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 Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]

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Anansi

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PostSubject: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   7th September 2018, 8:09 pm

Fighting Styles:
 

Samadhi:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   17th September 2018, 4:34 pm

Multi Wielding - Muscle Tension fails unless they also possess reaction tiers one rank below her speed.

Karate Mikaduki-Ryu - Seems fine but I hope you know that the damage you deal will be very low due to the type of damage it is.

Naked Warrior Parry - Damage one below the speed.

Tantsuru Mochiduki-Ryu - Tier+ gives -2, Tier++ is -4, +Tier- is -6. Also, should be One Blade Style, not Three.

Two Warrior Parry - Remove the ability to counter attack if the defenses are greater, makes the tech too powerful.

Samadhi - Fighting styles cannot be exclusive. Will Reserve will be 1,1,2,2,3,4,5

Khanika - Remove anything about being able to see into the future.

Appana - This needs to be split into two techniques. Appana - Domination and Appana - Fortification. As it stands it does far too much and is far too powerful. It can target too many things and ends up lasting far too long for the KO duration.

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   17th September 2018, 9:28 pm

Edited. Appana was removed due to laziness and will be reapped at a later date probably

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The Mauve Spider
Qeynan H. Taki
"Mad? Me? Well...I might just be so. But let me tell you, the best people usually are!"

━━━━━━━━┛ ✠ ┗━━━━━━━━
Cthugha | Dagon
Shub-Niggurath | Nyarlathotep
Ithaqua | Hastur
━━━━━━━━┓ ✠ ┏━━━━━━━━


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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   18th September 2018, 5:02 am

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   18th September 2018, 12:51 pm

Shunshin:
 

Eighth Moon Dance:
 

Kasso:
 

Mueisho:
 

Past Confrontations:
 

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The Mauve Spider
Qeynan H. Taki
"Mad? Me? Well...I might just be so. But let me tell you, the best people usually are!"

━━━━━━━━┛ ✠ ┗━━━━━━━━
Cthugha | Dagon
Shub-Niggurath | Nyarlathotep
Ithaqua | Hastur
━━━━━━━━┓ ✠ ┏━━━━━━━━


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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   24th September 2018, 8:01 pm

Approved

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~When I enter the cbox, you will give me at least 5 minutes before asking me for anything. If you do not I reserve the right to hit one of your characters with any technique I wish... From any character I wish.~

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   25th September 2018, 9:38 am

Mutoryu:
 

Ittoryu:
 

Nitoryu:
 

Santoryu:
 

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The Mauve Spider
Qeynan H. Taki
"Mad? Me? Well...I might just be so. But let me tell you, the best people usually are!"

━━━━━━━━┛ ✠ ┗━━━━━━━━
Cthugha | Dagon
Shub-Niggurath | Nyarlathotep
Ithaqua | Hastur
━━━━━━━━┓ ✠ ┏━━━━━━━━


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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   24th January 2019, 10:57 pm

Shishi Sonson - Needs to be C-Rank, re-order table and reduce by a rank, C-S Wound Detection.

Pound Ho(1) - Distance of projectiles 20-60, if it hits a technique of greater rank it is destroyed, the Quartered Damage is only if it hits an element strong against wind.


Pound Ho(2) - Layers drilled through 2-3.

Kaen - No, the wind cutting blades I can understand but generating flame from friction will need to be done some other way.

Daishinkan - A-Rank minimum with Defense only required to prevent instant bifurcation, Defense+Strength required to resist having the weapon cleave mostly into the body. Bleed is 2 D, 4 D each PT or 4 D, C if each turn.

Baki - B-Rank, Defense to prevent amputation, Defense+Strength to prevent limb break, bleed goes 2-4 D.

^For both of the above, I really dislike them, feel like they also should have some kind of downside, like a cooldown or a short charge period.

Nanajuni Pound Ho - Piercing damage one rank below.

Iai: Rashomon - 5-25 ft

Nigiri - +5 feet

Ototo - 5-25 feet

Hirameki - C-Rank

Oni Giri - C-Rank, then damage reduction for breaking through is 4,3,2,1

Yaki Oni Giri - How are you setting the blades on fire? If it's elemental it needs to be Ninkenjutsu, otherwise you need to explain.

[Mumbo jumbo] Oni Giri - B/A/S-Rank Barrier Tiers, not +

Tora Gari - No. The KO needs a duration and a tier-based way to resist, barrier and/or endurance works.

Toro Nagashi - Needs an interception range and specified that it blocks physical based only. Also tier level increase goes 1-5

Gazami Dori - Defense only to stop beheading, Defense+Strength to stop damage, sustaining only pain. Unconsciousness needs a duration and a tier method of negation. Also reduce tier requirements by one rank.

Karasuma Gari - Hybrid normal deflection, chakra/mental deflection(halved), spiritual/natural deflection(Quartered)

Ichi Gorilla - -3 Stamina, when used during Eight Gates, the tiers granted are 2 tier levels higher, not 4.

Hyakuhachi Pound Ho - No. AoE insta-kill technique at B-Rank with rank higher tier negation and no downsides? No.

Ni Gorilla - -4 Stamina, +1 Turn, +2 Turns, same tier increase thing when Eight Gates are active as before, 2 tier levels not 4.

Nigori-Zake - One rank below speed, equal to strength. Detail how much pain is caused.

Senhachiju - Time period of bleed required, also detail whether it's per projectile or if all three hit. If it's per projectile it needs to be reduced massively.

Hyokindama - For projectiles/blows make it 4/2 then 8/4/ then 12/6, if used to proceed the other tech it'll be a B-Rank reaction add-on.

Daibutsu Giri - 10-50 feet, Large M, L, XL

Yasha Garasu - 2 D, 4 D bleed

Ul-Tora Gari - No. You aren't getting a coma tech at A-Rank.

O Tatsumaki - -5 Stamina

Rengoku Oni Giri - -5 stamina, Normal weapons/blacksmith weapons/samurai sword.





***********************
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~When I enter the cbox, you will give me at least 5 minutes before asking me for anything. If you do not I reserve the right to hit one of your characters with any technique I wish... From any character I wish.~

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PostSubject: Re: Making a Warrior [Chiyo's Jutsu]   2nd February 2019, 12:07 am

Edited

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The Mauve Spider
Qeynan H. Taki
"Mad? Me? Well...I might just be so. But let me tell you, the best people usually are!"

━━━━━━━━┛ ✠ ┗━━━━━━━━
Cthugha | Dagon
Shub-Niggurath | Nyarlathotep
Ithaqua | Hastur
━━━━━━━━┓ ✠ ┏━━━━━━━━


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