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PostSubject: Clay as sharp as a Razor.   Clay as sharp as a Razor. Icon_minitime27th April 2020, 2:00 pm

Paru Paru no Mi:

Shurikenjutsu:

Juryoku Techniques (Feel free to add them to the Juryoku Clan):

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PostSubject: Re: Clay as sharp as a Razor.   Clay as sharp as a Razor. Icon_minitime13th June 2021, 4:21 pm

Paru Paru no Mi and Shurikenjutsu are all okayed.

I want to clarify whether or not the Gravitas Shuri techniques can be stacked with their lower variants. If not, then they're fine. If so, they need a cap or some form of diminishing returns.

Keen Eye will need an activation time to establish "focus" on a target. If he can focus on multiple objects/individuals at once this will need to be stated and the activation time will of course be longer. Only being able to focus on a single target will make the activation time considerably quicker.
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PostSubject: Re: Clay as sharp as a Razor.   Clay as sharp as a Razor. Icon_minitime14th June 2021, 4:51 pm

Corrections made.
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PostSubject: Re: Clay as sharp as a Razor.   Clay as sharp as a Razor. Icon_minitime14th June 2021, 5:02 pm

Volley seems just a smidge underpowered for a B-Rank. You can have it start at 2 Projectiles and cap at 6, instead of 1 to 5.

All other techniques are approved and you'll be good to go once you make the above change.
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PostSubject: Re: Clay as sharp as a Razor.   Clay as sharp as a Razor. Icon_minitime14th June 2021, 8:49 pm

I made an error, it was supposed to be a D-rank technique.
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PostSubject: Re: Clay as sharp as a Razor.   Clay as sharp as a Razor. Icon_minitime14th June 2021, 10:01 pm

Okie dokie, everything looks good! Approved unless someone else has any concerns
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PostSubject: Re: Clay as sharp as a Razor.   Clay as sharp as a Razor. Icon_minitime7th July 2021, 1:38 pm

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