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| Subject: Nudibranch Beach Days [Kimaede's Techs] 3rd August 2019, 8:25 pm | |
| -Boil Release- - Spoiler:
Name: Boil Release: Corrosive Mist Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Class: Offensive/Defensive Range: AoE Varied
Description: A corrosive mist is ejected from the user’s mouth that can corrode C-rank defense or endurance and inflict acidic burns if a user is attacking through the mist. It may also eat through higher defense tiers, but at an increasingly slowed pace. If the target has high enough endurance tiers, they may be able to negate it. The mist may also dissolve C-rank materia and can accumulate in strength and range with multiple uses.
Number of Uses - Power - Radius (ft) 1 - C - 40 2 - B - 80 4 - A - 120 6 - S - 160
DEF/END Tier - PT to Deplete(1/2/4/6) C - 1/1/1/1 B - 4/1/1/1 A - 8/4/1/1 S - 16/8/4/1
Name: Boil Release: Corrosive Clone Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Class: Supplementary Range: Short
Description: A corrosive mist accumulates and forms into a body matching the user and fights as an effective clone. They’re naturally corrosive upon contact and can be used to eat through flesh or objects with C-rank damage before dissipating. It may also eat through higher defense tiers, but at an increasingly slowed pace. If the target has high enough endurance tiers, they may be able to negate it. The clones, upon taking C-rank amounts of damage, dissipate into a corrosive cloud that will inflict acidic burns on any targets within its range that persists an additional round. If multiple clones are defeated or lose shape for another reason within a round of the last clone to turn into acidic mist, the clouds can accumulate and gain in power and range similarly to corrosive mist.
Number of Clones - Power - Radius (ft) 1 - C - 40 2 - B - 80 4 - A - 120 6 - S - 160
DEF/END Tier - PT to Deplete(1/2/4/6) C - 1/1/1/1 B - 4/1/1/1 A - 8/4/1/1 S - 16/8/4/1
Name: Boil Release: Explosive Corrosive Clone Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: B-Rank Class: Supplementary Range: AoE Short
Description: A corrosive mist accumulates and forms into a body matching the user and fights as an effective clone. They’re naturally corrosive upon contact and can be used to eat through flesh or objects with B-rank damage before dissipating. It may also eat through higher defense tiers, but at an increasingly slowed pace. If the target has high enough endurance tiers, they may be able to negate it. The clones, upon taking B-rank amounts of damage, dissipate into a corrosive cloud that will inflict acidic burns on any targets within its range that persists an additional round. Alternatively, the clone can prematurely destroy itself in an explosion and burst into a cloud of corrosive gas, dealing C-rank damage in a short range. If multiple clones are defeated or lose shape for another reason within a round of the last clone to turn into acidic mist, the clouds can accumulate and gain in power and range similarly to corrosive mist.
Number of Clones - Power - Radius (ft) 1 - C - 40 2 - B - 80 4 - A - 120 6 - S - 160
DEF/END Tier - PT to Deplete(1/2/4/6) B - 4/1/1/1 A - 8/4/1/1 S - 16/8/4/1
Name: Boil Release: Corrosive Contact Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Class:Offensive Range: Contact
Description: The user is shrouded in a mist around their body that makes their touch burn and eat through material at D-rank speeds for D-rank damage at base. When in contact with a liquid, it taints it and alters the property into an acid, spreading quickly and lowering in pH the longer the user is in contact with the liquid. Additional chakra can be used to speed the effect by half the initial time needed and strengthen the acidity level. It may also eat through higher defense tiers, but at an increasingly slowed pace. If the target has endurance tiers equal to or above C-rank, they may be able to negate it.
Rank - Rounds to Change Liquid Acidity(without additional chakra) C - 8 B - 4 A - 2 S - 1
Rank - pH Level - PT to Next Level - Chakra Cost to Increase C - 4 - 10 - D B - 3 - 20 - C A - 2 - 30 - B S - 1 - 40 - A
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Name: Beast Art: Contact Sting Classification: Beast Art Rank: D-Rank Class: Passive/Defensive Range: Contact
Description: As a natural defense mechanism, some animals are known to have a singular barb or several located somewhere on the body. These barbs release on contact with any surface outside of their own at the same speed as whatever it came into contact with, unless they possess the necessary defense tiers to stop the damage. The damage it deals is not the same as the initial hit but may be used in combination with a contact effect to stack on top of the barb’s damage.
Speed of Movement - Damage D - E C - D B - C A - B S - A
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| Subject: Re: Nudibranch Beach Days [Kimaede's Techs] 6th August 2019, 7:15 pm | |
| Here we go:
Corrosive Mist - I would have said to first include table for the accumulating 'power and range with multiple uses'. It also doesn't to me feel it is specific enough in what it does to explain what it does in 'eating through C-rank attack and defence'
Corrosive Clone - I feel has the same as above when it comes to the 'eating through C-rank' things. Also I believe that none shadow clones had to have it written in them that the clones cannot use elemental techniques? I feel it would also need to be said it can be dispelled in some other way, like just taking enough damage from elemental techniques, because right now it reads that the clones only go away when they have burned through something.
Corrosive Contact - I actually think this is pretty good. Changed I would say is it doesn't say how long it takes to turn water acidic. The technique says extra chakra can be used to increase the speed and pH change, and whilst she included the chakra and the pH and such, she hasn't listed pt timers and modifiers.
Oh! and I forgot the catch all to all the Corrosive stuff Resistance through Defence / Endurance tiers to limit the 'corrosion' to the person themselves, I believe is the norm for Boil techniques
And finally
Contact Sting - I can't quite put my finger on it exactly, but it feels like a passive effect that could be quite broken in extended use, but at the same time this could just be a personal thing, because as it reads, Kimaede taking a multi-hit technique would return a physical attacker a decent rank of damage EVERY hit. It should also cap at S-rank, and being a Beast Art, it should have a stamina price each time it comes in to effect.
For this, we suggested either a cooldown for each single use of damage, or lower damage and high defence piercing. Personally I thought the latter would fit the idea of defensive spikes better, but it's up to you.
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| Subject: Re: Nudibranch Beach Days [Kimaede's Techs] 28th September 2019, 6:36 pm | |
| -Boil Release- - Spoiler:
Name: Boil Effect: Coagulation Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: B-Rank Class: Offensive Range: AoE short
Description: This effect of boil release affects the properties of blood, entering the bloodstream and denaturing its structure to the point where it begins to solidify and clot as a mass at C-rank speeds and affecting 3D-rank amounts of blood at a time, rendering using it useless. The effects of coagulated blood are related to the target’s endurance.
Rank - Blood Clot D - 3D C - C B - C+3D A - B S - B+3D
Endurance - Duration (pt) None - 30 D - 25 C - 20 B - 15 A - 10 S - 5
Name: Boil Release: Necrotic Touch Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Class: Offensive Range: Contact
Description: The user is shrouded in a mist around their body that makes their touch eat away at the lipid layer for those they come into contact with and upon further contact, kill cells. This technique is slightly harder to detect than Corrosive Touch, the first sign of this attack being that the target feels that their skin is more slippery. However, when in contact with inner soft tissue, it will begin necrotising flesh, spreading through the body and effectively killing it from the inside out at D-rank speeds for D-rank damage.
This attack can also be used to alter a liquid to a base. It may also be used to neutralise acid release attacks at the same rank. Water releases can negate the effects by dilution. Left unchecked, this attack can continuously eat away at flesh, melting muscle and turning skin into a blackened layer of dead cells over bone.
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| Subject: Re: Nudibranch Beach Days [Kimaede's Techs] 28th September 2019, 7:05 pm | |
| Coagulation: It needs a little more mechanically, or it could be quite a broken technique in the current state. What I would suggest, is the effect creating clots locks off blood for a set period of time, until the body would expel the blood clot. Basically it causes them to have a lower blood reserve until they get rid of the clot.
To fill this it needs a duration for how long the clot remains in the body after for each use of the technique, opposite the opponenet's endurance tier. Kimaede's rank would also determine how much blood is locked out with each use. 3D-ranks of blood per rank will make it a good amount without getting too powerful we thought, so:
Rank - Blood Clot D - 3D C - C B - C+3D A - B S - B+3D
Endurance - Duration (pt) None - 30 D - 25 C - 20 B - 15 A - 10 S - 5
Necrotic Touch: This is just copying what Blade said when I was learning what to look at, as I can't think of a better way to put it. As for the other, causes the area to be soaked in corrosive fluid that gradually builds up damage over time, can be washed away with water release. The longer it is left, the more damage it starts to do. | |
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