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 Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]

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PostSubject: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu] Icon_minitime7th September 2018, 8:09 pm

Fighting Styles:

Samadhi:

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu] Icon_minitime17th September 2018, 4:34 pm

Multi Wielding - Muscle Tension fails unless they also possess reaction tiers one rank below her speed.

Karate Mikaduki-Ryu - Seems fine but I hope you know that the damage you deal will be very low due to the type of damage it is.

Naked Warrior Parry - Damage one below the speed.

Tantsuru Mochiduki-Ryu - Tier+ gives -2, Tier++ is -4, +Tier- is -6. Also, should be One Blade Style, not Three.

Two Warrior Parry - Remove the ability to counter attack if the defenses are greater, makes the tech too powerful.

Samadhi - Fighting styles cannot be exclusive. Will Reserve will be 1,1,2,2,3,4,5

Khanika - Remove anything about being able to see into the future.

Appana - This needs to be split into two techniques. Appana - Domination and Appana - Fortification. As it stands it does far too much and is far too powerful. It can target too many things and ends up lasting far too long for the KO duration.

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Edited. Appana was removed due to laziness and will be reapped at a later date probably

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu] Icon_minitime18th September 2018, 12:51 pm

Shunshin:

Eighth Moon Dance:

Kasso:

Mueisho:

Past Confrontations:

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Approved

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Mutoryu:

Ittoryu:

Nitoryu:

Santoryu:

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Shishi Sonson - Needs to be C-Rank, re-order table and reduce by a rank, C-S Wound Detection.

Pound Ho(1) - Distance of projectiles 20-60, if it hits a technique of greater rank it is destroyed, the Quartered Damage is only if it hits an element strong against wind.


Pound Ho(2) - Layers drilled through 2-3.

Kaen - No, the wind cutting blades I can understand but generating flame from friction will need to be done some other way.

Daishinkan - A-Rank minimum with Defense only required to prevent instant bifurcation, Defense+Strength required to resist having the weapon cleave mostly into the body. Bleed is 2 D, 4 D each PT or 4 D, C if each turn.

Baki - B-Rank, Defense to prevent amputation, Defense+Strength to prevent limb break, bleed goes 2-4 D.

^For both of the above, I really dislike them, feel like they also should have some kind of downside, like a cooldown or a short charge period.

Nanajuni Pound Ho - Piercing damage one rank below.

Iai: Rashomon - 5-25 ft

Nigiri - +5 feet

Ototo - 5-25 feet

Hirameki - C-Rank

Oni Giri - C-Rank, then damage reduction for breaking through is 4,3,2,1

Yaki Oni Giri - How are you setting the blades on fire? If it's elemental it needs to be Ninkenjutsu, otherwise you need to explain.

[Mumbo jumbo] Oni Giri - B/A/S-Rank Barrier Tiers, not +

Tora Gari - No. The KO needs a duration and a tier-based way to resist, barrier and/or endurance works.

Toro Nagashi - Needs an interception range and specified that it blocks physical based only. Also tier level increase goes 1-5

Gazami Dori - Defense only to stop beheading, Defense+Strength to stop damage, sustaining only pain. Unconsciousness needs a duration and a tier method of negation. Also reduce tier requirements by one rank.

Karasuma Gari - Hybrid normal deflection, chakra/mental deflection(halved), spiritual/natural deflection(Quartered)

Ichi Gorilla - -3 Stamina, when used during Eight Gates, the tiers granted are 2 tier levels higher, not 4.

Hyakuhachi Pound Ho - No. AoE insta-kill technique at B-Rank with rank higher tier negation and no downsides? No.

Ni Gorilla - -4 Stamina, +1 Turn, +2 Turns, same tier increase thing when Eight Gates are active as before, 2 tier levels not 4.

Nigori-Zake - One rank below speed, equal to strength. Detail how much pain is caused.

Senhachiju - Time period of bleed required, also detail whether it's per projectile or if all three hit. If it's per projectile it needs to be reduced massively.

Hyokindama - For projectiles/blows make it 4/2 then 8/4/ then 12/6, if used to proceed the other tech it'll be a B-Rank reaction add-on.

Daibutsu Giri - 10-50 feet, Large M, L, XL

Yasha Garasu - 2 D, 4 D bleed

Ul-Tora Gari - No. You aren't getting a coma tech at A-Rank.

O Tatsumaki - -5 Stamina

Rengoku Oni Giri - -5 stamina, Normal weapons/blacksmith weapons/samurai sword.





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Edited

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Mutoryu:

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Reiki (Samadhi Revamp):
Kenbunshoku:

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Renames (Also changing the ranks for Santoryu):

Muiki:

Okitoryu:

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Majin
Uses False Soul Price

False Majin (D) {3 Tiers based on Choice}
Lesser Majin (C) {3 Tiers based on Choice}
Majin (B) {3 Tiers based on Choice}
Pure Majin (A) {4 Tiers based on Choice}
Pure Majin - True (A) {3 Tiers based on Choice}
True Majin {5 Tiers based on Choice}
True Majin - Transcended (S) {4 Tiers based on Choice}
Transcended Majin (SS) {6 Tiers based on Choice}
Transcended Majin - Perfect (SSS) {6 Tiers based on Choice}

Spoiler:

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu] Icon_minitime28th February 2020, 12:19 am

Mutoryu - Requires Shockwave Fist which is currently a Lost Technique.

Reiki - Requires Jaeger as Cypher are incapable of such levels of manifestation.

Kenbunshoku - Requires Reiki, thus not currently available.

Renames Spoiler - Approved

Muiki - Not approved. Breathing entails manipulating stamina, not 'energy' and the fighting style is too vague in how it is used to be considered viable. Additionally, to properly manipulate the energy of the core, the assistance of a Med-Nin or being a Med-Nin is required.

Okitoryu - Not approved due to Muiki not being approved.

Majin - Not approved. False Soul and Soul Prices are too general and vague to be considered as energy sources for Gate Alternatives. If you can affix majin to a specific energy source it can be approved

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