Tetsu's Custom Jutsu

Approved

Name: Paper Bomb Replacement Trap
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Offensive
Range: N/A

Description: A jutsu trap that acts as a counter or bonus when being targeted by the Body Replacement jutsu or using it yourself. During mid-replacement, multiple paper bombs are placed on the object being switched with. The paper bombs are then set off like normal, with a simple hand seal trigger or timed explosion. The amount of paper bombs and the damage they cause is intertwined and is determined by the skill of the shinobi. The more skilled the shinobi the more paper bombs can be set which allows for more damage. The damage one takes from this jutsu is determined by the rank of the shinobi. Meaning a Chuunin is capable of placing enough paper bombs on an object to produce an explosion worth B rank damage.

Hmmm looks fine.

Approved

no real problem with it so approved

Approved

Name: Flesh Release: Alternate Breathing
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplementary

Description: Tetsu uses his Flesh Release to adjust his own physical body. The neck and chest adjust themselves and produce an internal system similar to that of a fish, growing gills and such. This allows Tetsu to breath in water as if it was regular air. However, this comes at a cost. Though it does cost blood, in order for Tetsu to adjust his body in order to breath underwater he loses the ability to breath outside of it while this is in effect. Tetsu can alternate his internal body and breathing system between being able to breath normally or breath underwater. Cost's C rank blood to alternate each time.

Approved but each time you alternate that's 1 C-rank of blood.

I don't have a problem with this breathing jutsu but I got something to say about adaptive.


I don't know of any animal able to naturally control their body temp. Like humans its done without us nowing it and even then the temperature is made to hold a constant level. In the case of cold blooded animals they seek out heat sourses to warm them up because their body won't do it natural.

Here is what I'm getting at. If you drop your body temperature lower. Your actions and movments would begin to slow. Brain function would be only the primal needs. Your body would also be much much much more effected by diseases.

Almost on equal grounds if your internal body temp goes to high then your organ's could actually begin to fail.

I'm not saying unapproved or anything. Just letting you know that if you were to use that tech to drop your body temp, the longer you stay low the harder the side effects would effect you.

Name: Blood Style: Bloody Accupuncture
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Supplementary/Passive
Range: N/A

Description: Tetsu has far surpassed in parents in the art of Blood Style. So much so that he has rediscovered a forgotten forbidden Blood Style jutsu of his clan. Blood Acupuncture was made forbidden to all for its... Sickening use. This jutsu, once learned, unlocks a passive nature within the Kurogane clan member. Each Blood Style jutsu the Kurogane uses gains a secondary effect. The blood being used become like miniature razors which, when they come into contact with a creature that possesses blood, they will make small incisions within that creature and create blood flow. When the incisions are made, a sharp stinging feeling can be felt. Even the smallest of contacts with the Blood is enough to cause this.

The wounds caused by this effect will forever flow until their victim is drained of all blood. However, this just causes the wounds to be unable to heal by any normal means, similar to how the bacteria and poisons within certain animals allow the free flow of blood, making it so the blood does not coagulate and clot. The only way to stop the blood flow is being healed by a Medical Ninja. The amount of blood that drains per post is equal to the rank of the Blood Style jutsu that came into contact with the creature.

Zzzz Approved.

Adaptation though....is temporarily unapproved mainly due to Meimu bringing up a valid point. I don't see how one would be able to survive at 0 and below degrees if their body temp is 0 your bodies cells won't be able to move and the water within them will freeze. It basic chemistry.... likewise if your raising your bodies temp to 120 + degrees your boiling the water in your blood....which would also kill you...

I'm not over ruling Vix's approval here, but since we now have a 'ranking' system for the amount of blood in a person's body this needs a amount drained per post, it would give a set time for a person to bleed out and keep this from being over the top.




Second note, once the human body hits 106 the cells begin to die slowly. So if he made it to 120 good job.

That adaptive jutsu is taken out already. And the Bloody Accupuncture does have an amount lost per post. The amount depends on the blood style jutsu that the person comes into contact with. Come into contact with a D rank blood jutsu, you start losing D rank blood per post. C rank causes C rank loss, and so on. This jutsu makes it very clear that a medical ninja is needed and increases the importance for them. Originally I had it only drain so long as contact was made with the blood. But I had been allowed to make it so the wounds will continue to bleed until a medical nin could heal you.

Yea I either missed that line originally or you added it in. I'm completely ok with it like that

Name: Blood Style: Blood Barrier Seal
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: Tetsu has produced a specific fuinjutsu to protect his allies from most of his AoE based Blood Style jutsu. He bites into his index and middle finger before making a set of hand seals. He will then smack his fingers onto the targets forehead, producing two red dots that look similar to that of his clan's symbol. These two red dots will then sink into the targets skin. Afterward, whenever a blood style tech gets within five feet of them the dots will reappear and produce a glowing crimson aura around them. This aura protects them from B rank and below Blood Style jutsu and is broken by 1 SS rank, 2 S ranks or 3 A ranks Blood Style techniques by acting as a barrier and keeping the blood style techs 5 feet away from the person with the fuin. If the aura is broken then the seal will disappear and have to be redone. Tetsu cannot place this seal on himself without making it impossible for him to use Blood Release.

Few things. This is a Fuuinjutsu so it will cost straight chakra regardless of the blood/ink used to make it. The seal will cost an A rank chakra per target you use it own as well.

The aura is makes, does it destroy the blood style attack or does it just make them immune despite being hit by it? Or does it redirect it around the person.


Next part is I'm completely against this being A rank and blocking all A ranks. Either boost it to higher than A rank jutsu or lower the rank it protects again. However if this blocks only Tetsu's jutsus I'm ok with it being A rank but you need to add in "Only Tetsu's jutsus" somewhere.

Next if the person is hit with an SSS rank blood style attack, this seal doesn't block it at all. So they would take the damage from that SSS rank attack plus the seal would break. Not so sure that's what you wanted to happen.

Took out the kinjutsu portion. Added in that it keeps the blood jutsu at bay by 5 feet. Decreased to all b ranks and below and 3 a ranks. Added in 2 s ranks and 1 ss rank. Since 3 a make an ss. Its not just tetsus blood style but its main focus is his. So they can fight with him without most of his jutsu harming them.

Remove the "can only be broken by" part and simply say "Is broken" because there are other ways to break this barrier. Other than that I think its fine.


Just a note that say you have a B rank blood bullet rain and you boost its power up to SS rank even without raising the chakra cost. That would break this barrier because its an SS rank attack still. Just making this known now. Everything this block is post boosts.

Edited

providing this seal doesn't carry over to other topics approved.