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|  Subject: Neo's Techniques  7th September 2013, 9:17 pm | |
| Name: Aura Form - Strength
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: C-S
Class: Offensive
Range: Close - Mid
Description: A Cyper form which takes full advantage of their displacement Aura. The form specializes in Striking heavy physical damage from a distance equal to their current Displacement Aura level. (I.E, Displacement Aura enhanced = 5 feet). Each rank must be trained for.
- At D-Rank the form simply allows the distanced attack to strike with its full strength. Removing the Rank cost.
- At C-Rank the form will add a simple push to attacks, increasing the effectiveness of the taijutsu by the means of a knockback. The Strength of the knockback is depending on the users strength tier.
- At B-Rank the form will increase the force of the push, becoming more of a sharp, yet powerful pump, blasting opponents back. B-Rank and above strength tiers will provide enough force to crush the bones of the area blasted.
- At A-Rank it will increase the strength of the attack by a single rank as the speed and force of the aura becomes powerful enough to deal damage alone. Fusing with the blow of the user to become a rather dangerous mass of strength. 1.5 range.
- At S-Rank the users aura is able to pass through the exoskeleton of the opponent, dealing the damage direction to major organs. This is extremely fatal as it could completely destroy an individuals internal system.
Name: Aura Form - Speed
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: C-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self/close
Description: A Cyper form which takes full advantage of their displacement Aura. This form, unlike the first, specializes in Striking fast and unexpectedly from a distance equal to their current Displacement Aura level. (I.E, Displacement Aura enhanced = 5 feet). Must train for each rank.
- At C-Rank the user is able to use the displacement aura to push the space behind them allowing them to project themselves forwards 1-Rank above their usual speed tier. (Single direction)
- At B-Rank the Speed form can be used in harmony with the Strength form, allowing a complication of both speed and strength in each and every blow. Making it a deadly combo.
- At A-Rank The 'push' becomes a full forced blast which will project them forwards. 2+ Speed Tier to project themselves, or a certain body part forwards. (single direction)
- At S-Rank the user is able to use 2 blasts instead of one in order to alter the direction of their attack or blasted movement. However 2 blasts is the extent.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 7th September 2013, 9:19 pm | |
| Name: Displacement Projectile
Classification: Taijutsu (Cypher Exclusive)
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: long range.
Description: This is a method of increasing the range of willpower, while reducing the quantity. When using projectile weapons, such as a kunai, or a shurikan, the user is able to have their displacement Aura link to that weapon, granting it an invisible range. Displacement Aura = to current rank. I.E C-Rank aura = 5 feet radius. So a weapon could miss by 5 feet, and still deal weapon damage.
Name: Explosive Aura
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Supplementary Defensive
Range: Close-Mid
Description: This is the act of ‘pulling’ all the aura around the user into a single location, then releasing it all at once, creating a blast of willpower capable of knocking back anything physical. This technique can knock back attacks or people of = rank to the user. Knockback distance = 10 meters. (Range = Aura)
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 8th September 2013, 2:41 pm | |
| I see no problem, approved by me | |
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 13th September 2013, 8:50 am | |
| Name: Storm Release: Cloud Alteration Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-S Class: Passive Range: Close-Long Description: Clouds formed naturally by Neo can be altered in size. From their usually starting size, they can either Contract, or expand. When Contracting, the density of the cloud will increase. When half sized, it will be capable of slowing incoming attacks, and stopping equal rank projectile throws. The smaller it gets, the harder getting through it gets, until it appears to be a small solid (Solid = to Rank). When expanding, the density of the cloud will lessen, becoming nothing more then simple fog capable of bringing difficulty to sight. - Quote :
- Note Due to the clouds being D-S all of the Arashi clan justu can be ranked up with the user.
Name: Storm Release: Thunder Clash Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D Class: Supplementary Range: Close - long Description: Neo claps his hands together, using his storm release to replicate two air currents clashing together, when the two hands meet, a heavy, ear piercing sound will rip through the air. Everyone will be unable to hear for 2 posts Name: Storm Release: Forecast Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-S Class: Passive/Supplementary Range: Long Description: Neo’s power over the weather is quite significant, as a storm seems to constantly follow him. Neo’s chakra system effects particles within the sky generating storm clouds after 5 posts, raining after 10 posts, and lightning bolts/thunder will arrive after 20 posts. Name: Cursed Eye Classification: Juinjutsu Rank: C Class: Supplementary Range: Self Description: Neo was born with the origin curse seal as the result of a generic hand-me-down of pure shitty luck. When being generically passed down, a slight disfunction occured, resulting in Neo’s curse seal being closer to the surface, constantly flooding his mind and actions. When this eye is shown, it will automatically put Neo into his Second Seal mode and attempt to kill everything that the eye sees. This includes enemies, allies and animals. Anything moving is a foe. However, certain individuals can be 'whitelisted' from Neo's tantrums by having Neo taste their blood at some point in the past. When Eye right eye (Always bandaged) is shown, Neo will instantly be put into his second curse seal mode and loose consciousness. Name: Cursed Form: Spring Classification: Juinjutsu Rank: D-S Class: Passive Range: Self Description: This is one of Neo’s curse seal forms, the spring. It involved altering ones body limbs, such legs or arms, turning them into springs which allow fast paced extensions. When extending a limb using the spring form, Neo’s speed tier raises 1-Rank, or Each post the spring is held down. (Bursts) Name: Cursed Form: Armed Classification: Juinjutsu Rank: D-S Class: Passive Range: Self Description: Another of Neo’s Cursed forms. This form revolves around propelling an arm anywhere from his body. This can be especially useful in close combat situations. Amount of arms equal 2* rank. (I.E. D=1, C=2, B=3 etc). Name: Storm Release: Sharpened Body Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-S Class: Passive Range: Self Description: Sharpened body makes use of the Cloud Nine Technique (Which allows the alteration of clouds to be used as weapons). With this, Rather then releasing a cloud on a post, Neo will instead use that cloud to surround his body, before condensing and sharpening it. This allows the user to cut and slicing using their own limbs, however the cloud coating is equal rank to Neo. Name: Cursed Form: Cloud Classification: Juinjutsu Rank: C Class: Passive Range: Self Description: Neo uses his understanding and ability of the storm release, and adapts this to his curse seal, allowing him to transform his molecular structure into one similar to a cloud. This makes Neo similar to a cloud in the sense that his body becomes intangible and immune to physical attacks. However, this can only be held for a certain time frame. Time active = 5 * Rank. (D=1, C=2, B=3, etc). Once the form diminishes, it cannot be used again for 20 posts. Name: Cursed Form: Mole Classification: Juinjutsu Rank: D-B Class: Passive Range: Self Description: Neo will grow claws, whiskers and a snout resembling a mole. When in this form, the user is capable of moving through the ground with ease. A D-Rank, the user moves 1 – rank slower when underground. At B-Rank, the user can move at current above ground speed. Name: Silent Killing Technique Classification: Fighting Style Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary/Offensive Range: Self Description: As the name suggests, this technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. Additionally, because the user moves silently, it cannot be defended against, because the attack cannot be anticipated. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. Neo’s version makes use of his displacement aura, allowing him Neo to attack anyone within his Range without them being directly in front of him. The Aura no longer moves in a straight, destructive line, but rather becomes more defined, allowing it to attack multiple areas at once, and avoid attacking others. This can be utilized in a number of ways, such as Neo slicing multipe necks while standing some distance behind, without dealing damage to their backs. (So long as they are within his Range).
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 13th September 2013, 4:45 pm | |
| Storm Release – Cloud Alteration – why is it C-S, I see it as only D or C because you aren't using it for rank varying purposes, as far as I see. If so please state.
Thunder Crash – its a D-rank, just make it can't hear for 2 posts
Forecast – Its also a D-rank. Take away the you can control the lightning part, its not that you cannot do it rather controlling the lightning would be a separate jutsu.
Cursed Eye – When his eye is shown he transforms. What do you mean by that, like his eye is shown to his target, he opens his eyes, what? This jutsu is also C-rank
Spring – Being a spring they would increase your speed the longer you hold them, say you keep them compressed for 2 posts, your speed will be increased by 2 ranks when the speeds expand. Of course this is by bursts.
Sharpened body – add weapons are as durable as your rank
Cloud – that is a minimum of C but it might be B. I'll accept it as C, if somebody says otherwise you will have to change it
Mole – I believe earth chakra would be needed to move at higher speeds underground, current will be allowed however
Silent Killing – Will have to be described a little more. I understand what you are aiming for but not completely understanding how. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 13th September 2013, 11:12 pm | |
| - Zen wrote:
- Storm Release – Cloud Alteration – why is it C-S, I see it as only D or C because you aren't using it for rank varying purposes, as far as I see. If so please state.
Thunder Crash – its a D-rank, just make it can't hear for 2 posts
Forecast – Its also a D-rank. Take away the you can control the lightning part, its not that you cannot do it rather controlling the lightning would be a separate jutsu.
Cursed Eye – When his eye is shown he transforms. What do you mean by that, like his eye is shown to his target, he opens his eyes, what? This jutsu is also C-rank
Spring – Being a spring they would increase your speed the longer you hold them, say you keep them compressed for 2 posts, your speed will be increased by 2 ranks when the speeds expand. Of course this is by bursts.
Sharpened body – add weapons are as durable as your rank
Cloud – that is a minimum of C but it might be B. I'll accept it as C, if somebody says otherwise you will have to change it
Mole – I believe earth chakra would be needed to move at higher speeds underground, current will be allowed however
Silent Killing – Will have to be described a little more. I understand what you are aiming for but not completely understanding how. Approved | |
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 15th September 2013, 12:37 am | |
| Name: Cursed Form: Demon’s Flight
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Demon’s Flight is a transformation in which two black, demonic wings sprout from Neo’s back, Devil like horns will appear from his forhead as his skin turns a pale white. This form grants Neo the ability to fly and travel through the air at a speed equal to his current speed tier.
Name: Cursed Form: Eagle
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo has the ability to transform into an Eagleman, which grants the ability to both fly as well as giving Neo enhanced senses for air based tracking and recon, however while in this form, all ninjutsu is incapable of being used. In this form his arms turn into wings, his eyes become birdlike and his feet become sharp talons.
Name: Cursed Form: Empty Hole
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: This is yet another of Neo’s strange Transformations, where he is capable of distorting his body in order to create a small 5 inch hole anywhere on his body. Holes disappear after 1 post and the amount of holes one can have on their body goes up by 1 each rank. Starting on 1 at D-Rank. Two holes can be joined together to double the hole’s size.
Name: Cursed Form: Creature Copy
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: This is a form which relies on memory. The form allows Neo to transform into any creature he has seen before so long as it is equal to his current rank. When in their form, Neo will have access to their tiers for the duration of the transformation; however Ninjutsu will be unable to be used.
Name: Cursed Form: Demon’s Tail
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo will grow a tail with a sharp horn on the end. The tail is pure black except for the red tip. This tail is capable of extending to a length of 20 feet, and reclining again. The tail is thin and flexible, as it contains no bones.
Name: Cursed Form: Bladed Hair
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo’s hair will grow to a length of approximately 2 meters long, and are capable of being control at will, when in this form however, his hair will turn into a silverly colour as each strand becomes a flexible, sharpened blade equal to Neo’s Rank.
Name: Cursed Form: Deep Sea
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo’s underwater form. This will allow neo gills to breath underwater as well as webbed hands and finned feet. The further down Neo goes, the flatter he will get and vice versa. This will deal with the issues of intense pressure being applied allowing an depth adaption.
Name: Cursed Form: Size Alteration
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo is able to alter his size as he pleases. This can be used to make him increasingly huge, or vice versa, where he is able to shrink to a size where he will become difficult to see. This however, is just size, and nothing else, in no way does this affect his tiers or techniques.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 15th September 2013, 1:41 am | |
| Name: Storm Release: Stormy Atmosphere
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo is ultimately effected by the weather, when the weather is clear and fine, D-C Rank storm elemental ninjutsu is raised to an A-Rank Cost, however, If Neo is under a storm cloud, his D-C Rank storm ninjutsu will have no cost, drawing its chakra from the storm itself.
Name: Storm Release: Electrical Storm
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank:D-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long
Description: This goes along side Neo’s forecast. Once 20 posts have passed, and the storm clouds evolve into their lightning state, One per each post, two lightning bolts will strike the ground randomly. Bolts Damage = to Neo’s Rank.
Name: Cursed Form: Conductor
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo will turn his body into a circuit. His left arm will become a lightning conductor, drawing lightning instinctively towards is, the voltage with then travel across the exterior of his chest and be redirected as it fires from his Right arm. This is only capable of redirecting = Rank lightning, 1 –Rank high will cause normal damage, 2+ Ranks higher will cause double the damage to Neo.
Name: Storm Release: Stormed Orb
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long
Description: Neo will create a small clear orb in front of himself which reacts to his mental instructions. This orb is capable of collecting 4 of the 6 primary elements, water, lightning, earth and wind. Once the small, 10 cm radius orb is filled with one of the 4 elements, the orb will be fired into the air, combining with Neo’s Forecast clouds in order to create a storm significant to the element. Collection methods are use by one of two ways, either naturally, meaning it can collect the water from a lack, Wind from the sky (Takes 5 posts), Dirt from the ground or lighting from a thunder storm. It can also collect from chakra based attacks, however if the attack is greater then the users rank, the orb will break. All storms are = rank to the user.
Storms:
Wind = Tornado = rank to the user capable to causing mass destruction
Lightning = Thunder Storm, Amount of lightning bolts able to be released increased by 2 each posts. Water = Either Tsunami if near large sums of water wave = user Rank, or a severe rain storm slowly flooding the area
Earth = Dust storm distorting vision
(Lol, Just Lol)
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 18th September 2013, 10:10 am | |
| Name: Cursed Form: Wolf
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo will transform into a wolfman, allowing him the ability of an increased sense of both smell and hearing. Through this form, Neo is capable of tracking foes over large distances through a number of different means. This jutsu ranks with the user, his tracking ability growing and expanding over longer distances as he ranks. In this form Neo's hair will grow longer and rougher, his ears will sharpen into the canine shape and likewise with his nose, teeth sharpen, claws grow.
Name: Wrist Flick
Classification: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid-Long
Description: This makes use of Neo’s ability to use the speed Aura form. From his pocket, Neo is capable of flicking his wrist out, throwing either a shurikan or a Kunai, before placing it back in the pocket. This motion happens in a total blur using willpower power to blast the hand a small twitch like distance before firing it back. This will allow ranged weapons to be thrown at a moments notice without warning so long as his hands are within his pocket.
Name: Crossbow’s Will
Classification: Taijutsu, Kyujutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long
Description: This technique uses Neo’s willpower gained from his aura in order to give a slight boost to the firing of his crossbow. Utilising his Aura form: Speed, Neo is capable of generating a sort of blast of willpower behind the arrow which will launch it forwards at speeds = to the current Aura rank.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 20th September 2013, 1:03 am | |
| Name: Precision Aura
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Mid
Description: This is the almost perfected version of the Displacement Aura as designed by Neo. It was inspired by his silent killing and has been made just to complement this technique. With the Precision Aura, Neo’s ranged physical attacks become a lot more controllable and steadied. Rather then being capable of striking multiple targets within the range of his Aura, Neo is able to attack a single target at twice the distance. So If the Aura range is 6ft, Neo is able to remove turn this perfect radius circle into a thin line to reach a distance of 12ft.
Name: Cloud Swamp
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid-long range
Description: Neo alters the density of his cloud, causing it to become difficult to move through. This can be used to make opponents stuck in a sense as the cloud will rest on the ground and can be moved to wrap around the opponents feet. This technique will cause opponents to become stuck to the ground, unless they have either a speed or strength teir one rank above the users clouds, in which case they will be slowed by one rank. When using one cloud, I can be used on a single spot or person, when using 5 clouds, it covers a mid range area, and when combine 10 clouds this will cover then entire ground of the location – long range.
Name: Cloud Creation
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: This is an evolved form of his Cloud Nine ability. With this, Neo is capable of creating any form with his clouds, this ranges from weapons, to normal items, to animals. This deal damage equal to the clouds rank, and takes a physical or chakra attack equal to the clouds rank to be destroyed. 5 clouds can be joined together to add 1-Rank of damage and defence to the cloud. 10 clouds for 2-Ranks.
Name: Cloud Acceleration
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Short - long
Description: Clouds under the control of Neo move at a certain speed depending on their rank. Neo’s clouds will move at D-Rank speeds when Neo is an D-Rank. They will move at S-Rank speeds when Neo is a S-Rank. Easy and simple.
Name: Clouded Connection
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Long
Description: Neo’s clouds are heavily connected an as such, Neo is able to use his clouds as a medium for a number of techniques. Weapons and jutsus are capable of passing through one cloud and appearing from another, extending the range and usability of all his clouds and techniques.
Name: Clouded Aura
Classification: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Long
Description: using Neo’s Clouded Connection, Neo’s Displacement Aura is able to be channelled from his clouds. Using his clouds Neo’s Aura range surrounded each cloud individually and his attacks can be channelled to pass through one cloud and strike a target with another clouds aura range.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 20th September 2013, 9:00 pm | |
| Eagle – Not sure your cursed seal can turn you into an animal, you can ask somebody else about that
Creature Copy – Same as Eagle, I'm not saying it can't be done just I don't know if it can. I just don't see cursed seal changing a person into full animal
Size Alteration – make your size depend on how much chakra you waste, like large sized is B-rank chakra, etc like that. And do the same for shrinking sizes.
Electrical Storm – are the lightning bolts equal to your rank in strength, speed, or both?
Wolf – Same as Creature copy and Eagle
Clouded Aura – make it only attacks that use chakra | |
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 20th September 2013, 9:26 pm | |
| - Zen wrote:
- Eagle – Not sure your cursed seal can turn you into an animal, you can ask somebody else about that
Creature Copy – Same as Eagle, I'm not saying it can't be done just I don't know if it can. I just don't see cursed seal changing a person into full animal
Size Alteration – make your size depend on how much chakra you waste, like large sized is B-rank chakra, etc like that. And do the same for shrinking sizes.
Electrical Storm – are the lightning bolts equal to your rank in strength, speed, or both?
Wolf – Same as Creature copy and Eagle
Clouded Aura – make it only attacks that use chakra Approved | |
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 25th September 2013, 9:23 am | |
| Name: Clouded Aura
Classification: Nintaijutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive/Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: Neo’s clouds are replications of Neo himself, as they are naturally a part of him, and as such, due to his lack of certain…Arashi traits, his connection to his clouds are far stronger then many usual clan members, as such, just like Neo, the clouds each have their own displacement aura surrounding them. Their Aura = to Neo’s Aura.
Name: Cloud Rate
Classification: ninjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self?
Description: Neo’s adaption to his clouds allows him to gain an extra cloud each post, as well as increase his limit by 5.
Name: Distorted Aura
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Sup Passive
Range: Mid
Description: Neo’s aura’s density is heaviler then most, and as such, uses that to its advantage as Neo uses the density to bend and distort images, allowing Neo to hide the contents of his Aura. As such, unless inside the range, anything within his displacement aura is considered unseeable, however, other senses are still capable of detecting.
Name: Clouded Dream
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supp
Range: Mid-long
Description: This is a genjutsu which can be received by coming in contact with one of Neo’s clouds. This genjutsu will do nothing except make the user believe they are running out of air, causing a mental strangle as the air seems too thin for them.
Name: Clouded Curse
Classification: Nin-juinjutsu
Rank: D-S
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: Neo’s clouds are just as effected by Neo’s curse seal as he is, and as such, whenever neo looses his mind to the seal, his clouds will gain equal tiers to his curse teirs as well as turn a bright redish colour. The main property of this cloud its connection to Neo. If Neo consumes 5 clouds when in his curse form, his speed tier will increase by one. If Neo consumes 10, his entire body becomes harder, granting +1 to endurance. If 15 are consumed, Neo also gains +1 to his reaction.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 25th September 2013, 8:13 pm | |
| Clouded Neo – C-rank minimu, since this seems like a Cloud Clone, you amount of clouded neo's must follow the clone/doppelganger rules. Since they are still clouds they only have access to your close range physical based jutsus
Chakra Channeling – this is a perfect example of how your wording makes something not possible. So I'll explain, chakra channeling, just the word, implies a type of chakra flow, which through the body and outwardly are both possible. Now what your jutsu reads, coating yourself in your chakra will only serve defensive purposes, so either increasing endurance or defense tiers. Coating yourself in your chakra and expecting speed, is a no. On side note, unless you can get a defense tier, this jutsu will only increase your endurance one.
Chakra Disruption – You will have to reword Chakra Channeling to make this possible. Now you will need to lower your counts, D-rank make it 1 post, C-B rank make it 3, opponents tiers dropped by 1-rank for 1 post, A-S rank, stun is a whole different thing so you can only stun for 1 post, 1 post of stun is enough to kill, drop tiers by 2 ranks for 3 posts
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 25th September 2013, 8:21 pm | |
| - Zen wrote:
- Clouded Neo – C-rank minimu, since this seems like a Cloud Clone, you amount of clouded neo's must follow the clone/doppelganger rules. Since they are still clouds they only have access to your close range physical based jutsus
Chakra Channeling – this is a perfect example of how your wording makes something not possible. So I'll explain, chakra channeling, just the word, implies a type of chakra flow, which through the body and outwardly are both possible. Now what your jutsu reads, coating yourself in your chakra will only serve defensive purposes, so either increasing endurance or defense tiers. Coating yourself in your chakra and expecting speed, is a no. On side note, unless you can get a defense tier, this jutsu will only increase your endurance one.
Chakra Disruption – You will have to reword Chakra Channeling to make this possible. Now you will need to lower your counts, D-rank make it 1 post, C-B rank make it 3, opponents tiers dropped by 1-rank for 1 post, A-S rank, stun is a whole different thing so you can only stun for 1 post, 1 post of stun is enough to kill, drop tiers by 2 ranks for 3 posts
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 12th October 2013, 10:53 pm | |
| Name: Cursed Transmission
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: n/a
Description: Due to the unsteady nature of Neo’s curse seal, being subject to a curse transmission or infection from Neo is much harder to survive. As such, the chances of survival normally are 1/25. When in the 3rd state, it will lessen to a survival rate of 1/15. Still no available transmission in 4th state. No Village immunity crap, Fuck Ibara, they are subjected to this shit too.
Name: Displacement Transmission
Classification: Juin/Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank (D-Rank Blood price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Description: Neo creates a link between his taijutsu and his curse seal through the use of his Displacement Aura. Any who are within the range of his aura are able to be put through the seal transmission with the corresponding survival rates in tact. This allows a curse seal to be implanted from a distance
Name: Physical Transmission
Classification: Juinjutsu/Physical Classifications
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Passive
Range: ~¬
Description: Neo’s distant control over his curse seal floods his skin, body and everything he comes in contact with, any physical contact with Neo or anything Neo has held will lead to contracting his curse seal and being subjected to the survival rate. This is uncontrollable with small focus and will even effect friends and allies when in the midst of battle.
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Name: Cursed Consumption
Classification: Juin/Nin
Rank: D-S
Class: Passive
Range: Self
Description: Neo’s clouds share his connection to his Origin Curse Seal, and as such consuming his clouds grants him the ability to go into his next cursed form early as it increases the instability of his control. 8 clouds to go into the 2nd form. 15 clouds to go into the 3rd form. And if available, 20 clouds to go into the 4th form. Now, if a cloud has been consumed, it is unable to be respawned as it is still counted towards the topic limit.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 12th October 2013, 11:11 pm | |
| Name: Frozen in Time
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid/long
Description: A sight based genjutsu which is triggered when the opponent looks at Neo. Once the genjutsu is activated, Neo will appear to be frozen, and unmoving. This will alter all the opponents senses as they feel, hear, see and smell only this frozen Neo before them. Neo will of course be capable of walking around and making as much noise as he wants while the technique is active. Once the frozen neo is attacked, a new frozen neo will appear at his new current location. This will continue until the genjutsu is broken.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 13th October 2013, 4:07 am | |
| Frozen in Time raise it to S if it affects all of the senses through one medium.
Cursed Transmission is a no you'll require medic to alter you seals lethality unless your going through transformations.
Displacement Transmission, no because Displacement Aura while physical wouldn't be able to pass on a physical condition, you'd have to like saturate it with your body parts and you don't have blood, life or flesh...so no.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 12th July 2014, 7:42 am | |
| Name: Cursed Eye II
Classification: Dojutsu/Juinjutsu
Rank: ~
Class: Passive Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: The Origin Curse Seal has plagued Neo's body since birth. As a result, his entire right eye has been consumed and as since been acting as a main catalyst for the pent up emotional triggers. Up until this point, the moment his right eye was shown and locked onto a living target, Neo would instantly revert into his second curse stage and go into a mindless rage, attacking anything not already consumed. Time however has allowed a stronger control at the small cost of fragmenting ones mind. At this stage, the right eye is capable of being shown, but only by certain selves as Neo is now broken down into multiple smaller personalities. Neo himself can only look from his left eye, as the rules of the first Cursed Eye technique still hold. Jax is the opposite, capable of looking out of the right eye, if the left is shown, he will lose the ability to use any Juinjutsu and the personality will change. Jax also won't go into a rage, nor will he automatically go into the 2nd state. Risa can look out of both eyes, but is unable to ever use any Juinjutsu, however, is capable of remaining in a previously transformed curse state. She cannot control 3rd state and above. Light is the same, however he is capable of utilising basic juinjutsu.
Name: Woundless
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: Utilising the transformative ability of the Origin Curse Seal, one is able to alter their physical form. As a result of this, wounds, cuts, burns or any other type of damage to the physical body can be not exactly healed, but rather sealed up. Correctly performing such a task requires great concentration and control, and as such, it cannot be performed on any damage less then the rank of the user.
Name: Clouded Movement
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: Same principle as clouded connection, where one is capable to moving physical objects through one cloud, to come out the next. This technique does the exact same, but on a smaller scale. Instead of having the privilege of moving between two clouds, regardless the distance, it can only pass through the same cloud, from one end to the other for shorter instantaneous movements. No living body is capable of utilising this transition besides Neo himself, and he is limited to a total of 2 per topic.
Name: Multiples
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: A fairly simple jest which will prey on those who aren't very attentive to detail. Its a very simple genjutsu activated by having the opponent see a shurikan thrown by the user. All the genjutsu does, is create several copies to the point of reaching a maximum of 30, all of which are moving as parallel to one another. It is a jest, and many will consider it useless as one will always be on a slightly different angle, making it stand out from the rest.
Name: Thrown Aura
Classification: Shurikanjutsu/Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: Using projectile aura, one is able to throw their aura along with a distance weapon in order to maximise range and effectiveness. This technique revolves around the movement of Shurikans which have had an aura attached to them, allowing the rotation and direction to be altered at will, quite literally meaning it could continue its movement indefinitely, as well as alter its end target at a moments notice.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 13th July 2014, 3:57 am | |
| Name: Cursed Conditioning
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: A-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: Utilising the Origin Curse Seal's transformative abilities, Neo is capable of conditioning his body to adapt to harsh environmental changes. These will not change damage done by offensive technique, however it will allow Neo to regulate his system to survive comfortably in intensive heat or freezing temperatures. Minor gases or substances below his rank are able to be overpowered by his altering immune system, etc. Weak AoE/weather alteration adaptions.
Name: DNA Adaption
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: A-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: Again using the abilities of his Origin Curse Seal, as well as his signature curse seal whitelist, where he consumed blood, Neo is able to alter his DNA to improve his own conditions and abilities. This will only work on fresh, living blood, so i cannot be taken from a body which is dead, but basically, as the blood is consumed, it DNA structure is broken down by the Curse Seal, and its positives are added to Neo's own, hence why he doesn't attack that individual afterwards, as its qualified as attacking ones self. However, as the DNA is being fused, basic traits are capable of being passed to Neo.
Current Traits
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Name: Chain Sealing
Classification: Fuinjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Description: Tattoos have been placed in numerous places over Neo's body, allowing him to seal small items and objects into himself rather then a scroll or carrying the said item. This technique refers specifically to neo's right arm, which has seal a 5 meter long chain. When unsealed, it appears wrapped around the said arm. To be resealed, it must be in the same position.
Name: Chained
Classification: Kenjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: By running chakra, or coating the chain in a cloud, Neo is capable of manipulating the odd weapon in unimaginable ways, altering its direction and movement without much warning or followable notice, as well as using the tip as a blade for cutting and slicing, or potentially piercing.
Name:Curse Mark: Adapting
Classification: Juinjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supp
Range: -
Description: This is sort of a natural ability of the Curse Seal, as if she sees any other curse seal users she is able to perfectly mimic their effect for the rest of the topic and retains the ability to train for certain effects after the topic. At Academy she can copy 2 different curse seal and train 3 different effect whether they are from same or a different curse seal, At genin she can copy 4 curse seal and train 6 effects, at chunin and higher she can copy 8 curse seal and train 12 effects.
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Last one taken from Saeko as an already approved tech. But since it was awhile ago, I figured i'd get it re-approved.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 13th July 2014, 7:17 am | |
| Name: Blooded Cloud
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C-Rank (D-Rank blood price, per cloud)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Description: Neo will spill a small sum of his blood into a cloud, changing it from its natural white or grey to a darker red colour, indicating that the blood had been spread, making it generally mist-like. This serves no other purposes but can be used in numerous ways if one was smart enough to understand the value of surviving blood outside of the body. Keep in mind these do not carry over in topics.
Name: Force Grip
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Description: No doubt this has something to do with one's displacement aura. This is a new stage of development, where rather then simply using it to slice, pierce and apply pressure with, it will be capable of gripping in area's within range. This can essentially pick up or pull objects, or even coil ones aura around an individual within the reach. Of course, it is only as effective as the user's strength, so overpowering it is as simple as holding a higher tier. Also, due to the control required for this, it requires eye contact, so the grip can only be used within the user's frame of vision.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 6th March 2015, 8:47 am | |
| Now if someone is gonna complain about the rank of the internal destruction line, I’d simply like to point out neo can already do all of this stuff without the need of these techniques, they are simply neater and make explaining much simpler. - Internal Destruction:
Name: Internal Destruction
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Description: By firstly utilising the amazing ability of the Displacement Aura form: Strength, originally developed by Hope over a century ago, allowing one with enough familiarity to deliver damage direction to an opponents internal body, combined with the unique dojutsu Zenraigan allowing one to literally see through an outer shell with an X-Ray vision setup, Neo is capable of creating aura based attacked with perfect precision inside of another body. Using this combination, even the slightest of damage can be transformed into a deadly sequence of internal failures. Defense tiers will have no effect on the protection of ones inside unless stated to do so.
Name: Internal Twitch
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: medium
Description: Drawing on the concept of Internal Destruction, where Neo accurately pinpoints and delivers damage directly to one’s internal body, and developing it into a much finer method of undetectable assassination. Even the smallest of errors from within a body can lead to detrimental effects later in the future. Using a small a small finger movement such as clicking with his cursed form: sharpened nails, Neo can create a ‘twitch cut’ within the body of another, slicing an artery, or simply cutting a small vein in the brain, allowing either unnoticable immediate effects, or a slow development of internal bleeding on a fatal level. When used in conjunction with speed tiers and silent killing, (Faster movement = more damage = more damage splits) Neo can slice multiple or combine them together for an even more dangerous utilisation, perfect for any assassination. C-Rank+ Pain sensory can detect when this technique is used on them instantly, though they will be unable to locate its source.
Name: Internal Implosion
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Offensive Supplementary
Range: Medium
Description: A much more extreme development of the Internal Destruction technique in which accurately pinpoints and delivers damage directly to one’s internal body. This technique relies on speed and is generally used during combat rather than for assassination like its predecessors, relying mostly on speed but also strength if the tier is available at the time. As general knowledge tells, when a speed of Vacuum release or greater is created, a vacuum is created (hence the name). Now imagine all this force delivering inside of a body with displacement aura, after original damage has already been done mind you, its devastating. The inside of their body would implode on itself with a force equal to the speed tier used. Reasons for using this rather than the simple base technique is simple, when in the heat of the moment, accurately striking a target becomes difficult, this way, it’s sure to get that organ one way or another. In order to resist it, opponents must have equal rank defense tiers to the speed used, or a 1-Rank lower combination of defense and strength. However the initial damage would still be dealt.
- Dojutsu Precognition:
Name: Stormed Zenraigan
Classification: Dojutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Activation: Activation = EOTS + currently active Zenraigan stages
Appearance: Simply one in each eye.
Description: With Zenraigan constantly active, as well as having the Eye of the storm makes for a difficult, painful and potentially blinding combination if not handled carefully. As such the only way to ensure the two do not have negative effects during battle is to solve the problem beforehand. With the Zenraigan activation having taken place while Eye of the storm was not active, and with it becoming a constant, (forever changing the colour of his eyes - notice new eye colour in appearance) the channelling of Storm chakra to create a dual activation is no problem with no crossed links. However when it comes time to activate Stage one of Zenraigan and beyond at the same time as Eye of the storm, things change. Solution. Eye of the storm will only be active in one eye, but so as to not create confusion, the other eye will be closed, with Zenraigan stages simply using X-Ray to see through the closed lid and zoom away from the normal sight creating two separate images rather than one distorted one. This was poorly written, very poorly written.
Name: Movement Precognition
Classification: Taijutsu/Dojutsu
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Medium - Long
Description: By combining combining the principles of Iai Precognition and the effects of Zenraigan’s X-Ray ability, Neo is able to see beyond simple muscle twitches and take it to a step much further. With an internal view, he can accurately see each contraction and planned movement even before the opponent is aware of it (theory of your body reaction before your real time conscious is aware). With such an advantage, he isn’t just limited to noticing kenjutsu and taijutsu, but any bodily movement in general, as well as watching the fluctuations in a chakra network to predict chakra based movements as well. Another plus side is that clothes aren’t in the way, a major downfall in the original Iai technique, just wear a winter uniform and you’re set. Since it is based on the principle of Iai however, they must be holding some weapon otherwise it won't work, because things change. As for seeing chakra, its only the internal flow from weapons and movement, that is dependent on the level of dojutsu used.
Stage of Dojutsu = Chakra Flow & Chakra Based Movement Detection
Base = Normal Running Speed
Base+Eye of the Storm = D
1st = C
1st+Eye of the Storm = B
2nd = A
2nd+Eye of the Storm = S
3rd = SS
3rd+Eye of the Storm = SSS
Name: Placement Precognition
Classification: Taijutsu/Dojutsu
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Medium - Long
Description: The next stage to Movement Precognition where Neo studies the interior body to predict movements. I could have put these in the same tech, but decided not to considering the use of the second Doujtsu requires activation. Eye of the Storm’s activation allows the user to visualise all wind currents within their current field of vision. This, in conjunction with ones prediction technique, not particularly Iai Precognition but more so ones reaction tier in general one can see the movement of ‘unseeable’ targets based on oddities in pressure. This also carries on to see the appearance of new beings as the current is suddenly thrown off, for example individuals who teleport can have their location determines and found before they have fully arrived. Reaction tiers play a key part, allowing one to detect all tangible movement and appearance so long as it is equal to the speed. But more importantly, the stage of the dojutsu again because reaction is just for show, but since there is only one stage of EOTS, i'll stick with reaction.
Reaction tier - Appearance Speed Detection
D-Rank - D-Rank
C - C
B-B...Well you get the drift I'm sure.
Name: Cursed Form: Sharpened nails Classification: Juinjutsu Rank: D-Rank Class: Supplementary Range: Self Description: Quite a simple transformation really. Its almost exactly as one would image it. Neo’s nails, be it all or simply one, will sharpen itself to a point, allowing for scratching, cutting and with enough strength, piercing damage with naught but his hand. The change is small and generally undetectable. Don't forget Piercing damage is always in conjunction with the speed tier.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 22nd March 2015, 8:30 am | |
| - Not being Approved.:
Cursed Step (molting Step)
Name: Cursed Step
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short
Description: Having never been a true member of the Arashi Clan, Neo was absent the teachings of many of their techniques and styles which is a bit of a shame, yet in hindsight he’d rather not hold those skills anyway. However, even if he did not put it into practise, he did have knowledge of how most things work, rather than utilising them, why not modify them to suit his own benefit. The Molting step has been passed through generations, stopping at his own, the concept of hyperventilating in order to increase blood flow before coiling leg muscles. Such a poor method of movement, one that is easily noticed far before any movement has been made. To think, he was neglected from learning the style as a result of both his curse seal and his cypher heritage, yet they will be the deciding factors in its redevelopment. Blood is naught but an accessory, with no effect on his actual movement method, as such, the entire first step can be pushed aside, not only that but with the body altering effects of his origin curse seal, Neo can coil muscles without any need to prepare for the moment outwardly. During this movement opponents without equal rank Reaction Tiers, 1-rank Higher Speed, Muscle Tension or a Time-Slowing Dojutsu are unable to track his movement.
Neo’s Rank - Distance (ft) - No of Steps
D - 5 - 1
C - 10 - 3
B - 15 - 6
A - 20 - 9
S - 25 - 12
Clouded Step (cursed molting)
Name: Clouded Step
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short
Description: This is a follow up to the Cursed Step, the signature version of the Arashi Molting step which minimises detection with movement. There are two main differences that the next stage brings to the table, both of which utilising Neo’s clouds, and as such, in order for this technique to be used, two clouds will be required, though not used up for it to take place. The first and most simple part is a cloud on the soles of the feet, this solidates and holds place allowing midair steps and usually impossible movements. The second integration is a drifting effect of a cloud. During the first step, Neo will pass through a cloud, the result being like a cloud in the wind as it would initially separate apart like smoke before trailing along his movement, the effect making following Neo’s movements much harder than what it was previously. This means that in order to track his movements, opponents require reaction tiers 1-rank higher, speed 2-ranks higher, muscle tension or a Time-Slowing Doujutsu.
Vacuum Step (Clouded + Aura + Speed)
Name: Vacuum Step
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Description: Taking the principles of Clouded Step, or mostly those from Cursed Step, and redefining it to suit a high speed environment, making it more dangerous than ever. In order for this to be brought into effect, the user much first have Vacuum release speed or above as a base tier. The normal effect of moving at Vacuum Release include steam being formed and unseen movements. This will be influenced by the effects of neo’s moving Aura to stimulate an area wide movement, creating steam within the range of his aura to make his movements undetectable to the eye unless they have the ability to see through smoke or some other method of following movement, but then they still have the problem of dealing with the original requirement of reaction tiers 1-rank higher, speed 2-ranks higher, muscle tension or a Time-Slowing Doujutsu. At Bliding light, it will also defean all in his aura range causing their ears to bleed. At Ripping Discord a vacuum will be created around his movement being blown out of proportion by his aura once more to deal area wide implosion S-Rank damage. This is all nothing new, just widening the area.
Clouded Shift
Name: Clouded Shift
Classification: Nintaijutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Description: Clouded movement is the basic technique on which the Clouded Shift is built upon. The original technique allows for Neo to use a method similar to his clouded connection in order to move himself from one part of a cloud to another. In this particular case, a cloud is spread into a thin line over a range equal to that of his aura. No particular reason behind the connection, i just felt like it was a good range. This thin cloud allows Neo to shift anywhere within that area without requiring any real effort on his half. The speed at which his body teleports is generally equal to his speed tier at the time. Much like the original technique, this is only able to be used twice, however predicting where he will appear requires a wind or displacement sensory capable of predicting one rank above his speed.
Clouded Shift + Vacuum Step
Name: Shifting Vacuum Step
Classification: Nintaijutsu
Rank: S-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Description: This is the final evolution of his cursed step idea bubble. Taking the concepts of both Clouded shift and Vacuum Step and combining them into one technique, Neo has created a movement style far better suiting himself. Rather than simply taking the steps to get from one place to another, Neo will create small shifts from point to point, representing the steps instead. Not only does this make tracking and following his movements much harder, but it will allow him to move faster without the required tiers with parts of the movement path being skipping, raising the appeared rank by one. In order to detect the original vacuum step, one must be able to see movement without the use of sight, as well as use reaction tiers 1-rank higher, speed 2-ranks higher, muscle tension or a Time-Slowing Doujutsu. However with the addition of the shifting movements it becomes much harder, as they require the need to see where he will reappear instead. Neo’s limit for shifts has been extended to compensate for the shorter movements, now equalling the number of steps he should take. This will also include the effects of the original with each step deafening opponents with bleeding ears beyond Blinding light speed, but also at Ripping Discord, deal aura range based S-Rank implosion damage to nearby opponents. Neo’s Rank - No of Steps
D - 1
C - 3
B - 6
A - 9
S - 12
Name: Dual Aura Classification: Taijutsu Rank: C-Rank Class: Supplementary Range: Medium Description: The Cypher’s displacement aura is shrouded in mystery, a force that is still fairly unknown and its properties still yet to be understood, its potency in some more so than others. Neo has acquired the dual aura sometime during his ascension stage with the lingering aura from past Neo being replaced with the present. Almost as if a result of his multiple personalities, the second aura acts with a strange unusual means of discomfort, however useful it may be. The second aura, is not just a duplication of its first, when used it will drain twice the stamina, and will require a separate attack. For example, a single punch can be pushed towards a single aura based attack. A double punch however, well now that can attack two targets with displacement aura, at the same time, each without hindering the maximum range of the other. Name: Coloured Aura Classification: NinTaijutsu Rank: D-Rank Class: Supplementary Range: Medium Description: This is actually a weaker appearance of his aura, giving it a visible colour and decor while also limiting movement. Although outwardly it appears to be pointless, it is actually more commonly used for intimidation purposes as well as hiding his real aura so it becomes even more unexpected. Firsly, how does it look? Mostly like this, or this, or even .jpg]this . Get my drift? Like a pinkish red flame though not at all hot of course. Its just tempretureless aura which appears to be thrown forth like a projectile rather than simply generating damage as his aura form allows itself to. In terms of how it moves, it simply appears to stream forwards like a blast of explosion at a speed equal to his own speed tier. In some cases, it can take on the original aura’s form and have the blast appear in a location away from his body. In any case, the damage has no difference made by it, still the same as always. With Ripping Discord speed however, the explosion damage will match the look, so that’s pretty cool.
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| | Subject: Re: Neo's Techniques 23rd March 2015, 1:29 pm | |
| - Admin Edit all of these in the spoiler are now approved thanks to the edits made:
Internal Destruction = Fine
Internal Twitch = C, also add in those with pain sensory C-rank or above can detect when this technique is used on them instantly (Due to the rank of this technique if it was D then those with D-rank pain sensory would of been able to detect it)
Internal Implosion = B-rank due to requiring Vacuum Release Speed. If you didn't have it it would of been an A-rank fighting style. Victims require either Equal-rank Defense to resist the implosion effect or 1-rank Lower Defense+Strength Tier Chaining to the damage dealt to resist the implosion effect.
Stormed Zenraigan = Approved Just note the prices for each eye would be different since you are using two differently.
Movement Precognition = B-rank and include that it is limited to those who are currently weilding weapons and thus using either Kenjutsu/Kyujutsu/Shurikenjutsu/Kugujutsu or Hojutsu due to being based on Iai Precognition. What you have would be chaining the Zenraigan with Muscle Tension (it would also be an A-rank). So fix that, in addition in regards to the noticing chakra fluctuation have that be able to detect only Internal chakra flow within weapons, and movement as a result of using only Chakra to boost movement speed of the body depending on the stage of Zenraigan active. When tracking chakra based movement if said movement results in a motion blur effect, the user is able to see a chakra trail preceeding behind the opponent and use that to track where they end up.
Stage of Dojutsu = Chakra Flow & Chakra Based Movement Detection
Base = Normal Running Speed
Base+Eye of the Storm = D
1st = C
1st+Eye of the Storm = B
2nd = A
2nd+Eye of the Storm = S
3rd = SS
3rd+Eye of the Storm = SSS
Displacement Prediction = A-rank. Same due to being superior to the former in terms of detection. Same in regards to higher dojutsu activation allowing for better tracking just like before.
Cursed Form: Sharpened Nails, grants piercing damage in conjunction with the speed tier used.
Cursed Step = Fine but have it require D-rank Reaction, 1-rank Higher Speed, Time-Slowing Dojutsu or Muscle Tension since this is a D-rank technique, also since you have removed the Blood Price needed since you have your Juinjutsu have each step take -1 Fatigue Per Step. Clouded Step = For the latter C-rank Reaction, 1-rank Higher Speed, Time-Slowing Dojutsu or Muscle Tension since it is a C-rank technique, also since you have removed the Blood Price needed since you have your Juinjutsu have each step take -2 Fatigue Per Step. Vacuum Step = A-rank, only Samurai can make use of Vacuum Release's effect other only can reach said speed without said effect. Meaning if you want to make use of this technique it has to be Storm Release: Vacuum Step, instead of a steam trail it would be a cloud trail. Same as above though since it's an A-rank it would be A-rank Reaction, 1-rank Higher Speed, Time-Slowing Dojutsu or Muscle Tension. The Blinding Light & Ripping Discord Effects also would be a no unless Neo is a Samurai since it can't use the added effects of those two. Also since you have removed the Blood Price needed since you have your Juinjutsu have each step take -4 Fatigue Per Step. Clouded Shift = B-rank. The speed of said shift is either Equal to his Speed tier or Below, and while requiring no effort on his part it consumes an additional -3 Fatigue completely seperate from the amount of fatigue for moving at said tier due to the shifting effect being stressful on the body. This technique requires either Wind or Displacement 1-rank above his speed or Wind Displace+Moisture Sensory = to his Speed to detect where he will end up. Should be called Storm Release: Clouded Shifting Step. S-rank Reaction, 1 Rank Higher Speed, Time-Slowing or Muscle Tension since this is an S-rank technique, -5 Fatigue per Step since you removed the Blood Price in leau of the Juinjutsu. (All of the Steps = Due to being based on Molting Step can be used in place of Speed Tiers hence why I mentioned all of that to be based on the respective rank. Likewise similar to the Body Flicker technique they can be used in conjunction with speed to move at samurai lvl.) Colored Aura = Approved. | |
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