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PostSubject: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 10:56 am

Name:1,000 Shurkiens of Death
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive

Description: A genjutsu in which the user looks to be throwing 1,000 Shuriken at rapid speed. However, this is just a mere illusion. However, it is ideal if you want to slip in a shuriken or two. after the basic handsigns, the user begins to throw a barrage of Shuriken at the opponent. While many of these are but mere illusions, some of them may be real so watch out! the user can also move around while performing this jutsu. It is very dangerous if you do not break it quick. It can be broken by will power/ itsugan. not much of a draw back it takes little chakra and it is useless without any really weapons. in addition, this genjustu is started by a chakra covered Shuriken, this is why the first one thrown is always real.


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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 10:57 am

Name:Awakened Fears
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: D-SSS
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description:The fears within the target's subconscious mind are transformed into terrifying and frightful images that its conscious mind can visualize. The target experiences a horde of phantasmal images swirling around its body, tearing and clawing at it. Those who undergo such a devastating feel will become shaken up, leaving a taste of un morale to attacks and capability to think. When the user is "D" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of twenty meters. When the user is "C" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of thirty meters. When the user is "B" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of fourty meters. When the user is "A" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of fifty meters. When the user is "S" Class, the user is capable of performing this technique off into the distance of seventy meters. At SS the user is capable of peforming this technique off unto the distance of eighty meters and 100 meters at SSS. The user sends chakra out reaching the distance available for their current rank, what ever comes into contact with the chakra becomes caught in the Genjustu.


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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 10:57 am

Name:Magen: Hebi Hyoushi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Snake Binding Technique)
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid

Description: The user performs the handseals, ending with holding the Snake handseal. Without warning and sound, an illusionary shadow snake appears underneath the opponent’s feet and rapidly coils around the opponent before ending with its’ open mouth poised right over the opponent has exposed neck. This jutsu is used to prohibit the opponent’s movement and to induce a large amount of fear in the opponent. The user must hold the Ram handseal for the duration of the jutsu. This justu can be started by placing chakra around a object and getting the opponent or opponents to look at it, The use can use his voice to activate the Genjustu at A rank


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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 11:42 am

Name:Tenrai Meimu: Eiei Hyoushi no Bunshin (Divine Illusion: Eternal Snake Clone)
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive

Description: Creates clones that, when hit, turn into a cluster of illusionary Snakes that will slither back together within a turn. The user performs the handseals, creating a much more powerful variation of the Bunshin no Jutsu. These Bunshins, when hit, will fall backwards completely off their feet. Before hitting the ground though, they begin to levitate within the air about an inch from the ground and then, after a few seconds, disperse into a mass of Snakes. Within one turn, these Snakes have pieced themselves back together into the regular Bunshin.
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 11:54 am

Name: Silent arms
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: C, B
Class: Offensive

Description: The user performs handseals, when forming the handseals for a Genjutsu technique after this technique the hands of the user will appear as if they are not moving, allowing the Genmaster to take the opponent by surprise. When the B-rank is learned this effect continues for ten turns, keeping the users arms still each time seals are being formed for a Genjutsu technique, however, when a ninjutsu technique is used the effect will break.
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 12:47 pm

1,000 Shuriken of Death, Silent Arms and Eternal Snake Clone are Approved.

I'm iffy on the Snake Binding Technique because of the very vague activation of the jutsu. I'll leave this decision to another mod.

Explain how one can become trapped in the Awakened Fears Genjutsu, as Genjutsu aren't used like normal jutsu. They require some sort of specific medium/action to lock in the opponent.
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 1:50 pm

mmmk completely agree with tet on the approved things, just a reminder, the clone one is still a gen so will only deal mental damage when using the clones but never the less its ok.

Snake binding, Retype of the words of it please. I read it and its kind of ok, then you restart the jutsu explination over again half way through the description. So clean that up and We'll take another look at it.

and again I'm with Tet here that Awakened Fears needs a specific activation to it. The other thing I want to say here is make it a scaling tech, D-S. Drop all the ranges down by 10m as well. I will say that you can kick it up a bit at the end to keep the S rank a full 70m. That being said let it be known that we have two "extra" ranks here. SS and SSS rank jutsus so you can take it on up to SSS rank and say SS = 80m and SSS = 100m and I'd be ok with that too.
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 2:54 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime7th February 2013, 3:20 pm

your Awakened Fears should be "D-SSS"

other than that everything is approved, provided Tet doesn't have anything to say
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime12th May 2013, 2:31 am

Name: Face in the Crowd
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: D
Class: Supplementary
Range: user

Description: A technique where it creates a subtle illusion over the form of the user and makes them like an in descript member of those around them. The features become subdued and their mannerisms are similar to those that are around the user. There must at least be sixteen members of the same type of people around the user for this technique to take effect. The user becomes like those around them, such as town guards, guests at a party etc. This technique is very helpful against those that wish to find the user by visual means.
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime12th May 2013, 2:49 am

Name:Tenrai Meimu: Eiei Hyoushi no pila (Divine Illusion: Eternal Snake pillar)(Sig)
Classification: Ninjustu/Genjustu
Rank: A
Class: Supplementary

Description: Mujin slaps his hands together to start this technique forming nearby shadows into Snake pillars that stand 100 feet high once formed the shadows cannot vanish from any form off light and seemingly attack targets within the circle but this is a mere illusion from being inside the genjustu. The pillars glow and chakra burst into a circle forming a dome 50 meters wide once inside anyone but the user and who he wishes cannot break out off genjustu unless everyone else in the area can also break the genjustu. The dome is sturdy and can only be broken by breaking each pillar dealing A rank damage to each from the outside and S rank from within.


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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime14th May 2013, 7:59 pm

Face in the Crowd: I'm fine with this, just keep in mind people will be able to tell you apart from the crowd if they can see your chakra signature

Tenrai Meimu: get rid of the chakra draining part and it's approved. Or, if you want to keep the chakra draining get rid of this part "anyone but the user and who he wishes cannot break out off genjustu unless everyone else in the area can also break the genjustu"
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime14th May 2013, 8:02 pm

Edited taking out the chakra absorb
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime14th May 2013, 8:04 pm

Everything is approved then, unless Meim or Vix has objections.
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime14th May 2013, 8:56 pm

change that name.....

Dare they disgrace the name Meimu with such pitty crap
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime15th May 2013, 2:57 pm

Name:Magen: Hebi Hyoushi Sastsu (Demonic Illusion: Snake Binding Death)
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid

Description:When the user performs the handseals, the user suddenly disappears from the opponent's eyes in a shimmering form. When the user disappears from the very sense of sight of the technique, the opponent will find themselves incapable of moving for a brief moment of time as a large snake begins to form along the very ground. The snake grows larger and larger as it begins to wrap its body around the very user. As this is done then the opponent is incapable of moving at all in any type of movement unless they are capable of escaping the GenJutsu. When everything is safe and the opponent is in the clear of moving that is when the user shows their face by doing what is considered to be "morphing" from the snake appearing on mouth or around the opponent as they would use a melee style attack against the opponent. The user is really just moving to attack the opponent while they are immobilized. This genjustu is activated through voice


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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime15th May 2013, 3:10 pm

Name: Ckathulu From Within
Classification: Genjustu
Rank: B
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description:Once that target is caught in the GenJutsu, which occurs whenever the opponent sees the user creating the technique, they begin to feel something moving inside of them. When the opponent is caught by the technique blood, covered Snakes come out of every hole of the user, which is the mouth, the nose, the ears, the eyes, and every other location including the wounds of the opponent in their body. This Jutsu is borderline Realism however once the Jutsu is over, they do not taste the blood, or smell the blood. While within this technique, the user smells and feels the power of blood as well as other bodily fluids. One of the effects is causing a gagging reflex. This gives the feeling of a helpless sort of weakening on the body. This stops when the Jutsu stops.

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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime15th May 2013, 4:25 pm

Snake Binding Death: remove the part of where if the genjutsu lands the opponent dies, there is always a chance of escape. Anything else is considered god modding

Ckathulu from Within: I dont know what you mean by "This Jutsu is borderline Realism" but only Fabrication can be genjutsu that is real, and only Dakar can use Fabrication. As long as you dont make it so this actually happens to the opponent and that it remains ONLY an illusion, then it's approved

Snake Pillar Assault: Umm... I'm gonna blatantly say no to this one, unless Meim or Vix says otherwise.
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime15th May 2013, 4:34 pm

Edited everything
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PostSubject: Re: Mujin's Genjustu   Mujin's Genjustu Icon_minitime15th May 2013, 4:43 pm

Approved then
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