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PostSubject: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime10th September 2012, 1:35 pm

Name: Flesh Release: Regeneration
Classification: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: S-SS (Healing Varies proportional to chakra.)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: The Kurogane clan member can focus their Flesh Release chakra into their own body to heal damage from jutsu and attacks up to one rank above their own. The chakra cost for this is equal to the amount of damage being healed. Also, a Kurogane member can come back from the dead once per topic using this jutsu. However, if this is done then the Kurogane member's chakra is drained completely for the rest of the topic, even if they had full chakra to begin with. The Kurogane must have died during that topic. They can not be taken from one topic to another to be revived.

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Name: Flesh Release: Afterstrike [signature]
Classification: Kenjutsu/Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Taking the Afterstrike jutsu further and combining it with his Flesh Release kekkei tota, Tetsu has developed a seemingly weak, but actually devastating technique. By focusing the chakra within a certain spot of his body or within his weapon, Tetsu will deliver a weak blow. This damage done by this technique is only C rank, but it is capable of bypassing the Defense skill and moves at a speed of equal rank to Tetsu's Strength. When used against a being of pure chakra it deals B tier worth of damage. When used against someone with Defense tiers, it D rank tier worth of damage. This temporary disables the use of chakra based attacks for 3 posts.

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Name: Flesh Release: Fleshling Seed
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: A (Damage varies)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This technique was created by Tetsu as an offshoot of Blood Release: Target. By using this technique in conjunction with an attack, Tetsu places a seed of his own living flesh within the opponent when his attack hits. This causes them to take damage each post equal to the damage that the attack did. However, this technique does not work on beings of pure chakra. The speed of this attack is equal to the user's Speed Tier.

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Name: Flesh Release: Imperfect Clone
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self (Initial), Varies

Description: The Kurogane clan must use their own flesh and blood as a sacrifice, normally used in conjunction with Flesh Release: Regeneration. They must cut off a limb of their body and infuse it with their Flesh Release energy. That limb then grows into a full sized copy with the same jutsu as the original, as well as the same tiers as the user at the time of creation. However, they are can only use jutsu up to the rank of the user's level. The clones possess enough chakra to pull off 5 jutsu of their creators rank.

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Name: Flesh Release: Rejuvenation
Classification: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: SS
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: The Kurogane clan member can revive a fallen person from death only once per topic at the cost of both the users and the target's chakra. The person must have died during that topic to be brought back, meaning that they can't be taken from one topic to another to be revived again. The user can only revive people equal to or below their own rank. A persn can only ever be revived once by the same Kurogane clan member.

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Name: Blood Release: Blood Regeneration
Classification: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A (Replenishing proportional with chakra)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: The Kurogane Clan member can convert their chakra into blood cells by making the chakra mimic the targets blood. This is mostly used to replace lost blood in order to survive longer. The amount of blood gained is equal to the amount of chakra lost.

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Name: Blood Release: Sinking Grave
Classification: Ninjutsu/Combination Jutsu
Rank: A Rank
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: This jutsu covers the ground in a thin, yet slick layer of blood within a 50 meter radius from the user. The blood/chakra clings on any chakra source that comes in contact with it that is not the user's and slows it down by 1 Tier of Speed.

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Name: Life Release: Growing Pains
Classification: Ninjutsu/Combination Jutsu
Rank: C-B Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long

Description:The user plants a bone of their own within the ground, immediately growing that bone back. After three posts the bone has spread throughout a fifteen meter radius and reacts to the opponent's chakra. Whenever they step within this range the hidden bones will sprout out of the ground as spikes and attempt to skewer the opponent. They are capable of destroying C rank defenses, dealing C rank offensive damage, and move at C rank Speeds. It costs B Rank Chakra.

If Blood Release: Sinking Grave is used first then Life Release: Growing Pains will only cost C Rank chakra and it can destroy B rank defense, deal C Rank offensive damage and move at B Rank speeds. Also, it's range becomes the same as the range of Blood Release: Sinking Grave.

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Name: Flesh Release: Matter World
Classification: Ninjutsu/Combination Jutsu
Rank: S Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: The Kurogane clan member infuses their own flesh with the ground, becoming aware of all within a 50 meter radius that come in contact with it. Through this they can create eyes, ears, or mouths within the entire area for quick communication or spying. This will cost them D rank Chakra.

If with Blood Release: Shallow Grave is used after Life Release: Matter World, both of their ranges are increased to a 100 meter radius. Blood Release: Shallow Grave will now lower the speed of physical objects by 1 rank and things with a source of chakra by 2 ranks. Blood Release: Shallow Grave's Chakra Cost is increased by 1 Rank.

If Life Release: Growing Pains is used after Flesh Release: Matter World then its tiers are increased by a 1 rank and has its chakra cost lowered by 1 Rank.

If the jutsu are used in order of Flesh Release: Matter World, Blood Release: Shallow Grave and then Life Release: Growing Pains then the world within this ranged is changed into actual flesh, blood and bone. Trees become bones with blood dripping from its branches, the earth becomes actual flesh. Blood Release: Shallow Grave drops the speed of chakra sources and physical objects by 2 ranks, Life Release: Growing Pains' tiers are increased by 2 Ranks and the total range is a 100 meter radius. The world actually transforms as the user travels, being the epicenter. The user is capable of knowing all that is within their range and can create eyes, ears or mouths within this range in order to spy or communicate long distances. In order to obtain this, the user must pay an extra cost of B rank chakra for the total fusion of the three jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime10th September 2012, 1:57 pm

Name: Blood Release: Adrenaline Rush
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: The Kurogane is capable of controlling the release of Adrenaline into their blood stream and direct it throughout their body. Having complete control over their Adrenaline Flow allows them to move at 1 Rank higher Speed capping out at S-rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime10th September 2012, 2:10 pm

Name: Blood Release: Dissolving Blood Whip
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Mid Range

Description: The kurogane creates a whip of hot adrenaline rushed blood capable of extending up to twenty five feet. This whip moves at speeds equal to the user Speed Tier and deals damage equal to the user's Strength Tier. With each strike the whip leaves a trail of blood where it hits. This blood starts dissolving what it hits through heat, dealing D Rank damage per post. This effect stacks, meaning getting hit twice will deal 2 D Ranks (1 C Rank) worth of damage per post while getting hit 4 times will deal 4 D Ranks (2 C Ranks = 1 B Rank) worth of damage per post.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime10th September 2012, 3:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime15th September 2012, 1:36 pm

Name: Flesh Release: Flesh Transfer
Classification: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: SS
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: The user has the ability to rapidly transfer flesh from the body of opponents or allies to heal themselves of injuries, the victims on the other hand will receive damage equivalent to the lethality of the injuries sustained by the user. Meaning while the user heals themselves of a limb the victim will in turn lose that same limb. Making this a feared technique however this is without drawbacks as its range makes it much easier to combat as long as the opponent doesn't make physical contact with the Kurogane, as this technique requires physical contact to use.



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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime15th September 2012, 1:40 pm

change the classification to Medical Ninjutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime15th September 2012, 1:42 pm

Done. Was hoping to make it an advanced form of Blood Release: Draining Blood. But, oh well. Lol. It's changed.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime15th September 2012, 1:46 pm

Flesh Transfer is Approved, and if Draining Blood heals it needs to be changed to Medical Ninjutsu as well
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime16th September 2012, 3:48 pm

Name: Dance of the Willow
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-S
Class: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short

Description: The user grows several long bone blades from their body for use as weapons. There isn't any set form for the Willow Dance. Just like a willow that is shaken by the wind, the opponents attacks are simply parried and countered. Uncharacteristic of a willow, the hardened bones puncture and damage the opponents body. This dance form is incredibly acrobatic, using spins, charges, and long sweeping slashes to make the strikes more effective and to evade opponents' counter strikes. The user can also extend his bones to attack his opponents without having to adjust his own movement.

Dance of the Willow is capable of countering C Rank and below physical attacks. This jutsu's power ranks up with the user, capping at S rank becoming capable of countering S rank and below physical attacks when the user is at S Rank. When countering is successful, the user's next Taijutsu or Kenjutsu attack's speed is treated as 1 Tier higher. This cannot be activated at the same time as Dance of the Larch.

Name: Dance of the Larch
Classification:
Rank: C-S
Class: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short

Description: From the body, several bones pop out all at once. The stronger the opponent's physical attack, the more powerful the counter attack is, dealing severe damage. The sudden defense, combined with the needle-like bones high killing ability, makes way for a technique which potential his high for battle. The bones can be used to block or trap an opponent's strikes. In addition to being an unwelcome surprise for opponents, it makes them basically untouchable at close range. If an opponent would start to get close to him, he would start to spin rapidly slashing the foe in multiple areas of their body.

This jutsu is capable of countering C rank and below physical attacks. The jutsu's power increases with the uer's rank, becoming capable of countering S rank and below phyical attacks when the user is at S Rank. A successful counter causes the user to be able to strike back with a Taijutsu or Kenjutsu attack with 1 Tier higher Strength. This cannot be activated at the same time as Dance of the Willow.


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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime16th September 2012, 4:07 pm

Name: Ten-Finger Drilling Bullet
Classification: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: C-S
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones of the user can be regenerated, the rate of fire from the user's arsenal is limitless. This jutsu is capable of moving at C rank speeds and breaking through C rank jutsu. This power grows with the user becoming capable of moving at S rank speeds and breaking through S rank jutsu when the user becomes S rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime16th September 2012, 4:19 pm

Camilla - Reaction Tiers dont give a speed boost, and it will not stop Reaction tiers the point of reaction tiers is to react so unless you move faster then them they can dodge, take the reaction teir part out

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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime17th September 2012, 2:35 pm

Name: Blood Price [Kurogane Only]
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Passive
Range: N/A

Description: The Kurogane is capable of using blood for their Blood Style Ninjutsu. This allows them to either use a Kinjutsu blood price for their Blood Style Ninjutsu or a chakra price for their Blood Style Ninjutsu, allowing their fighting to be diverse. With their Blood Manipulation passive, this can allow them to use blood other than their own for the blood price.

Name: Blood Style: Thin Blood
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S Rank [A Rank Chakra]
Class: Supplementary
Range: N/A

Description: By thinning the blade within his blood style jutsu to cause less wind resistance, Blood Style: Thin Blood is capable of speeding up all Blood Style jutsu's speed up to a rank equal to the rank of the user. However, if a jutsu already possesses speed tiers then they are not affected. This jutsu lasts for 10 posts at Academy Student, with an additional 5 posts added on per rank after Academy Student. Capping at 30 posts at Sannin.

Name: Blood Style: Blood Shield
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Defensive
Range: Short

Description: The Kurogane creates a round shield of blood to block incoming attacks. This jutsu is capable of blocking up to C rank and below jutsu.

Name: Blood Style: Spiral Blood Shield
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Defensive
Range: Short

Description: The Kurogane creates a round shield of blood. Unlike Blood Style: Blood Shield, Spiral Blood Shield spins, creating a mild vortex within the shield. This jutsu is capable of blocking B rank and below jutsu, as well as reflecting C rank and below jutsu.

Name: Blood Style: Blood Bullets
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: The Kurogane forms 15 small pellets of blood in front of their hands and fires it off in the direction they are pointing. This jutsu is capable of piercing C rank and below jutsu..

Name: Blood Style: Blood Arrows
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: The Kurogane forms 10 medium sized arrows of blood in front of their hands and fires it off in the direction they are pointing. This jutsu is capable of piercing B Rank and below jutsu.

Name: Blood Style: Blood Spears
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: The Kurogane forms 5 large spears of blood in front of their hands and fires it off in the direction they are pointing. This jutsu is capable of piercing A Rank and below jutsu.

Name: Blood Style: Blood Cannon
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: The Kurogane forms one large sphere of blood in front of their hands, similar in size to a small bijuu bomb, and fires it off in the direction they are pointing. This jutsu is capable of piercing S rank and below jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime17th September 2012, 2:50 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime17th September 2012, 3:13 pm

Name: Blood Style: Blood Mirage
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: B-S [B Rank Chakra]
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: The user generates a mirage of bloody mist that spreads over a fifty foot radius. Once inside this mist, all but the user is trapped inside of its genjutsu. The bloody mist creates mirages, causing the person to see human shadows moving around. If they attack the shadows then they will end up seeing that the person they attacked was the person they had been fighting, as that person will seemingly be laying there dying from the attack. If it gets to this point in the genjutsu then the person will be even more entwined within the genjutsu, making it tougher to break out of as the Genjutsu's power become's boosted to A rank.

After seeing the death, the person will find the bloody mist dissipating, though in reality it has not. After it has dissipated in their mind, they will find themselves alone in the area they were in. If they do not break out of the genjutsu at this point and attempt to leave that area, then they will become more entwined in the genjutsu, its power being boosted to S rank.

After the Genjutsu gets powered up by sinking further into the person's mind, the person will experience a dizzying mind spinning lurch before finding themselves in their village, the civilians laying around in bloody heaps all around the village. Hanging over the victim will be their family, half alive and asking them why they did this to them. They will start blaming the victim, saying this was all their fault.

The user must hold the seal to this genjutsu until the third stage. Once the third stage has been entered the user can release the seal. At stage 3 the genjutsu is locked in place. If the seal is released before stage three then the genjutsu is automatically broken.


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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime4th October 2012, 3:48 pm

Name: Blood Clot
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self/Short

Description: By using the basis of Blood Manipulation, a Kurogane is capable of concentrating the blood within their body into a single point in order to clot the blood and halt the blood flow in that area. This can be done for no price whatsoever, as they are merely halting the flow of blood within their body. However, at the cost of a C rank amount of blood, they are capable of taking their own blood and pushing it into the blood stream through a cut in another's body to halt the blood flow in that one area. This is used in order to stop bleeding and is so simple that even a non-medical nin is capable of doing it.

Name: Blood Style: Antidote [Sig]
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Tetsu has taken the natural Kurogane Immune System to another level. Taking the basis properties of the Kurogane's immune system of creating immunities to most most diseases, Tetsu has developed a way to create an antidote to a few poisons through a cycle within his blood. By withstanding a specific poison for 20 posts, Tetsu's body is capable of creating an antibody for the poison and neutralizes it. After the poison has been neutralized, the antibodies stay within his system and actually adapt to form the same version of the poison in order to keep their immunity cycle going even if they are never introduced to the poison again. This can only be done up to 3 types of poisons and it will only make him immune to jutsu consisting of the same poison up to his rank.

Poison Type
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Name: Blood Style: Poison Blood [Sig]
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: N/A

Description: Tetsu has taken his Antidote further. From the antibodies constantly reproducing the poison in order to maintain full immunity toward it, Tetsu has found a way to take the poison and focus it through his blood. This allows him to use the effects of the poison he has gained immunity to and focus it through his Blood Release Jutsu. However, the chakra or blood price of the jutsu are increased by 1 Rank when the poison addition has been made.

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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime4th October 2012, 9:33 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime20th October 2012, 9:04 am

Name: Increased Blood Supply
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: Kurogane, due to their kekkei genkai, are proficient in the use of blood style jutsu as well as kinjutsu. Due to the excessive amount of blood they use up in most of their jutsu their bodies have adapted to allow them higher reserves of blood within their body. Non-Awakened Kurogane possess a Blood Limit equivalent to that of Yoroi, while Awakened Kurogane possess a Blood Limit equivalent to that of Vanir.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime20th October 2012, 11:40 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime24th April 2013, 3:44 am

I'm posting here so it is easier to be found. Meimu. The jutsu is at the bottom of this topics first page
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime24th April 2013, 8:48 am

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Name: Blood Style: Blood Mirage
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: B-S [B Rank Chakra]
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: The user generates a mist of blood that spreads over a fifty meter radius. Once inside this mist, all but the user is trapped inside of its genjutsu. The bloody mist creates mirages, causing the person to see human shadows moving around. If they attack the shadows then they will end up seeing that the person they attacked was the person they had been fighting, as that person will seemingly be laying there dying from the attack. If it gets to this point in the genjutsu then the person will be even more entwined within the genjutsu, making it tougher to break out of as the Genjutsu's power become's boosted to A rank.

After seeing the death, the person will find the bloody mist dissipating, though in reality it has not. After it has dissipated in their mind, they will find themselves alone in the area they were in. If they do not break out of the genjutsu at this point and attempt to leave that area, then they will become more entwined in the genjutsu, its power being boosted to S rank.

After the Genjutsu gets powered up by sinking further into the person's mind, the person will experience a dizzying mind spinning lurch before finding themselves in their village, the civilians laying around in bloody heaps all around the village. Hanging over the victim will be their family, half alive and asking them why they did this to them. They will start blaming the victim, saying this was all their fault.

The user cannot move while holding this genjutsu, but if they manage to lure the person into the third stage, then the person will be forever stuck in the genjutsu world, unable to escape on their own and the user will no longer have to hold the genjutsu.


Mmmk, quoted it to move it up a bit. My issues with this tech is its a single cast genjutsu that is an AOE of 50m. Thats a huge range for an AOE genjutsu much less one like this. The chakra cost needs to at the very least be raised to A rank. The only reason I don't say S rank cost is because, the way its formed it needs a blood cost as well. At the very least an A-Rank of blood in addition to the chakra cost. So (A-Rank chakra & A-Rank blood). I know tetsu is like Isho and blood costs are basicly nothing, but it still needes it.

The next part of this is, how long does the blood mist stay in the air? Also if you plan on being able to use the blood mist in another way than to cause the genjutsu this needs to be uped to S-Rank chakra and needs to be altered to a Ninjutsu/Genjutsu, instead of just genjutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime24th April 2013, 2:20 pm

Hmm.... I see the problem... I didn't realize how this would coincide with my other jutsu when I first made it since I made it first... and the area it affects is rather large... Hmm... What if I lower it from 50 meters to 50 feet?

Also... The mist of blood can be done from ninjutsu because of my clan's chakra nature, blood release. It doesn't necessarily mean its real blood, but chakra generated blood. Anyways. It's got an obvious activation. Though its hard to tell if it is a genjutsu in actuallity. And since this is Genjutsu, I can't simply change it into Kinjutsu using my Blood Price technique. No matter what it is going to cost chakra. There will be the problem of my S rank coinciding with this I guess.. Seeing as any blood jutsu I make will give hone to the S rank....

Hmm... I don't really want to up the cost at the moment.... Any suggestions on how it can be lowered? Also there are a few stages in which one can break out of it before it comes truly into affect, which is stage 3. This is because the mist acts more like a mirage in the first two stages because your in the field. But at stage 3, when you move out of the range of the mist, that is when the Genjutsu takes ahold of the mind and locks in. This Genjutsu only fools 1 sense: Sight. And its activation is through the Sense of Touch, coming in contact with the bloody mist that is produced. They can still hear and smell and feel and taste. So if they had senses that let them hear things better than normal, they could easily figure out that its a trick. And if they had a form of enhanced smelling, they could easily locate the real target that they cannot see. Which that can also go for hearing.

Not to mention that the user has to hold the Genjutsu until its final affect has taken place or it has ended and will also affect any allies of the Genjutsu. I can't simply choose who it takes affect on. So its a bit like a double edged sword for my allies. Not exactly reliable in team fights. Though that's kinda the path i'm taking with some of the kurogane blood jutsu. Deadly if alone, but severely weakened if you are with allies because you take the risk of bringing them into harm from your own jutsu.

Anyways, any suggestions would be appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime24th April 2013, 3:08 pm

I'll give you the droping the blood cost because it is a blood chakra based jutsu. I much prefer Isho's version of blood use where it still took a tole on the user and gave a bonus of power, but I can see droping the blood cost.

Lowering the range from 50m to 50ft is a huge help at lowering the chakra cost and I'm still wanting to say its at A rank, however just as long as you confirm a few things I can see dropping it to B rank with the range reduction.

I'm not worried about the genjutsu its self. Thats fine and the gaining strength over time part is ok as well. Its touch based genjutsu for sure. The mist its self hindering vision only slightly, and the genjtusu triggers on anything in the mist. As a genjutsu however know that it would fool all senses. Thats kind of the purpose of a massive based genjutsu. To keep them locked in after activating through touch, you want to prevent them from smelling anything that could give away the fact they are in a genjutsu. Same with hearing sight etc etc. Its the reason why pain is such a great way to break genjtusus.

Moving on, I'm willing to approve this with no blood cost and at B-Rank chakra cost if you reduce the range and tag in there that the mist can not be used in any other tech.
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PostSubject: Re: Kurogane Jutsu   Kurogane Jutsu Icon_minitime29th April 2013, 5:47 pm

Name: Blood Style: Blood Mirage
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: B-S [B Rank Chakra]
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: The user generates a mirage of bloody mist that spreads over a fifty foot radius. Once inside this mist, all but the user is trapped inside of its genjutsu. The bloody mist creates mirages, causing the person to see human shadows moving around. If they attack the shadows then they will end up seeing that the person they attacked was the person they had been fighting, as that person will seemingly be laying there dying from the attack. If it gets to this point in the genjutsu then the person will be even more entwined within the genjutsu, making it tougher to break out of as the Genjutsu's power become's boosted to A rank.

After seeing the death, the person will find the bloody mist dissipating, though in reality it has not. After it has dissipated in their mind, they will find themselves alone in the area they were in. If they do not break out of the genjutsu at this point and attempt to leave that area, then they will become more entwined in the genjutsu, its power being boosted to S rank.

After the Genjutsu gets powered up by sinking further into the person's mind, the person will experience a dizzying mind spinning lurch before finding themselves in their village, the civilians laying around in bloody heaps all around the village. Hanging over the victim will be their family, half alive and asking them why they did this to them. They will start blaming the victim, saying this was all their fault.

The user must hold the seal to this genjutsu until the third stage. Once the third stage has been entered the user can release the seal. At stage 3 the genjutsu is locked in place. If the seal is released before stage three then the genjutsu is automatically broken.
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