Ka's Taijutsu list

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Approved.

Name: Jab
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: A simple punch that Ka uses when in close range hand to hand combat, with his leading arm he will extend it out with as much force as he could muster in order to inflict damage to his opponent.


Name: Cross
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Another simple Taijutsu that Ka uses to damage an enemy. With his following hand Ka will extend his arm with as much strength as he could muster in order to inflict damage to an opponent.


Name: Uppercut
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Another punching Taijutsu Ka uses in order to disorient an enemy. With his following hand, Ka will swing his arm upwards in order to strike an opponent. Depending on where the strike hits, will inflict certain damage. A shot to the torso will knock the wind out of them, and a strike to the head will cause an opponent to be knocked backwards a few feet.


Name: Hook
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: A punching taijutsu Ka uses to cause damage to an opponents vital spots. Using either hand, Ka will swing his arm outwards in order to to start a slingshot motion with his fist into an opponents ribcage or head.


Name: Heel Kick
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: A Leg taijutsu Ka uses in order to knock an opponent back a few feet. Ka will bring up either leg so his knee is almost touching his chest, then will extend his leg outward to drive into an opponents midsection, causing them to be pushed backwards in order to gain some distance.


Name: Toe Stomp
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Pretty self explanitory taijutsu that Ka developed in order to gain the upper hand in a close combat situation. When an opponent is within range of Ka, he will stomp down on their foot as hard as he can, in order to cause pain and imbalance.


Name: Eye Gouge
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: A dirty fight taijutsu that Ka developed in order to blind an opponent temporairily. Ka will drive two fingers into an opponents eye, if sucsessful the opponent will be blinded for 2 posts.


Name: Sharp Elbow
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: A rather simple taijutsu utilizing the elbow. When an opponent is within close proximity to Ka, he will drive his elbow into their body causing a sharp pain in the area specified.


Name: Displaced Edge
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self-short

Description: A rather useful technique harnessing ones own displacement aura. By focusing his aura around his hands, Ka is capable of solidifying it around his hand, and sharpening the edge down to one of a kunai to be utilized during combat.


Name: Headbutt
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description:


Name: Roundhouse kick
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Ka will use his back foot in order to push itself, and using this momentum he will bring up the same foot in order to strike an opponent, dealing D rank damage.


Name: Hip Toss
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Defensive
Range: Short

Description: Grabbing onto an arm of his opponent, Ka will spin his body and drop to a knee in order to send his opponent into the ground. Dealing C rank damage.


Name: Side Step
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Defensive
Range: Self

Description: This jutsu relies on his speed and reaction tiers. A counter so to speak where if Ka can see an attack coming towards him, he will simply step out of the way of the attack in order to evade it.


Name: Scratch
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Using the finger tips, the user will grip onto any open skin, and roughly drag them across the opponents skin, causing D rank damage


Name: Snap Kick
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: A quick kick in order to cause a sharp pain in an opponents body, dealing out D rank damage.


Name: Situational Awareness
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: Being able of taking certain things in a situation, such as tracking an opponent, possible openings for an attack, finding ways out of precarious situations, etc.


Name: Ambidextrous
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: The ability of using both left or right hands equally as good as the other.

First thing, never go with listing damage dealt for Taijutsu considering it is dependent on your tiers completely meaning a D-rank Taijutsu can hit for S-rank damage if the user has S-rank strength. Second the first 3 are part of King Hokkai's Boxing Style, you can ask him if you can use them as currently....yours kinda suck. Third....fluff it up, I know your trying to make simple taijutsu techniques and all but really get into the motions and exact excecution of the techniques while adding things to them. While simple is good 2 lines for a tech make it seem bland and thus more difficult visualize.

Scrapping all those for these:


Name: Pinning Shot
Classification: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: D Rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long

Description: A jutsu Ka had developed utilizing ranged weaponry. By aiming his weapon towards the enemy, he is able to launch the weapon towards them. If the attack is successful, then the opponent will become stuck in their position. With either sticking them to the ground by their feet, or pinning them against a wall by hitting their limbs or clothing. The amount of total posts the opponent is trapped for is all dependant on Ka's strength and shurikenjutsu used.
• D rank strength/jutsu = 1 post
• C rank Strength/Jutsu = 2 posts
• B rank Strength/Jutsu = 4 posts
• A rank Strength/Jutsu = 6 posts
• S rank Strength/Jutsu = 8 posts
Opponents are capable of escaping this trap if their strength tier matches the shurikenjutsu rank or the strength the blade was thrown at.

Name: Intercepting Fist
Classification: Fighting style
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description:
This is a unique fighting style revolving around the utilization of the advanced reaction abilities of the Reaction tiers in conjunction with Speed in order to capitalize on the minute openings in a victims taijutsu. It is a reactionary style which allows Ka to rapidly analyze the weak points in an opponent's taijutsu stance before reacting to it resulting in victims without reaction tiers equal to Ka's speed being unable to keep up with his basic taijutsu.



Name: Mesmerism
Classification: fighting style
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Contact

Description: A style of combat that incorporates many jutsu styles in order to truly mind fuck an opponent. Utilizing Genjutsu, fuinjutsu, and pressure point combat, Ka is able to imprint suggestions, hinder an ability, or possibly immobilize an opponent. Using pressure points on an opponent, he is able to semi-control the electrical impulses to the brain, coupled with a quick phrase he is capable of implanting a suggestion in an opponent that won't take place until all the requirements have been met. With the proper seal and correct suggestions Ka is capable of causing someone to become incapable of preforming a specific task.



Name: Underwater Movement
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: B
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Having grown up in the village of Dipugakure, Ka has spent a sufficient amount of time training to combat opponents underwater. Granting him the ability to move and fight underwater at speeds equal to his own rank and below, however this only grants him access to taijutsu and close range Bladed kenjutsu combat.

Merrrr I'll go over them with you then.

Pinning Shot already discussed this in the Cbox.

Intercepting Fist: Use this.

Spoiler:

Mesmerism - Range should be Contact, since your utilizing Pressure Points in conjunction with Seals &/or Genjutsu to block, and alter the neural signals sent to their brain.

Underwater Movement - Shouldn't be top speed, instead it should be he is capable of moving at speeds equal to his rank and below without any loss of movement due to the density of water versus air. However you should keep the only affects his taijutsu and close-range kenjutsu.


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Admin Edit approved

Name: Awake
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: Contact

Description: A genjutsu used to awaken the target from an unconscious state. The user will focus chakra into their finger's, and will then place it on the targets forehead waking them up from being knocked out in battle (NOT including genjutsu and poison based sleep) or if they are simply asleep.

Name: Slow Time
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long

Description: A genjutsu utilizing eye contact with the user. Once the opponent has made eye contact with the user a genjutsu will be triggered, where the world around them will seem to move at a slow rate of speed (10x slower speed to be exact) to what is actually going on. They will still experience pain, however the genjutsu will trick the pain into lasting quite some time. Can only be dispelled by Kai however.

Name: Trap Door
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid

Description: Requires eye contact. Once the genjutsu is cast on the opponent, they will see the ground disappear from under their feet, dropping them into an almost endless pit.

Name: Negative Vision
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: Contact

Description: This genjutsu requires the user to strike the opponent in order to cast/activate the genjutsu. Once the user strike their opponent (preferably in the head), the opponent's vision will alter dramatically. Seeing the world as though it was through a negative of a photograph, everything's colour had changed pretty much to it's exact opposite.

Name: Mental Shielding lvl 1
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary/Passive
Range: Self

Description: Not really a genjutsu exactly, more of a mental barrier then anything. When an opponent tries to enter the users mind through genjutsu or ninjutsu, they will come upon a a block in his mind preventing D rank Mental damage.

Awake – It will be you can only awaken somebody from equal rank to chakra used unconscious state, if somebody was knocked out by a C-rank jutsu then you need to waste C-rank chakra to awaken them, etc and etc

Slow Time – Give a duration, like if a person sees time as post by post how does your genjutsu change that, like does the target now see it as you move forward in one post, but the target cannot truly react to it until 2 posts later. This is also B-rank, and as long as they know its a genjutsu they can dispel it.

Trap Door – Approved

Negative Vision - Approved

Mental Shielding – This is a barrier tier, so I believe your char cannot naturally obtain them or you wouldn't be creating this, so it will drain D-rank chakra each time it protects, also cannot work on ninjutsu, even though a ninjutsu can work on the mind it is still a ninjutsu.

Name:Demonic Illusions: Mist
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short-Long

Description: A genjutsu when activated through a specific body movement, will temporarily blind an opponent. By making a connection with an opponent using chakra (Through any chakra related jutsu made prior to this jutsu), the user will will sway their arm in front of them as if to try and disappear in a magic trick. The opponent seeing this will have the genjutsu activated upon them, seeing a mist surround the user and soon the entire battle field.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Mist Clone
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short-Long

Description: Working in conjunction with the Mist genjutsu technique, the user will activate this genjutsu in order to overwhelm their opponent. With the opponent already within the Mist genjutsu, clones of the user would be seen moving towards them with killer intentions. With the ability to turn into the mist grants them the ability to dodge certain attacks and appear out of thin air. This clone technique does follow with the clone rank limit.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Haze Clone
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short-Long

Description: The user will preform a set of hand seals resembling the clone technique, creating any number of duplicates of the user. Once the clones appear they will act simply as they are meant to, keep the opponent busy, however if contact is made with the clones, the opponents attack would simply move through them as if nothing happened. This also means that any attacks they do on the opponent would also simply move through them. These clone do follow the clone limit chart.

Name: Demonic Illusions: Chains
Classification: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Class: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid

Description: A genjutsu which is activated by the opponent watching the users hands in a chain of handseals, meant to cause the opponent to stop in their movements. Once activate the user will witness several golden chains to shoot out of the ground, wrapping around their limbs entirely making movement almost impossible for anyone with D rank and under Barrier tiers.

Everything should have. Demonic Illusion: next to it. Haze and Mist clone but have nb versions but if you do not wish to use them then that's fine. Demonic Illusion Chains should utilize Barrier Tiers not endurance or strength as they are mental chains it has nothing to do with actually restraining a victims body.

Also for Mist and Haze clone please include that they follow the clone limit.
Mist clone the dissolving into mist only applies towards the illusionary clones not the user.

Admin Post: Edits completed, Approved.

Name: Ninja Wire Manipulation (Signature)
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies (Ninja Wire Length)

Description: After learning how to used roped weapons such as the Dragon's tail in combat situations, Ka would discover that he could utilize this sort of combat to other situations. By attaching a ninja wire to his finger Ka would be able to literally extend his reach in combat, he is able to swing the wire around in a way that would allow him to grapple onto a target to ensnare them and go in for another attack. If ka possessed the strength to he would also be capable of throwing target around, or even pull down large structures if he wrapped the wires around certain objects. Another great feature to this combat style is that it can also be used in conjuncture with his shurikenjutsu, by attaching the wire onto a shuriken Ka is capable of roughly manipulating his shuriken by swinging his arms around, Or for the price of 1 D rank worth of chakra per string he will able able to more finely control his projectiles per post (total) he maintains said control. Of course the limit is 1 string per finger, so lets hope we don't lose a digit right?

Approved

Approved