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 Zaku Hokkai

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PostSubject: Zaku Hokkai   Zaku Hokkai Icon_minitime11th March 2014, 1:16 am

Personal Info

Name:Zaku Hokkai
Alias: The Red blade
Age:14
Gender:male
Height:5"9
Weight:120Lbs
Zodiac Sign:gemini

Personality: quiet and mild mannered zaku rarely speaks unless hes enjoying himself or to someone he knows well. In battle he is calculating in a way making sure to try and think every move out before acting he particularly enjoys stratedgy games like shogi.


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History:zaku hokkai born into the higher ranking unit of the hokkai his parents unlike most young shinobi were around along with his brother he never has felt true lonelyness. but instead has had steady training with his brother and father making his taijutsu and ninjutsu skills very adept for his age. being the youngest zaku feels the need to prove himself alot more as his father and castus generally seem to have a stronger bond as zaku kind of takes after his mother he trains often to the point of overexersion in most cases. upon the age of ten his father gifted him and castus pups. zaku would take the white one naming him zeus tho he was the complete opposite of zaku they remained inseperable.

Samurai Info

Village:ibaragakure
Rank:Academy student
Clan: Hokkai

Sword Name:Zaaki
Sword Appearance:
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Sword Chakra Nature: Gravity
Sword Description: zaaki is zaku's custom sword zaaki holds the abilty to increase or decrease the gravity of anything the blade touches which will affect the movement an weight of said object depending on zakus aim by 1. This only effects the object/person struck another strike must be achieved to further effect the gravity
Bow: Long bow

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PostSubject: Re: Zaku Hokkai   Zaku Hokkai Icon_minitime11th March 2014, 1:39 am

Hokkai Starters:

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PostSubject: Re: Zaku Hokkai   Zaku Hokkai Icon_minitime11th March 2014, 1:44 am

the weapon needs to make contact with the target, not Zaku

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PostSubject: Re: Zaku Hokkai   Zaku Hokkai Icon_minitime11th March 2014, 1:48 am

The weapon wors two ways. To manipulate the gravity around the opponent he needs to make contact.to manipulate the gravity around himself he must rotate the blade clockwise as hes already in contact

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PostSubject: Re: Zaku Hokkai   Zaku Hokkai Icon_minitime11th March 2014, 2:26 am

I know the weapon does, by saying that Zaku touches the target and manipulates the gravity would imply that Zaku has the ability himself not the weapon, which that is not the case. If Zaku was to lose the weapon he would lose all access to the weapons ability and chakra nature, that is why I say the weapon must make contact with the opponent for the ability to be active not Zaku.

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Regal Requirements to next promo:
Blacksmith:
0/1 SSS-rank specialty weapon
0/1 SS-rank specialty weapons
0/2 SS-rank weapons
3/5 S-rank weapons
1/1 Large puppet design
0/3 Medium puppet designs
0/5 humanoid puppet designs

Scholar: (Learn)
0/1 SS-ranks
0/2 S-ranks
0/4 A-ranks
0/6 B-ranks
0/8 C-ranks
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PostSubject: Re: Zaku Hokkai   Zaku Hokkai Icon_minitime11th March 2014, 7:03 pm

Fixed

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PostSubject: Re: Zaku Hokkai   Zaku Hokkai Icon_minitime13th March 2014, 1:29 am

Two abilities, one being controlling the gravity around him while the other is his opponents. Pick one or the other. cracking down on multiple ability things when your only supposed to get one.

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