the user will create a portal behind them which consists of an empty void that leads to the Wraith’s Caverns. Because of the connection with Wraiths, in order to use this one must have a contract with the Wraith Summoning. As long as this portal stays active, any Wraith the user has a contract with can freely pass through the portal with no summoning cost to the user. Due to being made from the user’s blood this portal will shatter upon taking damage from a jutsu one rank higher than their rank. It must also be noted that this is only a two way door for Wraiths and the user, nobody else can pass through this portal unless given permission by either the Wraiths or the user.

Approved

*Note: Celestial Spectrum is a Kugeki Tertiary Line. Requires Lightning Fist, Forged Wind, and Spiraling Flares.

Name: Celestial Spectrum
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-SSS rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: Focusing their lightning chakra to their fist, their hand will spark with lightning as the lightning begins to rotate around their arm, along the current of the wind chakra they are also focusing around their arm. Following along the rotation of the lightning and wind, flames will appear from the user focusing their fire chakra along with flares spiraling along with the lightning and wind. The resulting combination will compress all the chakra together creating a star around the user’s hand.

Being released from the star, are smaller stars similar to the Spiraling Flares, flares, except they are glowing bright similar to a normal star. The amount of smaller stars being released is equivalent to the amount of chakra used to activate this jutsu: 3 at D-rank, 6 at C-rank, 9 at B-rank, etc by a 3 interval. Over time more of these smaller stars will be released naturally as every 3 posts, 2 smaller stars are released with no chakra cost to the user. When the smaller stars are used they are instantly dispersed and the user must waste more chakra if they want more stars or wait the time limit.

When activated the main star, the one around the user’s hand, will release thin string of chakra that will coil around the user’s arm to the elbow. Based on how much chakra was initially wasted to create this jutsu depends on how many smaller stars the coil can hold: 5 smaller stars with D-rank chakra, 8 smaller stars with C-rank chakra, 12 smaller stars with B-rank charka, etc by an interval of 3 above the limit for the smaller stars. This coil is meant to keep the smaller stars from dispersing when they are used but the smaller stars connected to the coil are not used initially as if they are any smaller stars present other than the ones connected to the coil, then they are used first then the ones on the coil. This coil being present will also mean that forcibly create smaller stars, it must happen naturally, but the coil has a set limit on how long it can hold the smaller stars and that is it can only 3 times, the user can only use 3 Celestial Spectrum jutsus that use the smaller stars around the coil, before the coil is destroyed and the user must waste more chakra to make a new coil.

Name: Celestial Spectrum-North Star
Classification: Nintaijutsu
Rank: D-SSS rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Upon the activation of the Celestial Spectrum, the user will proceed to assault their target with a punch, the collision causing an explosion. The power of this jutsu is dependent on how much chakra was used to activate Celestial Spectrum but it varies upon how many smaller stars are currently present. With each smaller star present the power of this jutsu is increased by one rank and if it reaches the SSS-rank cap, it will continue to stack starting again at the initial power of the jutsu. Because of the coil the user can raise the stack further by using the limit on the coil, if the coil has 3 stars and the coil’s limit is used for this jutsu, the jutsu will have 9 stacks. Because this jutsu was formed by the power of Celestial Spectrum, it costs no chakra to use other than the amount of chakra wasted to create Celestial Spectrum.

Hmm... Approved unless anyone has a reason otherwise.

Name: Fighting Spirit of the Killer
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: AoE

Description: By fusing their Fighting Spirt with their Killing Intent, the user is now capable of exuding both pressures at the same time, which will have a direct influence on people around them. To those equal to their rank, their jutsus damage will be lowered by 1-rank, to those 1-rank lower than them, their jutsus damage will be lowered by 2-ranks, for those 2 ranks and lower they will instantly be knocked unconscious by the pure Fighting Spirit and Killing Intent being released, it is a way of letting their opponents know that they have no chance of winning the fight, to those of greater rank, they will have no penalty but will still be influenced by this. So far the only know ways to negate this is to have a Fighting Spirit or Killing Intent eqrual to or greater than the user’s, in the case of Kugekis who crave combat the only way to negate this is to have a deep emotional reason for fighting them.

Name: Fear
Classification: Taijutsu (Kugeki Only)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: AoE

Description: The result of what happens to those who are influenced by the user’s Fighting Spirit of the Killer. This pressure being released causes the target to hallucinate things are happening that truly aren’t. When done correctly; the user can project the “Fear” to compliment their overall fighting style, which can sometimes cause the target to permanently fear the user.

Fear Types: (Can choose two “Fear” types. The first is granted upon learning this jutsu while the second is obtained when the user makes their first rank up, regardless of what rank one starts as. With the primary “Fear” the user is able to learn up to SSS-rank jutsus while the secondary “Fear” can only be trained up to S-rank jutsus.)
-Monster: This type of fear focuses on boosting one’s physical prowess to overwhelm their opponent. Users of this type of “Fear” are often strong without activating their “Fear,” having either a minimum of A-rank strength of endurance.
-Shadow: This type of fear focuses on masking one’s presence, making it extremely difficult to locate them, and by extension, attack them. Users of this type of “Fear,” are often either Hunter-nin or assassins, in which they have at least 5 assassination based jutsus.
-Presence: This type of fear focuses on manipulating the opponent’s mind so the user’s attacks will never miss. Users of this “Fear” are well versed in close quarters combat and rarely fight at other ranges.
-Marionette: This type of fear revolves around the manipulation of others, most commonly seen in puppeteer but not limited to it. It is no surprise that the users of this “Fear” are masters of puppeteer but because this “Fear” is not limited to such, one’s who wield this “Fear” is masters of manipulation of others.
-Creator: This type of fear is the most mysterious as it focuses on the creation of things, no limit has been given on what is created. The most common type of creation is genjutsu, but that is not in any way the form of this. Users of this fear are usually genjutsu or mental master, but vary greatly.
-Armament: This type of fear relies on focusing one’s “Fear” through their weapons, which can change the weapons overall appearance and ability while the “Fear” is being ran through it. Users of this fear are rarely not seen without their signature weapon, but thanks to this “Fear,” are able to alter its shape, size, and density as the situation requires. The users of this “Fear” are without doubt masters of weaponry.

Name: Embrace of Fear
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: For those who possess the Presence fear type, they have adapted their “Fear” into their close combat fighting. Being in close proximity with a Kugeki who is using this, the target will hallucinate that the Kugeki’s attacks are seemingly moving faster than it actually is, anybody within 5 feet of the Kugeki who is influenced by their “Fear” with a reaction tier equal to the Kugeki’s speed tier cannot dodge their attacks nor can a person with a speed tier one rank higher than their speed tier, excludes SS-rank speeds and higher due to the gap being too large.

Name: False Fears
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid

Description: For those who possess the Presence or Armament fear types, when the user’s target is in between 20 and 50 feet away from them, the user will perform the action of an attack obviously missing. To the target watching this action, they will hallucinate themselves taking the hit along with feeling all the pain that comes along with it, this hallucination stunning the target for 1 post. The one condition of this technique is that the user must perform the attack that the target hallucinated hitting them at a close range, in which due to how far the target is usually away from the user, the user must have a certain speed tier so they can strike the target before they snap out of the hallucination: 20 feet away requires B-rank speed, 30 feet away requires A-rank speed, and 40 feet and higher requires S-rank speed. If the strike outside the hallucination is successful, the mental damage will become permanent, so every time the user performs said attack, when the target is a max of 20 feet away or lower, the target will hallucinate the attack has already made contact, stunning them until the real attack hits, the user must continue to the follow the hallucination with the real attack making their attack both deadly but predictable. The real power of this attack is that the hallucination bypasses endurance and defense tiers, due to being mental based, this causes them to completely rid themselves of both endurance and defense tiers while they are stunned making them completely vulnerable.

I'm gonna need another opinion on Fear... And since the two below it are connected by Fear, they are on hold too. I'm gonna have to say Spirit of the Killer at least be upped to C. Once it's upped it's approved.

Alright I get that you're using the killing intent to make them hallucinate. Although I think that's a bit ridiculous it's what happens in the canon so it's fine.

I think Fear itself should be upped to B-rank at least. Also, is everyone effected? Ranks above you? I think there should be post limits for how long they're effected. For example a Rank above you is like 5 posts. 1 Rank below is 10 and 2 Ranks is 15, or something similar. There just don't seem to be any drawbacks or limits and with something like this, you need a limit of some sort.

False fears doesn't deal mental damage, that's seriously pushing this boundary between mental and physical and..yeah just no.

Embrace is fine because they need to be within 5 feet.

Fighting Spirit of the Killer, I differ with Tet just because making it C really doesn't inconvenience you at all. You fused 2 so yes it probably should be C but I'm impartial regardless. Honestly if it's D it just means it's easier to shut down with lock down techs on ranked jutsu *shrugs* so whatever.

Fear, yes everyone is affected. I'll put ranks above are unaffected, but since there is no time limit on how long Killing Intent lasts or Fighting Spirit, even though since this isnt a rank thing this is a measure of killing intent or fighting spirit there is right to keep it as greater rank can be affected

but the rank on Fear and Fight spirit have been upped

False Fears is keeping mental damage

Yawnz I agree with Kenken with everything only difference is make the False Fears have a chakra cost initially upon the first hit and make it Taigen. I get the Hallucinations but Hallucinations and actual mental damage differ greatly in that one may seem like it hurts but isn't and one may seem or may not seem like it hurt but actually is. Namely Hallucinations and actual mental damage, because Hallucinations would disappear upon being snapped out of it, mental damage stays similar to actual physical damage and stacks with time causing people to go into coma's if it chains too much.

Mod Edit
Okay now your approved

I'll take away False Fears mental damage, but the jutsu was a whole is staying the same, but I'm not making it cost chakra due to it not being caused by chakra and the prereq for it being an AoE..actually from what you said, this tech isnt being broken out of from being snapped out of it..so it shares the same limit as Fear and Fighting spirit of the killer. Unless one has Fighting Spirit, or Killing intent then they are influenced by this

Oh well, but not putting a time limit on Fear, I don't see it as a time limit based thing and Fighting Spirit is affecting all unless, you have Killing intent or fighting spirit

Name: Script
Classification: Ninjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank (No chakra cost)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Printed around both of Jikei’s arms is a complex formula, specifically meant to integrate other jutsus that involve formulas into it. This is done by a 400 word training, in which Jikei can alter the way the integrated formula-based jutsus are used; this does not alter their original purpose.
Integrated Formulas:

Name: Luminous Lock
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: After projecting his Luminous Glyphs through his Script, Jikei will seal the chakra into the Glyph completely stabilizing, allowing it to last forever until Jikei disperses it or the Glyph is destroyed, by a chakra destroying or nullifying jutsu. But due to Jikei, having Void Release running through his vains, if this is used as a blood based fuinjutsu then the Glyph cannot be destroyed by chakra destroying jutsus.

Approvoed

Name: Kugeki Chakra Thread
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short to Mid

Description: Taking upon the normal Chakra Threads jutsu, the Kugeki have expanded on this jutsu by adding more chakra and condensing it further than usual. This condensing allows the threads to remain constantly invisible, except to chakra sensing techniques, along with allowing the Kugeki to fully control the threads up to a 20 feet radius regardless if they are disconnected from their fingers or not.

Name: Body Sense
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: Combining their Battle Impression with their Occupation Zones, the user has created a way to effectively locate every bone in a person’s body simply by touch. This process is also effective in figuring out broken bones and/or missing body parts. This jutsu also works with any variant of Occupation Zones.

Name: Thread Flow
Classification: Kugujutsu, Ninjutsu
Rank: B-rank
Class: Defensive/Supplementary (Passive once placed)
Range: Short (Mid upon insertion)

Description: By making a small incision in the patient or target’s body, the user will guide their Kugeki Chakra Thread through them. The thread will actually flow through their veins until their veins are completely filled with the chakra thread, this process takes 3 posts. Once filled the chakra thread will react with their chakra hardening their veins to the point that they lower the damage of physical based jutsus by one rank, includes piercing, but the target cannot control this, it will happen regardless if they want it to or not.

A secondary feature of this, is due to the Kugeki Chakra Thread capable of being controlled by the Kugeki, as long as the target is within 20 feet of the user and equal to or lower than their rank is capable of being controlled by the user.

Name: Battle Sense
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges

Description: Coming from their sheer love of combat along with their fighting ability, the Kugeki have created a sixth sense for finding battles. Basically the Kugeki are capable of tracking a completely watching a fight as if they were there, but depending on how far the fight is away determines how vulnerable a Kugeki is doing this or not. If a battle is within their village then a Kugeki can watch the fight without doing anything, if a battle is within their land then a Kugeki must constantly have their eyes closed to watch the battle, if a battle is within another land then the Kugeki must remain perfectly still to watch the battle.

Name: Static Surge
Classification: Ninjutsu (Static Grind Only)
Rank: C-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Varies (Upon Vela Field)

Description: Keeping the same concept of his Static Grind, Jikei will take it a step further by adding more chakra when needed, which the added chakra will allow the particles to be seen by others but them having the resemblance of fireflies. This addition of more chakra will cause the particles to release electrical surges; if the particles are touching a person will electrocute them with damage equal to Jikei’s rank. These surges also serve the purpose of cutting off the electrical signals in part of the person’s body, making that body part unable to be moved for one post, these particles cannot stop movement in the person’s head.

Name: Forced Stop
Classification: Ninjuts
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Through the process of forcibly stopping the release of the particles from his body, Jikei has rerouted that energy to his lightning jutsus increasing their damage by 1-rank. But doing this will completely stop Jikei from using anything related to his Particle Aura. Upon stopping this jutsu, it will take 3 posts for Jikei’s particles to become active again.

Everything seems fine. Approved

Name: Time Trial
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description: Upon the completion of a Luminous Glyph, not the activation, Jikei will purposely keep the Glyph from activating. This prolonged time will allow the chakra to stabilize no a greater level than if it is immediately activated, to the point that for every 3 posts the chakra cost for the Glyphs is reduced by 1-rank.

When used through the Script, due to the time limit being removed, for every 3 posts that Jikei doesn’t activate a Glyph, the chakra cost for when he does activate a Glyph will be reduced by 1-rank. These chakra reductions do stack, but the count restarts after a Glyph has been used.

Name: Boundary Max
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description: During the activation of a Luminous Glyph, by sending another Magnetic Denkou Chain into the ground and spreading it across a wider range than the currently active Luminous Glyph. Jikei can cause the boundaries of the Glyph to change from its original to the new boundaries created from the new chain, the completion of this breaking the original boundaries barrier. This process does take one post before Jikei can change the boundary.

When used through the Script, when expanding the boundaries, the barrier will temporary go down until the new boundary is set, then it will reactivate.

Name: Forsaken Lightning
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: With the fact that Jikei has two types of lightning, he completely forsaken the ability to use normal lightning in exchange to solely using Gray Lightning. This allows Jikei’s chakra to be more focused towards his Gray Lightning, reducing the cost for Gray Lightning techs by 1-rank.

I see no problem, Approved!

Name: Relentless Sense
Classification: Taijutsu (Kugeki Only)
Rank: D-rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: For the Kugeki who relentlessly seek out combat, they are born with larger amounts of energy, not chakra, than others, which allows them to continuously fight without worry of being slowed exhaustion. A Kugeki can fight for a total of 50 posts, before they begin to suffer from physical exhaustion. This also carries over to the Kugeki being able to negate jutsus which lower tiers equal to their rank being used on them.

Name: Mental Web
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: B-rank
Class: Defensive (Passive when placed)
Range: Self

Description: With the placing of this fuinjutsu on a person’s body, they gain a defensive function on their brains that will literally “capture” mental based jutsus used upon them, stopping the mental based jutsu from affecting them. There is no true limit on how many mental based jutsus this fuinjutsu can “capture,” but the user can only capture mental based jutsus equal to their rank along with this fuinjutsu wasting chakra, equal to the mental based jutsu being “captured,” each time this fuinjutsu “captures” a mental based jutsu, the wasting of chakra will happen without the user’s discretion.

Name: Eyes of Zero
Classification: Taijutsu/Dojutsu (Kugeki Only)
Rank: D-rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: The eyes of the Kugeki are drastically more advanced than other beings, not in the case of distance rather the Kugeki eyes are unable to miss the slightest changes that take place in their field of vision. This does not make them capable of reacting to everything they see but they are capable of predicting anything as long as they can see it.

Hmm... A bit iffy on Mental Web, but approved unless said otherwise. Stated in cbox it requires touch to be placed on another... So, yeah. All approved

Name: Energy Selection
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Being a master of chakra control, Jikei has learned to select which types of his jutsus gain reductions in chakra and which ones don’t by circulating his chakra in different ways throughout his body. At the beginning of each fight Jikei must select one type of his jutsus, this type will have their chakra cost lowered by 1-rank, while all the others will have a chakra cost raised by 1-rank, this selection cannot be changed throughout the topic.

Name: Script Read
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary/Passive
Range: Short

Description: Taking the basic application of Script, Jikei has slightly expanded on it by adding to its formula. With the added formula, Script is now capable of completely reading any formula based jutsu Jikei touches, the read allowing him to know just what said formula based jutsu does. This occurrence does happen instantly upon Jikei either touching the person in which the formula based jutsu is attached to or the formula based jutsu itself.

Name: Luminous Glyph - Armament Revamp
Classification: Barrier Ninjutsu/Ninjutsu
Rank: C-rank (Chakra cost varies)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description: Placing a weapon on the ground Jikei will created a glyph around it, Jikei being within the glyph or not doesn’t matter. Once the glyph has been created by wasting chakra, equivalent to that of the weapon’s rank, Jikei is capable of permanently altering the appearance of the weapon within the glyph. By wasting an additional amount of chakra, equivalent to that of the weapon’s rank, Jikei can add a non-elemental ability to the weapon that he altered. With the addition of others into the glyphs boundaries, Jikei can borrow their chakra, lowering the cost by 1-rank per person, but this must be done by dual training for a B-rank, this rule also applies if Jikei wants to alter the appearances of another’s weapon. If Jikei is altering a weapon for another and they want a non-elemental ability added on, then it must be done by a dual training for a A-rank. The boundaries of the glyph is a basic barrier that cannot be destroyed unless the glyph is destroyed, but once the weapon in question has been altered the barrier will instantly fall.