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PostSubject: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime24th March 2019, 7:34 am

Supplementary Stuff:

Vortex Leg:


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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime24th March 2019, 9:07 am

Ripple Step - This is a superfluous technique for two reasons: all pure Pirates are capable of learning Speed, Strength, Defense and Reaction, you aren't restricted by what your race can learn, and strength is capable of doing this naturally without making a technique for it.

Great Blue - This should be named "Relative Sensory - Great Blue". The Blood Price will be 3 D and it will be taken every Turn (so each of your own posts).

Sea Dancer - Seeing as its based on Ripple Step you might want to make a few tweaks to it.

Vortex Leg - Being able to hinder Devil Fruit users is a big deal, especially considering some of the effects the Sea can have (one can literally kill people). So in order to do so, you'll need to draw water directly from the sea in question (must be touching it; can't be used in Sky or Rift). The chart should go:
Movement Speed - Water Materia Gathered per PT (From Sea)
D - D (N/A)
C - 3 D (D)
B - C (2 D)
A - B (3 D)
S - A (4 D)

All - Just for uniformity all pirates use "Bounty" in place of rank for technique charts.
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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime24th March 2019, 9:36 am

Ah kk. Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime26th March 2019, 9:39 pm

Due to the function of Pirate Tiers, I would recommend something more along the lines of this for the technique:
I would also recommend a name change to "Aqua Style Swimming: Sea Dancer", but that's up to you tbh.:
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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime3rd April 2019, 1:32 pm

Thanks & edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime5th April 2019, 10:08 am

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime7th April 2019, 5:49 am

Vortex Leg:

Abyssal Game:

Aqua Style:


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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime12th April 2019, 11:51 am

Okay so all of your Vortex Leg techniques have to be Beast Art/Taijutsu. This is because Aqua Style Beast Arts have set ranges either Self,Mid or Long. So that’s a general correction you need to make. Now for the focused ones.

Vortex Leg:

Abyssal Game:

Aqua style:
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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime1st February 2020, 1:49 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Azure Waves [Durzo Techs]   Azure Waves [Durzo Techs] Icon_minitime1st February 2020, 9:15 pm

Approved
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