Mihawk's Jutsu Thread

Alritey Then, first try playing differently all together..i hope it doesnt turn out too bad.


Name: Counter Shooting "Fighting Style"
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank:C-rank
Class: Defensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description: This is a defensive shooting fighting  style that Mihawk has created on his own.  This style is actually more focused on the power of the fired projectile(S) when it is being  faced up against another jutsu that is classified as offensive. If that happens,  his Defense class Kyūjutsu will be Raised one rank higher than its current.  This is also a gateway to even more unorthodox methods of counter shooting.  

Name: Backing Force
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank:C-rank
Class: supplementary
Range:N/A
Description: Mihawk puts a fuinjutsu seal on an arrow or projectile. Then when the arrow hit a certain speed the chakra will be released as a burst, increasing the speed by one rank higher than its current.  This goes for kyujutsu as well.


Name: Rapid Fire
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank:D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range:N/A
Description: This is a technique that was used by the archers in the old days.  Rapid fire was a training method, where the archers would shoot  one thousand arrows to fully improve the amount of arrows they could fire per post. This training method requires a 1000 word training post, and the results would be depending on the speed tiers they possess. If they contain strength tiers,  equivalent tho those speed tiers, the  amount they could fire is doubled.  The user can also substitute chakra for strength tiers, paying the chakra cost amount instead if they doo ot contain it.

Examples:  C rank strength and speed- 15 arrows becomes 30
If they dont have strength tiers and want to double the amount... they could just pay C rank chakra instead.  This also counts towards Kinjutsu and the amont of arrows  each technique requires.

D Rank - 10 Arrows
C Rank- 15 Arrows
B Rank- 20 Arrows
A Rank- 25 Arrows
S RanK- 30 Arrows


Name: Crystal Arrows
Classification:Ninjutsu
Rank:D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range:N/A
Description: This is one of the techniques that Mihawk uses to gain his ammo. By paying D rank chakra, he could construct 5 crystal arrows. This is mainly his perferred choice for ammo. It also has a small hook to attach other applications like bomb tags and pellets. This is connected to his natural ability as a member of the suisho clan, and the amount of  arrows produced is increased by five depending on his rank as a ninja.

D: 10
C: 20
B: 30
A: 40
S: 50

Name: Argo-Archery  "Fighting Style"
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank:C-rank
Class: Offensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description: This is a offensive shooting fighting  style that Mihawk has created on his own.  This style is actually more focused on the power of the fired projectile(S) when it is being  faced up against another jutsu that is classified as defensive. If that happens,  his offensive class Kyūjutsu will be Raised one rank higher than its current.  This is also a gateway to even more piercing fast shooting techniques

Name: Mold Breaker "Agro Archery needed"
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank:A-rank
Class: Offensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description: The user launches an arrow moving at A rank speed and power at the opponent. B rank and lower defensives will be obliterated instantly without effecting the trajectory.

Name:  Delayed Spartan Rain- Hidden shadow of the arrow "Agro Archery needed" Any amount of arrows he has left.
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank: B-rank
Class: Offensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description:  The user launches a barrage of arrow upwards that would go to the sky. These arrows would then come down heading straight for the opponent at the next post, with their speed being increased by one rank as theyre heading down.

Name:  Double Shot- Hidden shadow of the arrow "Agro Archery needed" X2 arrows Needed
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank: B-rank
Class: Offensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description:  The user launches two arrows back to back

Name:  Full Slavo- Flashback "Agro Archery needed"
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Offensive/supplementary
Range:Short-mid-long
Description:  The user now has the ability to chain his kyujutsu, and flashback it. The user will use the momentum  that was gained from the kyujutsu and fire off the rest of the rounds in his possession with quick sucession that would contain the same speed and power.

Example: Mihawk fires an A rank speed and power kyujutsu move, Mihawk can fire the rest of his ammo , with each arrow flying at A rank speed and power.


Name:  Backlash "Counter Shooting needed"
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank: A-rank
Class: Defensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description:  The user will fire off his arrow with so much force, that it will cut through the air and create a shockwave around it that moves at A rank speed and power.  B rank and lower offensive jutsu will be  knocked back  straight at the opponent, using the  backlash as an amplifier to increase it to the same power and speed as the kyujutsu technique.

Too tired to post on all of them but I'm just going to say Speed=Distance is a no. You cannot have a D-Rank that caps at SSS-Rank, S maybe but not SSS. Also, those distances are far too short, I'd maybe give you those distances for an S or SS-Rank. For a D-Rank, you're thinking of adding at least fifty to sixty feet to each of them. So yeah, the others... I guess I don't have much to say, the first you should increase to a C-Rank though.

made the distance 15 feet if thats enough, or i could go by 20's.

Also adjusted the tech

Added rapid fire

Counter shooting - make note each defensive jutsu born from this style will need to have a specific way in which they counter so the defense is increased, this tech will be monitored but approval able

distance speed - unless something has a constant backing force speed will decrease as distance grows

feet of icarus - not fuinjutsu

palm of icarus - not fuinjutsu

rapid fire - depends on your speed not rank

No i only put the word fuin because...well.... its basically a magic seal in this sense..not really sealing things..remmeber like the powere rangers mystic force..they had seals too but magic and lazers came out of them... so its like..just magc tatoos think of it that way

i know what it is, i used to heavily abuse seals, thats why i can say just because it has a seal doesn't make it a fuinjutsu so take the fuinjutsu part out

added some more stuff

Backing Force – Add how much chakra must be sealed into the seal and a set certain speed

Rapid Fire – You cannot have in the jutsu that by saying wasting chakra you can gain a strength teir, it must be a separate jutsu that allows you to gain a strength tier. All the references to strength tier within this jutsu can stay however because strength can affect the technique.

Argo-Archery – Same as with counter shooting when making the techs for this, you'll have to be real specific on how the increase is granted.

Mold Breaker – how fast the arrow moves is dependent on your speed, just because its an A-rank tech doens't mean it auto moves at A-rank speeds, at least with this technique, so edit. Piercing is granted by strength unless you have a different way of doing it. Defenses will not be obliterated rather they will be pierced through.

Delayed Spartain Rain – Again speed is granted by speed tier not rank of jutsu, power is also granted by speed. The second part of that jutsu, i'll give you that since it is real.

Double Shot – Same as above, speed tier = speed of arrow and power, strength tier = piercing of arrow. No obliterating only piercing through.

Full Slavo – I understand what you are aiming for, but give it a better explanation than that

Backlash – speed tier = speed of arrow and power, strength tier = piercing of arrow, no knocking back defenses unless you can give a better reason, I.e. a normal arrow won't provide knockback

Defensive Curving – explain that better because you explained in no way why it protects, whatever it protects for one post

Name: Rapid Fire
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank:D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range:N/A
Description: This is a technique that was used by the archers in the old days.  Rapid fire was a training method, where the archers would shoot  one thousand arrows to fully improve the amount of arrows they could fire per post. This training method requires a 1000 word training post, and the results would be depending on the speed tiers they possess. If they contain strength tiers,  equivalent tho those speed tiers, the  amount they could fire is doubled.  

Examples:  C rank strength and speed- 15 arrows becomes 30
This also counts towards Kinjutsu and the amont of arrows  each technique requires.

D Rank - 10 Arrows
C Rank- 15 Arrows
B Rank- 20 Arrows
A Rank- 25 Arrows
S RanK- 30 Arrows

Name: Crystal Arrows
Classification:Ninjutsu
Rank:C-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range:N/A
Description: This is one of the techniques that Mihawk uses to gain his ammo. By paying D rank chakra, he could create 1 crystal arrow. This is mainly his perferred choice for ammo. It also has a small hook to attach other applications like bomb tags and pellets. This is connected to his natural ability as a member of the suisho clan. It also has the abllity to split into arrow shards depending on how fast the arrow is moving. For every 1 rank its moving above d rank, the value of the arrow increases.

Shoots 1 arrow at C rank peed, that arrow splits into two.


Name:  Delayed Spartan Rain- Hidden shadow of the arrow *Any amount*
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Offensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description:  The user launches a barrage of arrow upwards that would go to the sky. These arrows would then come down heading straight for the opponent at the next post, with their speed being increased by one rank as theyre heading down.

Name:  Basic Shot
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Offensive
Range:Short-mid-long
Description:  The user launches an arrow at the opponent

Name:  Full Slavo
Classification:Kyūjutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Offensive/supplementary
Range:Short-mid-long
Description:  The user now has the ability to chain his kyujutsu, using the momentum  that was gained from the kyujutsu and fire off the rest of the rounds in his possession with quick sucession that would contain the same speed and power.


Name: Chakra Enhanced Strikes
Classification: Taijutsu, Fighting Style
Rank: D-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short Range

Description: This is a technique where the user focuses chakra into their hands and feet using precise chakra control and releases it with pinpoint timing, which greatly enhances their strength. The strength value  is entirely dependent on the amount of chakra that user can focus. The amount of strength is completely dependent on the amount of chakra  put in for the strike. This jutsu can also be chained to other taijutsu moves.

Example: D Rank Chakra for D Rank strength.

Name: Flowing Crystal Seal -Runic Carved- *Flowing Crystal Needed*
Classification: Kekkai Genkai, Fuinjutsu
Rank: A-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: n/a
Description: Using the Runic Carving, Mihawk carved the necessary rune to  have his blessed blood contain the properties of the Flowing crystal seal fuinjutsu, and any contact with his blood will have the same effect as well. Flowing Crystal Seal Fuinjutsu is a combination of Mihawk's kekkei Genkai and his fuinjutsu, sealing away A rank or lower lightning,wind and explosions  based jutsu on contact. An individual that has been inflicted will not be able to access those  elements and have it sealed away. This seal would also effect any kg elements containing one of those elements. It can only be unsealed by an unsealing technique equivalent in rank to it. Lower ranks will be ineffective and higher rank unsealing techniques will also unseal it. This seal effects the target permanently unless unsealed.


Name: Glowing Crystal Seal -Runic Carved- *Glowing Crystal Neeed*
Classification: Kekkai Genkai, Fuinjutsu
Rank: A-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: n/a
Description: Using the Runic Carving, Mihawk carved the necessary rune to  have his blessed blood contain the properties of the Flowing crystal seal fuinjutsu, and any contact with his blood will have the same effect as well. Glowing Crystal Seal Fuinjutsu is a combination of Mihawk's kekkei Genkai and his fuinjutsu, sealing away A rank or lower  fire, lightning and plasma  based jutsu on contact. An individual that has been inflicted will not be able to access those  elements and have it sealed away. This seal would also effect any kg elements containing one of those elements.  It can only be unsealed by an unsealing technique equivalent in rank to it. Lower ranks will be ineffective and higher rank unsealing techniques will also unseal it. This seal effects the target permanently unless unsealed.

Name: Chakra Weakening Seal Seal -Runic Carved-
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: n/a
Description: Using the Runic Carving, Mihawk carved the necessary rune to  have his blessed blood contain the properties of the Chakra Weakening seal fuinjutsu, and any contact with his blood will have the same effect as well. Chakra Weakening Seal Fuinjutsu is a seal that weakens Chakra based jutsu by one rank upon contact, treating them as one rank lower than their current.

Name: Hakagure's Secret Taijutsu- Earthbound *Earth Chakra Needed*
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary, Defensive
Range: n/a
Description: This is a taijutsu that has been passed down through the history of the Hakagure ninja that contains earth chakra. Due to their location, the Hakagure ninja has mastered a taijutsu style that involves them being one with the earth. The user can use the earth as an extension of their senses, gaining the natural ability to "see" through every tiny vibration that passes through the ground and sensing the magnetic forces, knowing what happens around them and pinpointing the location of other. Users of this taijutsu style can also react to actions one rank higher than their current  highest speed tier they possess for effective dodging and movement basic movement as long as they have a physical body part  touching the ground. This taijutsu skill is useless withoiut any connection to the earth whatsoever.

Possess  B rank speed tiers, Earthbound would increase and  can allow him to move at A rank speed normally if any of his body part is touching the ground. When it comes to the reaction, they can only react if the target is on the ground, say the target is in the air, then they are not able to react.




Name: Self Body Puppet- Forced Movement
Classification: Kugujutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: n/a
Description: This is a high-level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of chakra controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of countless chakra . By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.


Name: Assisted KAi
Classification: Kinjutsu (Yoroi Only)
Rank:D-rank
Class:Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This involves the yori's living weapon to assist the yori to use kai. If the Yori is unable to use kai physically, the weapon can do it for him, using the yori's chaka or take it in the form of a blood price. Can only be done if Dual Life has been used.

Crystal Arrows – D-rank chakra = 1 arrow not 5

Chakra Enhanced Strikes – The amount of chakra that can be wasted is not dependent on your rank, this technique solely relies on the amount of chakra wasted that is all

Glowing Crystal Seal – higher ranked unsealing will also unseal it, take out the part that it becomes unable to be unsealed if unsealed by a higher ranked

Earthbound – they can only react if the target is on the ground, say the target is in the air, then they are not able to react

Forced Movement – its a Kugujutsu

Assisted Kai – Can only be done if Dual Life has been used, add that in

K edited

approved

Name: Ultimate Shield *Exclusive*
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: A-Rank
Class: Supplementary, Defensive
Range: Self

Description: Mihawk has taken a different approach from the original crystal skeleton technique. Instead of coating his skeleton, Mihawk mutates the carbon atoms in his body into a transparent crystal structure. The result of this technique will have his body   turned nearly into a nearly indestructible crystal substance that hardens in response to physical trauma.  This grants Mihawk A rank defense.

*Additional addons can be placed depending on the jutsu... like my future Ghost Crystal XD*

Refrence Videos So you can get a feel for it

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhMsboqMMzs

And

*Couldnt find a vid that wasnt an AMV* Greed from FMA

It leaves Mihawk in a coma for 5 days, how and why. I cannot really see why it would do that but if it does is it after the technique is done, like after topic Mihawk is put in a coma or is the coma a pre-req for the tech. If it is a condition for the tech, Mihawk will be in a coma for 5 days IRL, meaning he will unusable for the set amount of time.

Concerning this technique containing flowing and/or glowing crystal. Those will count as separate jutsus

Concerning Blood Crystal, that will also be a separate jutsu

Just to say, there's something I really don't like about this technique is that it seems, just because of the wording, to be of the wrong Chakra Nature. There is already a Diamond Release that does in fact involve the use of diamonds so I suggest you change the wording of your technique to make it obvious that it is Crystal Release and NOT Diamond Release.

If i can bypass the coma, thats great if you see no need for it. And i fixed the wording

Zzzz so your body itself is reinforced to A-rank levels thanks to crystal release, mmkay sounds legit just a fair warning reconstructing your body using Crystal Release will likewise make you weak to whatever crystal release is weak to. So be wary of that otherwise your good.

Name: Crystal Pathway System *Ultimate Shield needed*
Classification:Ninjutsu
Rank:B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range:N/A
Description: Once Mihawk changes his carbon atoms into a more crystaline substance, he is now able to a Crystal Pathway system. Simply put they serve the same function for Crystal as blood vessels do for blood. This proceeds with the Natural production of B ranks worth of crystal which goes more into chakra control and support for his crystal techniques. Mihawk's supplementary crystal techniques B rank or lower will have no cost.

*Basically if im producing as much crystal internally like the chakra pathway system with chakra and blood vessels with blood, it brings in more chakra control over my techniques since my body already produces it. your probably gonna nerf this but is it possible?*


Name: Dead Mode- Okori No Izami
Classification: Kyujutsu (Yoroi Only)
Rank:D-rank
Class:Supplementary
Range: Varies.
Description: Plenty years of training has allowed Mihawk to achieve his own dead mode to suit his fighting style, and melds his mind with his living weapon Izami. When this fighting style is initiated the users pupils completely disappear and their eyes become a pure white. The weapon itself becomes semi tangible as it gains the ability to affect Entity, bypass other physical objects and can even bypass Defense Tiers to deal mental + physical damage to opponents. The Draw back of this kyujutsu style is that it can only be maintained for a limited time starting at 10 posts for academy students, 15 posts for genin, 20 posts for chunin, 25 posts for Tobetsu Jonin, 30 posts for Jonin, 35 posts for Medical Nin, 40 posts for Hunter Nin and finally 50 posts for Sannin.


Name: Dead Bow Mode- Aftershock God's End
Classification: Kyujutsu
Rank: A rank
Class:Passive
Range:Mid Range-Long Range

Description: Once this technique has been mastered all arrows launched by the user leave trails of destruction in their wake which deals damage to anything within 3 feet of the arrow's trail. Objects which are caught in the trail are sliced up by an unseen vortex which is a combination of the rotation speed of the arrows, and the spin of the vacuums they create. Attacks that come within a 10 foot radius of the arrow are redirected as long as they are below the speed that the arrow is travelling.

*Damage is usually dependent on the speed of the arrows when it comes to kyujutsu

Ultimate Shield – Approved

Crystal Pathway System – I can butcher this tech easily, starting with why does it increase chakra control, if anything it seems it would push more chakra into your jutsus. Anyway its not chakra control, you didn't increase your control over your chakra in anyway, but what you are doing is decreasing the amount of chakra it takes to form crystal. Regardless they don't allow jutsus which lower chakra cost anymore so its a no.

Dead Mode – I'm guessing your weapon is a bow, in which okay thats cool, Approved

Aftershock God's End – The redirection, shorten it to 5 feet

One thing I need to interject is that Aftershock God's End is an almost blatant rip off of the Cypher exclusive Aftershock Shot.

Name: Aftershock Shot
Classification: Kyujutsu (Cypher Only)
Rank:S rank
Class:Passive
Range:Mid Range-Long Range

Description: This is a combination of Kyujutsu as well as the displacement aura that all Cypher possess to release a unique set of arrows from bows. Once this technique has been mastered all arrows launched by the user leave trails of destruction in their wake which deal S-rank damage to anything within 3 feet of the arrow's trail. Objects which are caught in the trail are sliced up by an unseen vortex which is a combination of the rotation speed of the arrows, the spin of the vacuums they create and the displacement aura of the Cyper being stretched out significantly. On the downside if this technique is mastered the user is unable to use any of the special Displacement taijutsu.

Name: Dead Bow Mode- Aftershock God's End
Classification: Kyujutsu
Rank: A rank
Class:Passive
Range:Mid Range-Long Range

Description: Once this technique has been mastered all arrows launched by the user leave trails of destruction in their wake which deals damage to anything within 3 feet of the arrow's trail. Objects which are caught in the trail are sliced up by an unseen vortex which is a combination of the rotation speed of the arrows, and the spin of the vacuums they create. Attacks that come within a 5 foot radius of the arrow are redirected as long as they are below the speed that the arrow is travelling.

*Damage is usually dependent on the speed of the arrows when it comes to kyujutsu

Change the tech so it doesn't look like an exact copy of Aftershock Shot