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 |  Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech  12th May 2013, 4:39 pm | |
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Delicate Thrust Style: Improved Sealing
Classification: Fuinjutsu/Taijutsu
Rank: B-SSS rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Touch
Description: This requires that "Co-Ordinate Delicate thrusts" be used. This allows the seals on Sayaka's fingers to seal away chakra equal to 1-rank above her rank upon touch. This is a direct improvement to "DTS Style: Five-Fingered Jab".
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech 12th May 2013, 4:46 pm | |
| ok the tech its self is fine just some minor edits need to be made and I need you to realize something really important about this.
Delicate Thrust Style: Five-Fingered Jab
Delicate Thrust Style: Five-Finger Burst Rush
Delicate Thrust Style: Improved Sealing
All three of these need to be changed to Fuinjutsu/Taijutsu.
Delicate Thrust Style: Improved Sealing should be B-SSS
Finally realize each time you seal away a person's chakra it costs chakra as well. | |
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Mist
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| | Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech 12th May 2013, 4:49 pm | |
| Umm no... the seals being formed on the fingers are formed with "Co-Ordinate Delicate Thrusts" which is a fuinjutsu tech that forms the seals on her fingers. What would be the point of sealing away their chakra if I was using the same amount each time I sealed it? | |
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech 12th May 2013, 5:23 pm | |
| you wouldn't loose the same amount as they would, as your newest tech would drain a rank higher than you are but costing only a B rank.
In what view would it be fair for every touch you make at Jonin to instantly seal away an S rank amount of chakra with zero draw backs at all? Combined in with the fact that you move at SS by passive effect and you are tipping the scales at an extreme level. So sry no not approving it to allow you to seal at no draw backs. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech 12th May 2013, 5:41 pm | |
| OH, I see what your saying, okay then, that's fair. I edited them all | |
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Meimu
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| | Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech 12th May 2013, 5:47 pm | |
| mmk your good as long as you understand it'll cost you as well. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech 24th June 2013, 6:31 pm | |
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DTS: Illusory Fist
Classification: Fighting Style (Sig)
Rank: C-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Touch
Description: Using Sayaka fighting style, in which seals are formed on her fingertips, she uses them as a medium for genjutsu. This involves touching someone with the seal and sealing a genjutsu upon them. Since the genjutsu is sealed upon the target, they cannot break out of the genjutsu with Pain, they can however still break out of it with Kai and other means, as well as through the use of unsealing techniques, however the unsealing technique must be at least 1-rank higher than the genjutsu being used in conjunction with this style.
Fuinjutsu Nullify
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: A-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: touch
Description: Sayaka is so skilled in fuinjutsu that she can target a specific seal in someone or herself and, through touch, can inject her chakra directly into it. The chakra works specifically to break down the seal, and it works for A-rank and bellow seals, but it can be used for S-rank and below seals as long as they are herself, as it is easier to target seals when they are inside her, and not other people. This cannot, however, be used for unsealing bijuu related seals.
Co-Ordinate Creature Reversal
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: A-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short
Description: This sealing jutsu is used in cunjunction with Zagan. It makes it so that when any of the creatures created by Zagan dies, they release a Co-ordinate cube around themselves, sealing away anything near them as they die. This can also be used while the creature's are alive, as a kamikaze type move. The type of co-ordinate cube is up to Sayaka, but it will costs equal chakra to that type of co-ordinate cube, this can only be used with A-rank and below Co-ordinate cubes however.
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| | Subject: Re: Sayaka's Tech 24th June 2013, 6:55 pm | |
| Zzzz Co-Ordinate Seal reversal make it specifically for Co-Ordinate based fuinjutsu and nothing else.
Creature Reversal Raise it's rank to A. That should cover the various types of Co-Ordinate based fuinjutsu up to A-rank anything more and you'll have to make specific techniques for them.
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