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| Personal Info Name: Pyua Odaku Alias: none Age: 13 Gender: Female Height: 5'3 Weight: 108 Zodiac Sign: Cancer Personality: She is often a shy concealed person hidding away from most. She often only really comes out of her shell around Devin Uchi. Pyua is a defensive player in everything she does, from meeting new people, walking thruogh town, eating, and even fighting. She doesn't work well with crouds and often will shut down, avoiding eye contact, staying silent and curling up into a ball (metaphorically speaking). Appearance: - Spoiler:
History: - Pre-Birth, Clan, Parrents:
The story of the Odaku family is a quiet one. Being the smallest of the ten families a part of the Makihoshigo. The Odaku was prized in the Makihoshigo for their defensive abilities and near perfect counter attacks. Once the original Makihoshigo fell apart from the battles over control the Odaku slipped away quietly. The small family quickly found their way to Ibara to seek refuge. Ibara welcome them but as the entire family was blind doubted they would servive long even inside the village. They were given a space on the forest floor, also decided because they were blind and the kage was scared of the family dieing of 'suicides' off the canopy. They have how ever lived peacfully on the ground avoiding most conflicts. Few of their members actually join Ibara's military but the clan members do often provide support in many other areas.
Inokihi, Pyua's father, was an extremely talented, extremely advance child of the Odaku. His father was the current leader when he was born, but like most members he did not serve in the military. Inokihi's parents owned and ran a small weapons shop in Ibara that made some of the finest weapons in the village. Naturally Inokihi learned many of the families smithing skills, but also learned many of the clans abilities. He surpassed his father skills gaining access to all stages of the doujutsu before even entering the academy. Inokihi was the one to approach his parents about Ibara's academy. They allowed him to enter and as such he began his school life to join the ranks of the village.
His school life on the other hand was cut short as a meeting of the Makihoshigo was called. Nearly the entire family left Ibara for this meeting. It was unclear at the time as to why the meeting was called, and to this day Inokihi has no clue why. At this meeting how ever Inokihi met the love of his life for the first time. Another family of the Makihoshigo named, Hogosha, was only slightly larger than the Odaku. The hogosha on the other hand was believed to be slowly dieing away, and this was even more evident as the only children from the family to attend the meeting was a young girl about the same age of Inokihi. Inokihi couldn't take his eyes off the girl. He followed her in the distance and couldn't help but think about her ever moment of the day. When the meeting was over Inokihi was devistated. He hadn't even learned her name yet, nor where she was from. On the travels back Inokihi escaped from his family in search of the Hogosha. It wouldn't take long for him to catch up to them. It was the dead of night when he found the young girl. Silently he approached her with only one thing on his mind. "whats your name?" Inokihi whispered to the girl from his tree top position over looking the girl laying on the ground. The girl gave a simple smile replying, "Sindel..." Inokihi was satisfied but didn't want to leave the girl, but reluctantly had to return to his family.
After returning to the village Inokihi's schooling fell hard. He was very adept in combat and was famous for ending most fights with a single blow. His tests though fell hard and when the time came to take the academy exam he failed. Twice more Inokihi would attempt to pass the academy and fail. He was only proving the Ibara's claim that the Odaku were weak and meaningless. Inokihi would return to work for his family. It would be nearly a year later before Inokihi would attempt to join the military.
A call would come to Inokihi's family's weapons shop. The Kage himself ordered several specially made weapons. Inokihi not only helped forged them but took up the duty of delivering them to the kage himself. Along the route Inokihi's natural sensor powers seemed to kick in. An dark almost evil aura took over as he passed a small group of people. Rushing forward he pushed through a group of guards into the kage's office to warn him. The kage simply laughed it off at the thought of a blind man being able to sense better than the all ready on the job sensor ninja. Inokihi on the other hand, knew what was coming, and as he left the Kage's office he waited. As the attack came in Inokihi was the first to react. Takeing out six people, destroying them particle by particle, the Kage finally realized the boys potential. The Kage granted Inokihi the rank of Genin allowing him to enter the chuunin exams with a proxy team. If he could prove himself there, the Odaku family would be held in much higher esteem than now.
With only a month to prepare with his pair of teammates Inokihi predicted failure. Like most of the village, they looked down on blind shinobi. The day of the exams sooned rolled around. It was set up as the classic exams. They started with a written exam. Both members of Inokihi smirked as they both though there was no way for a blind man to pass the exams. Given no special exam, brail and the such, Inokihi even doubted himself. After entering the exam though he realized he had a better chance than most of the people here. Watching the motions of the particles around all the other people he could see nearly perfectly what they wrote. Inokihi passed with no problem shocking nearly everyone.
Round two took the teams into open combat with one another. With the massive numbers of teams they needed to weeded out. During the first night in the forested area, Inokihi was setting awake as his teammates rested a moment. He kept a careful eye out of any unnatural movments. A small shake came from far off the Inokihi picked up long before his teammates did. Within seconds though an enemy team was upon them. Several large explosions was set off and the all ready unprepared, as far as team work went, team was seperated into one on one fights. Inokihi tried to moved closer to his teammates but was cut off, by a female ninja. Sindel Hogosha. The pair stood silent staring at each other for several moments. Slowly the pair moved closer to each other unable to strike out at each other. Standing no more than inches from each other Inokihi's world became near perfect.
Out of the darkness though another large explosion was set off by the other four shinobi fighting. Inokihi shielded Sindel takeing several hard hits to his back. The two love birds swiftly escaped the fighting putting distance between them and their own teams. Hiding their selves in a distance cave, Sindel began tedning to Inokihi's wounds. Slowly the pair would meet lips for the first time in their lives, and they would prove their love for each other that night.
The next morning the pair set out not to meet up with their teams but to the meeting ground. Unexpectedly their own teams had given them the neccessary materials to pass the exam. The lovers would shock all as both had abandoned their own teams and entered the next round as a new team. The judges at first rejected them but soon the proctor subsided and allowed it. He did have plans later on though to punish the pair. As the one on one matches began the pair swiftly moved through each match not even expecting what was to come, but at the third round of the battles the pair was pitted against each other.
Sindel told Inokihi this was his win, she wasn't cut out for the world of shinobi and he had a better chance. He was to take the win with ease and at first agreed to the plans, but as the match began things changed. He moved in to deliver a single blow, not enough for a kill shot but enough to prove his victory, but stopped short. He couldn't help himself. He met Sindel's lips again before taking her hands in his. Staying connected with her he forced a Kunai in her hand and drove it into his own side, ending the match in her victory.
Inokihi fell unconcious from blood lost and was rushed off. At first the villages only rejected injured ninja. The exams at the time was not only a way to advance in ranks but if criticly injured they would just let the shinobi die as a kind of population control. Infact some villages rewarded the kills as a way of thinning the other villages military abilities. Nearly a week later Inokihi woke up in a hidden village unknown to him. The village of the Hogosha. They had witnessed the passion between Sindel and Inokihi and saw it as a chance to merge to the pair of families.
Not but a year later the pair was wedded and Sindel and the Hogosha moved in with the Odaku in Ibara. The pair was the perfect couple for each other. They did everything for each other and would do everything for each other. Life was good. Neither of the pair passed the exams but both had made a name for theirselves in nearly all of the villages. It wasn't but a year after they wed that a job was presented to Inokihi by the kage. The kage specificly asked for Inokihi as a new sensor ninja on his staff. Between the exams and protecting him Inokihi was the best choice for the job. Sindel pleeded with him not to take the job. Most of the villagers just looked for a chance to eleminate the weak shinobi. She couldn't bare to see Inokihi die. Inokihi couldn't turn down the job though.
- Birth of a Daughter and Death of a Mother:
Not but a week later Sindel would announce her pregnancy to the clan and more importantly Inokihi. Inokihi ccould not be happier. Nine months later Pyua was born. Inokihi couldn not be happier holding his new daughter. It wasn't but moments later as his happiness was ripped from him. Sindel had complications during the birth and the medical staff moved into action, but there was nothing to do. Inokihi was devestated as his wife laid dead, and his newborn daughter let out her first cries. Inokihi wasn't the same person after Sindel's death. It was weeks before he could even hold his daughter again without loosing it. He made up his mind. He would never find another love like Sindel but he would put just as much love into his daughter.
Pyua grew up with Inokihi watching over her closely. He wasn't going to let anything happen to her. After a while Inokihi returned to work for the kage. Unable, or rather unwilling, to leave Pyua with anyone else of the village she often came to work with Inohiki at the kage's office. It was here at the Kage's office where Pyua met her first real friend, Devin. Pyua had lived a very sheltered life up to this point and because of this had developed an over shy personality. She would completely shut down after coming face to face with some one new. Devin though wasn't like other people. She wouldn't let the shy girl escape her wrath. Soon though, the duo became the greatest of friends knowing exactly what each other was thinking. Pyua would bring the responsible side to the friendship but was often out voiced by Devin and dragged along for the ride.
Pyua herself trained under har father unlocking the first four stages of the doujutsu before entering the academy. She wasn't near as advance as her father but she had something her father didn't. She had been graunted the Reverse Eye. To this day Inokihi believes full well its a gift from Sindel. A final parting gift to her child, and a good-bye to her true love.
Ninja Info Village: Ibara Rank: Academy Genin Clan: Makihoshigo Chakra Nature: N/A (Vibration) Kekkai Genkai: Teishou-Yure (Stage 6) Primary Weapon: Rapier (forced to carry by father) - Spoiler:
Secondary Weapon: Matishin (forced to carry by father / Family Blade) Ability: The blade its self can amplify the stager four doujutsu of the Makihoshigo. Once the eye is activated the blade will vibrate and give the illusion of burning the air with each slash leaving the particles in its wake super heated. This blade does have a second ability in that if used with the Reverse eye the blade gives the illusion of cutting the air by stoping the particles in its wake. Any attack that crosses the 'lines' one draws with it will loose a rank in power. The 'lines' left behind by the blade last three posts before they return to normal. - Spoiler:
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| - Given:
Ninjutsu: Name: Body Replacement Jutsu Classification: Ninjusu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach using the Body Flicker Technique, the moment an attack hits.
Name: Ninja Way Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Passive Range: N/A
Description: A Ninja has a code of ethics which define themselves as a ninja it is because of that their natural stamina has been hardened. Because of that D-rank techniques do half as much damage as they would towards the other races as they do towards ninja.
Name: Clone Jutsu Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something.
Name: Transformation Classification: Ninjutsu Rank: D-rank Class: Supplementary Range: N/A
Description:This jutsu allows the user to transform either themselves or another object into the appearance of another person, animal, or object.
- Natural Law:
Name: Natural Law: Burst Classification: Taijutsu Rank: D Class: Physical Range: 10 meters
Description: The user throws a hard punch or kick and from that the air particles begin to vibrate quickly and create a concussion wave through the air, easily capable of knocking away equal rank range tech or lower.
Name:Natural Law: Solidity Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range: Must be with in range of targets vibrating particles.
Description: Due to the clans doujutsu causing the vibration of particles of anything around them ally physical defence or weapon/shield will have their strength reducing by one rank. As such if a shield will block B-Rank attacks, once in range of the clan member with an active fourth level doujutsu it will only block C-Rank attacks. If it is a weapon that will break under a S-Rank attack, it will now break under an A-Rank attack. In the same sense if the member of this clan is in direct contact with the weapon/shield/physical defence it will drop by two ranks. This tech all so includes earth style jutsu or any other physical chakra style attack.
Name:Natural Law: Shatter Classification: KG Rank: SSS-Rank Class: Passive Range: Must be in cantact with the user
Description: This ability may only be used with the sixth form of the doujutsu active. The target must be with in direct contact with the physical object. This tech if used enough will cause the particles to vibrate enough to shatter the bonds that they are held to. This effectivly destroys the object on a molecular level. The time it takes to break an object depends on a rank. Starting at D-Rank, it requires three contacts to shatter for each rank. D-Rank = 3 contacts C-Rank = 6 contacts B-Rank = 9 contacts A = 12 contacts and so on. If the seventh form of the doujutsu is active a single touch counts as three. (Can not be used on the Human body)
Name:Natural Law: Illusion Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range: N/A
Description: By the fifth level of the doujutsu, a heat wave like effect begins to form around the user distorting the view of anyone looking at them. This distortion effectivly allow the user to dodge physical attacks, ranged or hand to hand, equal to their rank. A the sixth level of the doujutsu the user can effectivly dodge physical attacks a rank higher than them. During the seventh level of the doujutsu the user can effectivly dodge attacks two ranks higher than them.
Name:Natural Law: Covalent Bond Breaking Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range: Must be with in range of targets vibrating particles.
Description: Once the fourth form of the doujutsu is activated the user can break down water particles back into two elements, Hydrogen and Oxygen. This ability, when the user is submerged in water, effectivly allows the user to break apart water particles, allowing the user to effectivly breath 'under water'. Under water this process is evident by bubbles around the user. These bubbles in the water also allows the user to effectivly dodge physical attacks a rank bellow their rank. This tech will not break apart water being used in another person's attack.
Name:Natural Law: True Heat Classification: KG Rank: None Class: D-SSS Rank / Passive Range: In contact with the user's hands
Description: Clan members that have unlocked the fourth form of the doujutsu have access to this tech, without having to have the doujutsu active. This tech allows the user to vibrate the particles withing a few inches of his hand. These paticles are super heated and will instantly evaporate any water tech equal to the user's rank. This tech becomes passive if stage four doujutsu is active.
Name:Natural Law: Fabricated Flight Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range:
Description: This tech can only be used when the stage four doujutsu is active. By vabritating the particles under ones feet. By breaking the bonds in the particles to their basic elements, the lighter gasses will simulate a form of flight enabling the uer to basicly walk on air. This tech is not a 'flight' tech because where it allows the user to levitate, their speed in the air is two ranks lower than user.
Name:Natural Law: Wind Break Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range: With in range of user's doujutsu
Description: This skill can only be used with stage four doujutsu. With the Vibration of particles the user can break the bonds in the air around the user. These breaks in the bonds will happen nearly instaniously. This ability will nullify all wind style attacks used on the clan member that are a single rank bellow this tech's user.
- Reverse Eye:
Name: Reverse Eye Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range: Must be with in range of targets vibrating particles.
Description: A very unique trait born into about one in a million clan members. Its a different version of the clans Doujutsu. Essentially the person born with the Reverse Eye trait has a total of 14 dojutsu stages. For each of the original doujutsu there is a total opposite eye giving nearly the polar version in abilities. The eyes its self looks nearly the same as the original but inverted in colors. The Reverse Eye is a major disadvantage as well. The Reverse eye must be activated at all of its stages and the user gives up the ability to see entirely, including the vibration of particles. Ever level of the Reverse Eye can only be activated when the same rank of the original eye is activated but costs no chakra to activate/deactivate them. -Stage 1: Through the removal of one's sight entirely the other senses are greatly enhanced. The users sense of smell and hearing will nearly triple allowing them to hear or smell things well outside of the human's natural spectrum. The user's sense of touch increases enough to feel the slightes winds cause by nearly any movment. -Stage 2: Again The senses are increased to a maximum level. Sounds and sents can be picked up from nearly five times the normal range the stage one eye would be able to pick up. The users sense of touch is now able to pick up the small amounts of static in the air caused by any living person. -Stage 3: The stage three eye is the furthest from the original eye, in the sense its not even an opposite. It retains the original two stages abilities but it decreses the users speed, strength, and endurence by one rank. -Stage 4: The stage four eye slows the vibration of particles around the user extremely. The user's body temperature will actully drop as well as the temperature around the user. This is ofter only evident if some one gets close enough to the opponent. This eye also drops the power of vibration tech by a rank without changing the chakra cost. The hum caused by the original eye is not present in this eye. -Stage 5: Again the particles slow even more further droping the temperature of the air and the body temperature of the user. This level becomes the much more noticble than the privous as often you will begin to see the user's breath. This eye also bring forward a new ability returning the strength and speed to the same teir as the user. The user's endurance is increased by a single rank. Anyone within range of the user will actually instantly notice the drop in the temprature. -Stage 6: At this version in the eye the abilities near their maximum. It increases the strength of the user by a rank and endurance by two ranks. The user's skin will begin to pale and turn blue around the lips and fingers. Anyone who comes within range of the user will recieve D-Rank Frost Bite damage nearly instantanioulsy from getting to close to the user. Prolong use of this eye can cause the user to freeze to death. -Stage 7: Ofter refered to in ledgens as the Absolute Zero Eye completely stops the movment of particles around the user. The ground at their feet will actually instantly freeze. Air particles will begin to frost creating an kind of hail effect around the user. Anyone that comes within range of the user will instantly recieve C-Rank frost bite damage. From prolonged exposure to this tech, be it friend, Foe or User, will freeze joints and cause death. (Five posts for user, Ten touches for friend/Foe)
- Reverse Law:
Name:Reverse Law: Solidity Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range: Must be with in range of targets vibrating particles.
Description: This skill can only be used with stage four or higher Reverse Eye. Due to the Revese Eye's natural effect of stoping vibrations, defensive physical objects are stregthened by two ranks, meaning a shield that can withstand C-Rank attacks will now be able to take A-Rank attacks without fail.
Name:Reverse Law: Absolute Zero Classification: KG Rank: SSS-Rank Class: Passive Range: Must be in cantact with the user
Description: With a certin amount of contacts the user can actually perminately freeze the movment of particles in an object. This sets in the hardest freeze possible making anything brittle enough that the breeze would break it. This tech can only be used with the sixth form of the reverse eye activated. 2 contacts = D-Rank 4 contacts = C-Rank 6 = B-Rank 8 = A-Rank and so on. 7 contacts with a person will freeze what ever body part where the contact was made, e.x. If contact is made through four direct punches to the user using the left arm and three blocks will freeze that arm and it will shatter under the least amount of pressure.
Name:Reverse Law: Covalent Bonding Classification: KG Rank: None Class: Passive Range: Must be with in range of targets vibrating particles.
Description: With at least the fourth stage of the reverse eye active the user can began to both form and freeze water molocules in the air. These frosted molecules begin to gather in clumps forming a semi-hail around the user. This hail can effectivly block any ranged attack equal to or lower than the user's rank. The hail can only block physical range attacks.
Name:Reverse Law: False Frost Classification: KG Rank: None Class: D-SSS Rank / Passive Range: In contact with the user's hands
Description: Clan members that have unlocked the fourth form of the reverse eye have access to this tech, without having to have the doujutsu active. This tech allows the user to instantaniously freeze the particles that come with in inches of her hands. This tech gives the ability to instantly freeze any water tech a rank above the user. In reality the user is not freesing the tech but stopping the particles in place. Once the attack is moved away from the user it will return back to water.
Name:Reverse Law: Dead Air Classification: KG Rank: D-SSS-Rank Class: Passive Range: With in range of user's doujutsu
Description: This tech can obly be used with the stage fifth stage eye activated. The user can instanly stop the vibration of particles affectivly stopping wind style attacks from hitting the user, two ranks higher than the user.
- Father's Secret: Modified Gates:
Name: Chichi no himitsu: Ōpuningu no mon Classification: Kinjutsu/KG Rank: C-rank Class: Offensive/Supplementary Range: Self
Description: A modified version of Releasing the gates developed by Inokihi Odaku, in the attempt to close the gap between him and the higher ranking shinobi of the village. For one turn the user redirects the chakra from their eye's and to their brain opening the first gate. For the first turn this tech is activated the user looses their eye sight and use of their doujutsu, but it returns by the next move at the lowest available level and has to be reopened. This Tech will last a total of 10 posts but gains an extra three posts for each stage of the eye activated.(7th stage active = + 21 post) During the duration of this tech the user's speed, strength, and endurance increases to B-Rank.
Name: Chichi no himitsu: Hīringu no mon Classification: Kinjutsu/KG Rank: C-rank Class: Offensive/Supplementary Range: Self
Description: A modified version of Releasing the gates developed by Inokihi Odaku, in the attempt to close the gap between him and the higher ranking shinobi of the village. With the first gate active the user unlocks the second gate. This gate subtracts two from the time left of the first gate. During this time the user gains another rank in endurance, A-Rank, and as long as just the second gate is open a D-Rank damage is healed. If the third gate is opened the healing effects of this gate is negated. If this gate is still active by the time this tech runs out then the user takes B-rank internal damage from the gate locking back and will be unable to reopen it for the duration of the topic (this effect is also negated if the third gate is unlocked).
Name: Chichi no himitsu: Seimeinomon Classification: Kinjutsu/KG Rank: B-rank Class: Offensive/Supplementary Range: Self
Description: A modified version of Releasing the gates developed by Inokihi Odaku, in the attempt to close the gap between him and the higher ranking shinobi of the village. Again by drawing power from the user's eyes the user opens the third gate. The user's doujutsu is dropped to level 4(if eye is at a higher level) and grants the user A-Rank strength and speed. This tech subtracts two posts from the total post count of the gates duration. At the end of the time limit the user's strength and endurance drops to normal but their speed looses two ranks for six posts.
Name: Chichi no himitsu: Itami no mon Classification: Kinjutsu/KG Rank: B-rank Class: Offensive/Supplementary Range: Self
Description: A modified version of Releasing the gates developed by Inokihi Odaku, in the attempt to close the gap between him and the higher ranking shinobi of the village. Again drawing power from the user's eye the user looses their sight for two turns but in return are granted S-Rank strength and endurance. After the two turns the user must reopen their eyes from level three. This tech subtracts four from the total post count. A small side effect to this gate is the user looses feeling in their body, but at the end all damage delt to the user is combined into one big jolt to the system. If the user recieves C-Rank damage or more the user will instantly pass out. The damage total to cause one to pass out will increase along with the user per rank.
- Teirs:
XX = Trained/Given (XX) = added due to passives XX = Current Rank
Strength - E (0) E Endurance - E (0) E Speed - E (0) E Defence - E (0) E Barrier - E (0) E
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