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 Izuna Mishura's techniques!

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PostSubject: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime31st July 2013, 10:12 pm

Name: Lightning Release: Raishin (Signature)
Classification: Ninjutsu/Kinjutsu
Rank: SSS (S-Rank blood price first time.)
Class: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This technique can only be used twice in a topic, the first time takes an S-Rank blood cost, the second time (Which is more powerful) kills the user once it is finished.

The first time this technique is used, it wreaths Izuna in lightning, coating his entire body and generating so much that small arcs of lightning fire off much like wisps of smoke or mist from other armours. The first effect this armour gives is its defense, it cannot be broken through by anything less than an SS-Rank technique (Spiritual, Physical or Chakra based) and as long as the technique doesn't kill Izuna, the armour regenerates on his own, unfortunately the armour also has a time limit. The first time it is used it lasts 30 posts, the second time it lasts 50.

The next effect this armour has is that it increases all of Izuna's lightning jutsu by 2 ranks while retaining their original chakra cost and no lightning technique, apart from an SSS one can affect Izuna and even then an SSS technique has its damage lowered by two ranks as his armour absorbs most of the power from the weapon itself.

Thirdly, it also boosts his speed to SSS levels for the entire time that the armour is active and allows all of his normal hits to pierce through S-Rank defenses as though they were a Chidori, as the lightning forces Izuna's attacks to become much stronger than before. Once Izuna comes out of the armour though, he is extremely fatigued for a short while, reducing all of his physical tiers by two ranks for six posts total.

When used a second time in the same topic, however, this armour becomes stronger. Rather than covering Izuna's form, this armour turns Izuna into living lightning, his entire body changing to match that. Once this has happened, all of the effects of the first time are boosted by a large margin.

His speed stays at SSS rank however his piercing attacks have now moved up to being able to pierce through SS Defenses much like a Chidori and with an extra A-Rank of chakra per post, can pierce SSS defenses.

Finally, all of Izuna's lightning jutsu have their ranks upped by two and cost no chakra if they remove posts from Izuna's time limit. C-Rank removes 1 post, B-Rank removes 2, A-Rank removes 4, S removes 8, SS 16 and SSS 32, making him a much more powerful adversary.

Lastly, when this technique finishes, Izuna returns to normal for a post before becoming dust as his body is destroyed by the massive release of Lighting Chakra, rendering his Dojutsu useless after that.


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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime31st July 2013, 11:50 pm

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime11th August 2013, 4:22 pm

Lightning Release:

Fire Release:


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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime11th August 2013, 4:58 pm

All but fire release fist of one thousand damn are approved. This jutsu I am unsure about. But what I am sure about is this is definitely not an A rank jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime12th August 2013, 12:41 am

Zzzz Call it Kajiin

Yawnz...This can be very well an A-rank Kinjutsu. After all Empty is a C-S Kinjutsu. Yawnz does it build up destructive capabilities with speed or what? Will you be creating advanced versions? Also remove the references to Chidori make it more definite separate explain it using possible things, such as a fixed pulsation of fire release chakra in your arm coupled with building friction as you move through the air to further ignite the flame the culmination of which resulting in the screams. Don't give it a definite shape fire is not meant to be fixes allow it to flow flicker like fire should.

As for the damage this can be quickly resolved as an A-rank Kinjutsu you can take on the burning to ashes if the piercing is ranked then have the damage fluctuate with speed. starting at B for crashing ground, A for Vacuum, S for Blinding light, SS for Ripping Discord and SSS-rank for Echoing Flash. The resultant friction created from that especially say if you drag the hand against the air would only increase at fast speeds yes? Also that would likewise affect the cost don't you think, I think A-rank blood price as standard.

If you ever do decide to make an advanced variant of this technique yawnz for future reference bad ass techniques need cool Japanese names or should have 1 word to describe their epicness. Rasengan, Chidori, Raikiri, Kirin, Empty, Eraser. See a trend? Thought so. Anyways with those modifications fufilled I can approve this as an A-rank Kinjutsu. Congrats...on making an extremely dangerous Kinjutsu. Can't wait to see what you'll do with it.
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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime12th August 2013, 12:18 pm

I do believe I fixed the problems, thanks for the advice, Vix!
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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime12th August 2013, 4:48 pm

Remember 1 Word Kajiin no need for fire release or whatever yawnz. Anyways it's approved there you go
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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime15th August 2013, 12:58 pm

Name: Lightning Release: Demonic Sickles (Signature)
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Medium

Description: By way of kneading it inside of his body and then forcibly permeating the air around him in chakra, Izuna can create several sickle shaped blades made out of pure lightning chakra. These blades move at one rank above Izuna's own and can pierce through B-Rank and lower defensive objects. In addition, depending on rank, the user can create different amounts of these sickles. At D-Rank they can create 1, at C-Rank they can create 2, at B-Rank 3, A-Rank 4 and S-Rank 5.

Name: Watchful Gaze (Signature)
Classification: Genjutsu (Sound)
Rank: B-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: By infusing their chakra into any sound that the user creates, they cause a slight memory implantation into the foe that causes them to always attempt to lock eyes with the user of the technique. This genjutsu causes a memory lapse in the enemy, causing them not to realise that they are looking into the user's eyes unless it becomes incredibly difficult to look into their eyes. For example, if the user turns around, the target will NOT walk around to look into their eyes, instead this genjutsu will be broken until reactivated.

Name: Itsugan Genjutsu: Ocular Disconnection (Signature)
Classification: Genjutsu (Eye contact)
Rank: A-Rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: This technique's power actually changes depending on how long the victim has been staring into Izuna's eyes and is usually used in conjunction with Watchful Gaze. If used straight away, the victim's nerves will fight against them, lowering their speed by one rank as long as this genjutsu is active. If the victim looks into the user's eyes for three posts before this is activated, it lowers their speed by two ranks and if looking into the user's eyes for five posts, they become completely frozen and immobile until they can break the genjutsu.


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PostSubject: Re: Izuna Mishura's techniques!   Izuna Mishura's techniques! Icon_minitime16th August 2013, 3:26 pm

Electron whip is a no. Pick a rank.

Demonic Sickles lower the amount B-rank 3, A-rank 4 S-rank 5.

Hell Blades no divide them up into different techs.

Watchful Gaze Approved

Ocular Disconnection raise it to A-rank.
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Admin edit - Approved.
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