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PostSubject: Dark Moves[ Elias' Tech List]   7th August 2018, 3:03 pm

Pulse Release:
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Stone Dance:
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Rhythm:
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Dance Tiers:
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Pas Des Deux:
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Moves[ Elias' Tech List]   5th September 2018, 2:23 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dark Moves[ Elias' Tech List]   17th September 2018, 4:02 pm

Earth Release: Chakra Strings - Remove the ability to usurp control from other puppets, that's a lot more difficult than you think. Give additional range, also the speed they sprout from Eli is dependent on his passive, the speed they erupt from earth release techniques is equal to his rank. Lastly, add in the number of strings, just as the original technique has.

Dancing Bulls - Way too powerful, the number of bulls spawned is dependent on your rank, going 1-5. Any form of C-Rank damage will destroy them and due to staying around after initial creation and continuing to attack, their speed is one rank lower than the passive.

Lodestone Shards - Bleed will go 1 D to 5 D. Durability goes D, 3 D, C, B, A. The medical techniques to remove them are way too specific, it's only a D-Rank tech. Removing them with strength doubles the bleed for one round, removing them delicately through any form of medical technique works fine.

Dance O' Surprise Pt 1 - Number of items hidden needs to be placed, dependent on Eli's rank. Also, will cap at small sized objects for this technique.

DoS Pt 2 - Twenty shards without any form of damage cap? No. Number of shards created is dependent on your rank, 2 at D up to 10 at S-Rank. If strength is used, the speed/damage is equal to one below the strength, capping at S-Rank. If Speed is used, the speed/damage is two ranks below, capping at S-Rank.

Dancing Walls - Seemed fine up until the final part. 30 S-Ranks of damage from a B-Rank tech? No. Once again, number of shards it explodes into is dependent on your rank, 2-10. Damage/speed is equal to one rank below the technique used to destroy the wall.

SEPS - C-Rank barrier or reaction tiers one below the speed.

Get On Up - Damage does not work with Tier Levels. Also, the damage/speed is too high for a C-Rank tech. Speed should start at C-Rank and go up in tier levels. Damage should start at C and then go up by 3 D-Ranks each interval.

Rat Trap - Overloaded. Damage will be one below the movement speed. Falling damage will be C-Rank physical.

Pas De Deux - Number of targets is 1,1,2,2,3

Speed Tiers - Not entirely sure what you mean by 'Body Shifting' technique but remove it, speeds+Balancing Techniques is good enough.

Flinch-Flow Ajna 1 - Two Tier levels higher speed, not one rank.

Lag-Flow Ajna 1 - Same as above.

Flow Tempo Ajna - Additional stamina dependent on level, 1-5 for D-S

Flinch-Flow Ajna 2 - Two Tier Levels higher Barrier, three tier levels higher speed.

Lag-Flow Ajna 2 - Same as above.

Flinch Ajna - One rank higher barrier OR equal rank reaction, equal rank barrier and one rank below reaction together also works.

Lag Ajna - Time Slowing or equal reaction.

Flow Ajna 3 - One rank higher Barrier, one rank higher speed.

Flinch Ajna 3 - 6 tier levels higher barrier or two tier levels higher reaction.

Lag Ajna 3 - Time Slowing or two tier levels higher reaction.

Flow Ajna 4 - 6 tier levels higher Barrier, one rank higher speed.

Flinch Ajna 4 - Messed up, wrong copy paste, needs changed.

All Taijutsu techniques - Additional stamina to use dependent on rank, 1-5, D-S.

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PostSubject: Re: Dark Moves[ Elias' Tech List]   23rd September 2018, 5:56 pm

Earth Release: Chakra Strings - Drop all of the number of threads by one.

Dancing Bulls - You made no change to their movement speed. And it says "they can be launched at up to three different targets" you should clarify that this refers to only if you are capable of making multiple bulls at once.

Lodestone Shards - This...needs a range.

DoS Pt 1 - Number of items should be: 2, 3, 4, 5, 6

Get On Up - Your calculations for damage are...wrong. 6 D = 1 C, 2 C = 1 B, 2 B = 1 A, 2 A = 1 S. Using these conversions, change your charts so that the values are correct.

Pas de Deux - Mimicking that which you are not, even if it is only copying movements, is exceedingly difficult. Because Elias is purely Human, those of other races (Nova, Zireh or Faunus) will count as 2 targets rather than one.

Flow-Tempo Ajna - This effect doesn't stack, so the overall check will only be increased by 1 Tier Level for level one, two for level two etc. The levels don't stack either, higher levels replace the effects of lower levels.

In General - In some mentions of Time Slowing Dojutsu, you put specific stages. Remove that, Time Slowing Dojutsu alone will suffice for any of these scenarios.

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PostSubject: Re: Dark Moves[ Elias' Tech List]   25th September 2018, 5:04 pm

Approved unless anyone else has any issues with them

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PostSubject: Re: Dark Moves[ Elias' Tech List]   14th October 2018, 3:39 pm

Earth Release:
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Lodestone Fist:
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Fuinjutsu:
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Juinjutsu: Re-approval from Armenezra techs
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PostSubject: Re: Dark Moves[ Elias' Tech List]   15th October 2018, 12:08 pm

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Above Approved

Fuinjutsu/Juinjutsu/Gifted Striker - Being ignored for now, will check later.

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