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PostSubject: Maxi's Techs Desu~    Maxi's Techs Desu~  Icon_minitime19th August 2014, 11:01 pm

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Name: Body Heat
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: Upon realizing that his own blood is naturally superheated, Cesc figured out that he is capable of using it as a heat source to affect his Friction Palm/Set jutsus but this does rely upon his Hot Blood. When 10 posts then his Friction Palm/Set jutsus are treated as rank higher, at 20 posts then his Friction Palm/Set jutsus are treated as two ranks higher, etc. This does cap at S rank

Name: Harm’s Ace
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: Naturally when people take damage their heart rate and blood flow increases, for a Bishamon this will directly affect their Hot Blood causing it to become hotter with the more damage Cesc receives. When he receives C-rank damage the Hot Blood count will become +1 for that post, when B-rank damage is received the count will become +2 for that post, etc.

Name:  Meteor Bullets
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Offensive
Range: All

Description:: : This is a unique adaptation by Bishamon clan members as they have adapted their Hot Blood into their life release techniques. The user releases hardened black bones from his fingertips which are aimed towards the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. These bullets travel at C rank speeds. The technique usually pierces C rank defenses and deals C rank damage, but the user’s hot count depends on the ultimate outcome, boosting its damage and piercing ability by one every ten posts post. At ten posts it deals B rank damage and pierces through B rank defenses. Twenty posts A rank damage and piercing, etc.


Name:  Meteor Recoil
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank:   C
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description::

This is a unique adaptation by Bishamon clan members as they have adapted their Hot Blood into their life release techniques. The user releases hardened black bones from his body which serves as a counter to most if not all Taijutsu/Nintaijutsu. The bones have the ability to counter an opponent’s attack, which costs Cesc chakra equal to the technique being countered. And like most meteor techniques the piercing ability depends on the user’s hot blood count.

• 10 counts can pierce through B rank defenses
• 20 counts can pierce through A rank defenses
• 30 counts can pierce through S rank defenses
• 40 counts can pierce through SS rank defenses


Name:  Meteor Blade
Classification: Kenjutsu
Rank:  C
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description:: This basic technique allows a Cesc to fashion and release a Bone Weapon, such as a sword, from within his body using his bloodline unique powers. This weapon is as strong and deadly as steel. The piercing ability of this weapon depends on the user’s hot blood count at the time the bone is drawn from his body.

• 10 counts can pierce through B rank defenses.
• 20 counts can pierce through A rank defenses.
• 30 counts can pierce through S rank defenses.
• 40 counts can pierce through SS rank defenses

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Name: Lightning Illusion: Flash Pillar
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Class: Supplmentary
Range: Long

Description: The user must remain still while channeling this jutsu, during which time anyone that looks their way falls under its effects. This genjutsu causes any opponents within 20m to see a blinding light emanating from the user’s body, blinding them and leaving them unable to respond to visual cues for two posts. While the illusion of light itself does little as far as trapping the victim in an illusion, it does create the opportunity for the caster to activate a second genjutsu while the victim is unable to see them.

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PostSubject: Re: Maxi's Techs Desu~    Maxi's Techs Desu~  Icon_minitime20th August 2014, 12:06 am

Meteor Bullets – This is a C-rank tech, there is no more D-S-rank anything, so travel speed will be C-rank. Deals C-rank piercing and C-rank damage. Since the increase occurs with Hot Blooded, the damage and piercing will happen every 10 posts with Hot Blooded.

Meteor Recoil – Again no D-S-rank give it a definite rank, then defense will increase every 10 posts along with Hot Blooded.

Meteor Blade – Give is a definite rank again, then its cutting ability will increase with Hot Blooded, however this will be done while it is still in the body, so say 10 posts pass then if the initial rank is C-rank then it will be B-rank, once it is outside the body it won't increase anymore.

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PostSubject: Re: Maxi's Techs Desu~    Maxi's Techs Desu~  Icon_minitime23rd August 2014, 1:31 pm

Edited and added one more technique

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PostSubject: Re: Maxi's Techs Desu~    Maxi's Techs Desu~  Icon_minitime24th August 2014, 10:33 pm

Mmmkay approved

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PostSubject: Re: Maxi's Techs Desu~    Maxi's Techs Desu~  Icon_minitime20th December 2014, 5:58 pm

Name: Heat Flux  
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D rank
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range:  AOE

Description:
A wide ranged ninjutsu where Cesc utilizes his Scorch Release chakra to create high pressure into the atmosphere to induce intense and potent degrees of heat to assault foes mentally and physically. People caught within the technique usually experience hot flashes and hallucinations giving them the feel that they are trapped within a genjutsu. Ultimately the size and effects of the Heat Flux depend on the user’s hot blood count as the user’s blood and body is used as a medium to release the gas into the atmosphere. Naturally the technique’s effects are discriminate which forces the user to be limited with the technique with when around allies.

Gas range, Effects and Cost-

Heat wave covers 10 feet and those within the gas lose -2 fatigue each post. (Hot Blood Cost 5)

Heat wave covers 20 feet and those within the gas lose -4 fatigue while obscuring vision each post. (Hot blood Cost 10)

Heat wave covers 30 feet and those within the gas lose -6 fatigue each post while suffering from hallucinations of seeing multiple enemies (Hot Blood Cost 15)

Heat wave covers 40 feet and those within the gas lose -8 fatigue each post while suffering from hot flashes decreasing strength and endurance by one (Hot Blood Count 25)

Heat waves cover 50 feet and those within the gas lose -15 fatigue each post while suffering from heat edema (swelling) in the legs and hands and heat cramps and boosts the users scorch related techniques by one rank.  (Hot Blood Count 35)

Heat wave covers 60 feet and those within the gas lose -25 fatigue each post while suffering from heat stroke reducing all tiers by two ( Hot Blood Count 50)

Name: Heated Gas
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: D rank
Class: Offensive
Range: AOE  

Description:
The user releases a cloud of hot gas from his mouth. The heated gas is designed to cause targets to sweat profusely. The gas disrupts the line of sight, making it difficult see. Targets effected by this gas often pass out from exhaustion if they remain in the hot gas (-1 fatigue per post). An interesting note is that the gas heats up metal weapons exceptionally fast, hurting enemies who are in contact with metal surfaces.

Name: Friction Palm: Kagutsuchi
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short

Description:
The user condenses the Scorch release chakra in his/her body into their fists and begins to swirl chakra in their arms at high speeds their fists giving off sparks as they begin to simulate air friction. He/She unleashes a giant ball of heated gas around themselves, capable of sucking the moisture out of anyone who penetrates the ball around the user. When used in conjunction with Heated Gas Technique the user will be able to trap the opponent in a ball of heated gas in which they would have to choose between losing fatigue equal to the rank of the technique per post they are inside the ball or suffering damage equal to the rank of the technique to escape. The ball is formed around the opponent at C rank speeds.

Name: Friction Palm:  Scorching Torrent  
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D rank
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short

Description:
The user condenses the Scorch release chakra in his/her body into their fists and begins to swirl chakra in their arms at high speeds their fists giving off sparks as they begin to simulate air friction. He/she then moves quickly and punches forward their fist bursting into flames producing a large stream of fire from each of their arms traveling at speeds equal to the rank of the technique, which, when it comes in contact with the foes, drains moisture from them and at the same time, sends them flying away behind them due to the blunt force of the produced fire. The user can also jump into the air, and then ignite two streams of fire from his hands, subsequently swinging such streams at the opponent and blowing them away. This technique deals damage equal to the rank of the technique and requires strength equal to the rank of the technique to withstand the knock back.The opponent also suffers from damage and fatigue equal to the rank of the technique.

Name: Friction Palm:  Scorching Fist
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description:
The user condenses the Scorch release chakra in his/her body into their fists and begins to swirl chakra in their arms at high speeds their fists giving off sparks as they begin to simulate air friction. He/she then moves quickly and punches forward their fist bursting into flames producing a fist the size of Medium (S) creature towards the opponent traveling at speeds equal to the rank of the technique which upon contact drains the moisture from the opponents body equal to the rank of the technique.


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PostSubject: Re: Maxi's Techs Desu~    Maxi's Techs Desu~  Icon_minitime20th December 2014, 6:19 pm

Heat Flux is fine apart from one thing I believe you should fix. At Hot Blood - 35, reduce the buff to one rank otherwise you'll suffer recoil every time you use a Scorch Release based technique, two-ranks is the recoil trigger.

Heated Gas - I kind of laughed at this because Offensive isn't a Rank and Ninjutsu isn't a Class. So please put in an actual rank and change it to Offensive and I can give it another look to see how much damage it should do and whatnot.

Kagutsuchi - Please give a duration to the ball of heated gas and an actual damage that is dealt if they try and leave it. Also it's a D-Rank so either up to C-Rank for C-Rank damage and -2 fatigue or keep the -2 Fatigue but have it deal D-Rank damage when leaving... -1 Fatigue and C-Rank damage would also work.

Scorching Torrent - Please give a speed to the flames, a strength needed to block the knockback (probably D to both) as well as damage (D more than likely) or fatigue lost if struck.
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Edited

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