Reiver's Jutsus

Rokkaku Shuriken – One shuriken, if you want more raise the rank, also they move at D-rank speed

kurisutaru hoi-ru – can reach D-rank speeds

Nijū Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu – Approved

Fuinjutsu Trap – A-rank, way out is with a unsealing fuinjutsu A-rank or higher

Keiyaku Fūin – B-rank

Kesshō Ojigi – Creating arrows is a separate jutsu. Arrow amount will depend on chakra amount not your rank, each arrow will cost D-rank amount, no unlimited.

Kuchiyose: Kaso Rairai – Say it summons fire rats not rats set on fire, because the way you have it you have rat summoning. Then give an amount to how many are created.

Kuchiyose: Kaso Rairai - ability to summon rats, immersed by fire < i was pretty sure it meant rats that are already on fire? also i am only looking for it to be an attack, any idea on how to word it?

kurisutaru hoi-ru – would making it become faster with per users rank be better?

Rokkaku Shuriken – one? i don't see the point in saying it only makes a single six sided shuriken and D-rank speed? how do you limit throwing speed? it is just making a crystal tool.

Fuinjutsu Trap and Keiyaku Fūin – looks like im gonna have to find new ones XD

Kesshō Ojigi – alright so just remove the arrows and this should get approved?

Rokkaku Shuriken - Throwing speed is equal to your speed. Creating several is to much for a D-rank, which is why I said if you want several increase the rank.

kurisutaru hoi-ru - It'll become faster based on the chakra you waste for it.

Kesshō Ojigi - basically yeah

Kaso Rairai - just say they are rats made out of pure fire chakra and thats it

Alrighty, well at the moment, if i keep Rokkaku shuriken at d rank is it possible to train it to a high rank? id assume so but i wanna make sure.

alrighty on the last three.

no it is not, you will have to make separate techs at higher ranks, training techs to higher ranks is True All Taijutsu users only

ahhh, okay okay ill just make different techs when i get to a higher level! XD

oh, instead of 1 would i be able to get away with it as a d rank with three?

okay 3 will work

awesomeness, XD they should all be up to par now

All good, approved

Some new Jutsus here

Name: Crystal Release: Weighted Shuriken
Classification: Fighting Style
Rank: D-rank
Class: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long

Description:  Valen is unique in that he has both the crystal release chakra nature transformation and Water Release, to that extent he is more attuned at crystalizing water than the regular crystal release user, almost to the level that a Suisho Clan member is able to crystalize liquid based chakra release natures. Because of that Valen has developed a fighting style which allows him to take existing sources of water before crystalizing them to form his crystal release shuriken. When using a source of water he is able to create more shuriken then with out a source, once they crystallize they retain water's density albeit being light-weight when wielded by Valen due to being partially comprised of his own chakra. Six shuriken per D-rank while using a mixture of water and chakra. Three shuriken while using just chakra to form the shuriken. Piercing is related to the strength tier.  

Name: Crystal Release: Hooked Shuriken
Classification: Shurikenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Varies

Description:  Valen creates several crystal shuriken which form the basis of many of his shurikenjutsu techniques. The shuriken are four-sided with curved blades with hooks in the middle of each blade, which upon entering flesh is unable to be pulled out unless one has D-rank strength or above or a medical jutsu for the safe removal of objects from flesh D-rank or above. Upon being pulled out forcibly the victim will sustain additional bleed damage equal to a D-rank each of their posts (total five) unless it is healed or the bleeding is stemmed. Each cost a D-rank of chakra to form and can be used interchangeably with normal shuriken. They are very resistant however being damaged only by C-rank physical or a D-rank chakra based technique with piercing while D-rank techniques/objects as well as other shuriken/kunai simply are deflected when they are thrown without giving them even a scratch unless it is strong against crystal release. Three per D-rank chakra while using a mixture of water and chakra. One per D-rank without using a water mixture. Piercing is related to the strength tier.  

Name: Crystal Release: Giant Hooked Shuriken
Classification: Shurikenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Mid

Description:  Valen creates a giant version of his crystal release: Hooked Shuriken, this time around the size of his body, before utilizing it in a throw. Similar to the original technique it can be used interchangeably with normal shuriken however it costs a C-rank amount of chakra to form. In addition when embedded into flesh it is unable to be removed unless the victim has C-rank strength (or above), or a medical jutsu for the safe removal of objects from flesh also D-rank or above. Upon being pulled out forcibly the victim will sustain additional bleed damage equal to a D-rank each post (total ten posts), unless it is healed or the bleeding is stemmed. It is very resilient requiring a B-rank physical technique or a C-rank chakra based technique with piercing to destroy while normal C-rank and below won't even scratch it unless it is strong against crystal release. It is surprisingly light when thrown by the user however anyone else it is somewhat heavy requiring at least D-rank strength to pick up. Piercing is related to the strength tier.  

Name: Hooked Shuriken Wild Dance
Classification: Shurikenjutsu
Rank: B-rank (D-rank Chakra per three Shuriken)
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid

Description: Valen throws his Crystal Release: Hooked Shuriken in rapid succession before controlling them due to being comprised of his chakra with pinpoint accuracy bombarding his opponent with multiple precise strikes while controlling these shuriken they move at crashing ground release speeds, in addition normal shuriken can be used during this technique to further confuse and overwhelm an opponent. Piercing is related to the strength tier.

Weighted Shuriken - no reducing chakra cost, if attempting this on liquid based jutsus, you will need to waste chakra equal to that technique

Hooked Shuriken - piercing relies on strength tier, the D-rank bleeding after the shuriken is pulled out will only last 5 posts

Giant Hooked Shuriken - D-rank bleeding after shuriken is pulled out, will only last 10 posts. Piercing again will rely on strength tier

Wild Dance - due to being able to control them, make it B-rank

All of the techs: im not reducing the chakra price i am splitting it evenly between a source of water and the shuriken i am creating. pretty much all the shuriken are equal parts water and equal parts crystal chakra. however if the said user does not have the proper source of water then the cost is thrown at chakra meaning you can only create half the amount of shuriken you would if you used both water and chakra get it?

Wild dance: it is pretty much a multiple barrage of shuriken on a precise target or multiple shuriken aimed at multiple opponents. Then when you launch them if you use your Crystal Shuriken then it will be able to be controlled by you individually. so in other words i could have say 12 normal shuriken and only 1 crystal shuriken, the only one that would be controlled is the crystal.

normal and giant hooked shuriken: aside from making a tech how would a shuriken user (normally a ninja) use a strength tier? i mean like shuriken are sharp so they would pierce/cut people so a hooked one would lodge into a person. so the bleeding effect is 10 posts, and the smaller one is 5?

Weighted Shuriken - [This reduces the price he usually has to pay by half splitting it evenly between the source of water and his own chakra,] <- then change the way that is written because it is saying the chakra cost is reduced, at least that is how it comes off, which chakra cost reduction is not allowed.

Wild Dance - due to the controlling part, its B-rank.

the strength tier thing, yes shuriken are sharp so to a person with no defenses it would do something, but to those with defenses it will do nothing. If you keep it the way it is, it will be E-rank piercing and will be left at that. Now to gain strength there is chakra enhanced strength or life enhanced strength, you can pick one. Also bleeding times, yeah.

Weighted shuriken - my bad i can understand how that can come off like that, would something like "when using a source of water he is able to create more shuriken then with out a source" work in replacement?


Wild dance - hmm that seems fine, i still have 2 b slots, and on another note, would raising the speed of the shuriken be too much? aside from the controlling it would be a rather weak sided b rank.


Ahh okay okay, so adding in that piercing is dependent on the strength tier of the user would make it so say one has A rank strength they can do damage to anyone with arank and below defense? what is the difference between life and chakra enhanced strength?

Oh okay for Weighted Shuriken. - Approved. Meaning that you'll be able to split it evenly between the chakra and the water source. Like how Deidara needs clay for his bombs.

Weighted Shuriken - approval revoked until change of wording is made. That is fine Goro, it just has to have a change because the way it currently reads is a no, while the way you explained is a yes.

Wild Dance - you can raise the speed to B-rank, there is no problem with that

Life and Chakra strength, nothing really just what you use for the source. One uses life/blood, the other uses chakra but both do the same thing in the end.

alrighty, they should be up to par now

All Approved

Max it at S rank in power, also be aware, without water nearby creating this technique would cost 1 rank higher chakra. so if you went to make an S rank based version, itd cost SS rank chakra. This is because water jutsu usually need a water source, unless they are one of the few techniques where the user spits out the water like in EWCW. So this portion needs to be taken out. "With a source of water the user is able to create two blades for the price of one."

After the two edits are done I think this shall be approved

Alrighty Tets should be approve-able

Approved