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PostSubject: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime15th January 2014, 10:10 pm

Name: Restoration Seal
Classification: Medical Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary, Passive
Range: Self

Description: This seal must be placed on top of Curse of the Immortal or it will never activate. This seal actually allows the user to regenerate through sacrificing their own life force. It works pretty simply, when the user is damaged, regardless if they want to or not, the damage will be healed sacrificing life force equal to the damage taken. The healing however does take time as D-rank heals instantly, C-rank heals in 1 post, etc by 1 post. Through this the user is now capable of surviving decapitation, strengthening her type of immortality.

Name: Chained Souls
Classification: Kinjutsu, Fuinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This seal can only be applied to dead bodies and only those who Carmen has killed herself, and not reduced to nothingness. Once killed, she will place this seal upon the target's heart thus sealing it away. Being connected to the Curse of the Immortal Seal, once the heart has been sealed it will be transferred to the same space as Carmen's heart but placed in a different pocket. Once Carmen has been killed, the heart that was active upon her death will be reduced to nothing while the next heart takes it place bringing her back to life, granting her a stockpile type of immortality. The number of hearts she can carry varies on rank while always excluding her own heart in the count, 2 at genin, 3 at chunin, 4 at T. Jonin, 5 at Jonin/Med-nin, 6 at Hunter-nin, 7 at Heat Ninja, 8 at Combat Med, 9 at Sanin, and 10 at Kage.

Name: Express Limit
Classification: Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank
Class: Supplementary, Passive
Range: Self

Description: One of the benefits of immortality that Carmen abuses heavily in her fighting, is the fact that normal conditions cannot kill her, the two main conditions in shinobi warfare being chakra usage and blood/life drain. Through means of chakra usage, even though she can still waste all her chakra which will make her unable to use it for the remainder of the topic until regained, she will not die from chakra usage. The same occurs with blood/life drain but with this type regardless if she exceeds her limit she will not die. This is possible through slight altering in the formula for the Curse of the Immortal seal.

Name: Blaze Release: Great Fireball Technique
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: A technique where the chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire and expelled from the mouth either as a massive orb of rotating black flame, which flies only 15ft at C-rank speeds before becoming nothing. The released flames will engulf their target, dealing C-rank chakra based damage, and if connects with the ground will leave a crater on the ground's surface.

Name: Blaze Release: Great Fireball Shower
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: A-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: Kneading their chakra and then converting it to fire, the user creates a multitude of fireballs at the same time which rain down on the target causing severe, widespread damage around the field, dealing A-rank chakra based damage and moving at A-rank speeds. The number of fireballs starts with 5 using A-rank chakra, and increases by 5 for every rank up in chakra.

Name: Blaze Release: Great Fire Destruction
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: A-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the user's body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames that can set a vast area ablaze, engulfing the target in a veritable sea of flames dealing A-rank chakra based damage each post they are within the stream, with the stream moving at A-rank speeds. With the cost of additional C-rank chakra each post, the user can continue this jutsu continuously.

Name: Blaze Release: Great Fire Annihilation
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: A-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Mid to Long

Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into black fire, and then expelled from the mouth and shaped into a massive wall of intense flames, which covers a wide range as well expanding over 30ft and deals A-rank chakra based damage while moving at A-rank speeds. As the jutsu moves out 10ft it the wall will grow longer expanding 10ft wide every 10ft forward. Only water techniques which cover an equal range can quench this flame or are higher in rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime23rd January 2014, 5:00 am

Approved getting all Pyromaniac and what not I like lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime28th January 2014, 9:57 pm

Name: Slayer Arts
Classification: Kinjutsu, Fighting Style (Signature)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This peculiar fighting style was created quite literally created by immortals to combat immortals. Techniques that fall under this style only rely on one's life force or blood to activate  but can involve one's chakra if necessary. The techniques range from the most effective way to deal with immortals, sealing them, to more advanced methods which target their specific type of immortality then preys on it. If this style is attempted by non-immortals it will deal spiritual damage to them 1-rank above the jutsus rank.

Name: Slayer Art - Endless Blaze Destruction
Classification: Kinjutsu, Fuinjutsu, Ninjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This technique begins with Carmen having a C-rank amount of her own blood on her hand. Channeling a B-rank amount of chakra into the blood, the blood will ignite turning into black flames. Upon pressing the flaming palm into the target, the flame will explode dealing B-rank chakra based damage to the target. When the explosion occurs a seal will appear in the form of a burn, in which the burn can only be healed by a B-rank or higher medical ninjutsu but due to it being created by a burn, the target will be freed from its effects upon healing not unsealing, this technique cannot be unsealed by sealing techniques. Upon not just this wound but all wounds the target attempts to heal or regenerate, they will receive A-rank chakra and spiritual damage, which will cancel out the healing or regeneration as long as it is A-rank or lower. If the healing or regeneration is S-rank or higher, the damage will still be received but the target will be healed or regenerated. This Slayer Art was created by Carmen in an attempt to handle accelerated healing type of immortality.


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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime29th January 2014, 9:54 am

Slayer Arts - Approved
Endless Blaze Destruction - Approved. (Just so you know there are ways of dealing with it without triggering the effect. I won't say it because I don't want to ruin your tech but there are ways hence why I'm not raising the rank of the technique above B-rank)

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime13th February 2014, 10:38 pm

Name: Enhanced Speed
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C-rank (Blood price varies)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: A simple feat where Carmen sacrifices her own life force to enable herself to move at greater speeds, equal to the amount of life force she wasted.

Name: Enhanced Strength
Classification: Kinjutsu
Rank: C-rank (Blood price varies)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: Another simple feat where Carmen sacrifices her own life force to enable herself to increase her strength, equal to the amount of life force she wasted.

Name: Heavenly Axe Kick
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Raising one of her legs directly into the air, Carmen will cause it to descend onto her target like an axe. By concentrating her strength into her heel and striking her opponent she will deal physical based damage to them equal to her strength. When used alongside Blaze Kick, Blaze Kick will do damage equal to the this technique.

Name: Heavenly Sweep
Classification: Taijutsu
Rank: C-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: Closing the distance between her and her target, Carmen will sweep one of her legs under the target's causing them to fall to the ground unless they have a strength tier greater than her's, to keep themselves in place. This technique is mainly used to create openings, as once the target has fall succumb to it they are unable to defend against the next taijutsu unless the target has a reaction tier one rank higher than the speed of the taijutsu.

Name: Slayer Art - Hellfire Cross
Classification: Ninjutsu, Kinjutsu, Fuinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank (C-rank life price, B-rank chakra)
Class: Offensive
Range: Short

Description: Gathering her life force and blaze chakra into the palm of her hand, it will take the shape of a cross. Pressing the palm of her hand into the target, a seal will be placed, where the life force from the seal will be released sending the opponent flying back 30ft. Once they have reached the 30ft limit the seal placed on them will explode into a fiery vortex dealing B-rank spiritual and chakra based damage upon them. After the vortex has been formed it will further mold into a cross, the size of a Medium (L) creature, sealing the target in forever, constantly dealing B-rank chakra and spiritual damage to them each post, until the flames are dispersed or destroyed. Being a fuinjutsu this technique can be unsealed by B-rank or higher unsealing techniques but for those attempting to unseal it from the outside, they will be dealt B-rank chakra and spiritual damage if the method of unsealing is touch based.


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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime14th February 2014, 8:20 pm

First 2 put next to rank (Blood Price varies)

Slayer Art make it C-rank blood price & B-rank chakra price.

After you do that I'll approve it.

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime14th February 2014, 8:25 pm

done

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0/1 SS-rank specialty weapons
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0/3 Medium puppet designs
0/5 humanoid puppet designs

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime15th February 2014, 1:26 am

Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime16th February 2014, 9:55 pm

Name: Life Possession
Classification: Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: SS-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: An extension of Life Rebirth that occurs when Carmen places her Life Rebirth seal onto a living being, human, nova, cypher. Upon Carmen dying, when she is reincarnated instead of her body, her mind will be reincarnated into the person's body. By doing this Carmen will have the opportunity to take control over the person's body, which is done by a fight for control in the person's mind where whoever wins gains control over the body and the one who loses dies, with the risk of this technique even though she is immortal Carmen can die. Concerning the battle, based on the target's rank in respect to Carmen's, the target may be crippled or will benefit. With the difference in ranks, the one with the higher rank not being affected, the lower rank will have their jutsus power reduced by 1-rank for each rank they are below the one with the higher rank.

Name: Life's Steal
Classification: Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: SS-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: A further extension on Life Rebirth that builds itself on Life Possession by using Chained Souls application. With this technique it requires Carmen to die while having possession of a person's body, then be reincarnated using the Life Rebirth seal, where she will return to her normal body. When she dies, while possessing a person's body, the heart will be dragged along with her, if not destroyed, when she is reincarnated granting her access to another heart. However unlike with Chained Souls, when the heart from a possessed body is stored Carmen will gain access to that person's chakra natures and jutsus due to having full access to them at one point.

Name: Express Bypass
Classification: Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: S-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: To deal with her lack of chakra control, granted that she is extremely wasteful of it, not that she doesn't know how to use it, Carmen decided to use the application of Chained Souls as a base to further her chakra reserves. With the addition of this seal on top of the Chained Souls seal, Carmen will be able to draw chakra from the hearts of those she has sealed. However this seal does not specify between races, the chakra drawn from each heart will be equal to that of Carmen's chakra reserves. Unfortunately this comes with the risk that each time a heart runs out of chakra it will cease to function then be burned into nothingness. But when used in addition to Express Limit, the hearts can remain even though they have used all their chakra.

Name: Possessive Onslaught
Classification: Fighting Style, Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: Another one of Carmen's grand design next to her Cursed Seal of the Immortal techniques and Slayer Art techniques. This style can only be performed while Carmen is in the battle for possession of a person's body. When Carmen is reincarnated into the person's mind, the Life Rebirth seal will remain on the target as the battle goes on and will only vanish when the battle is over. While the seal remains on the target, through techniques expressly created for this style, the techniques will make use of the target's life force thus further weakening them  further during the battle for possession. Doing this does come with risks to the body, if Carmen uses to much of their life she may end up destroying the body before she can possess it.

Name: Possessive Onslaught – Purging Arrow
Classification: Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank (C-rank blood price)
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: Using the life force of the target's body, Carmen will create a large arrow about the size of her then proceed to hurl it at her target, the arrow moving at B-rank speeds and dealing B-rank spiritual damage upon impact with the target in which it will explode with a 10ft radius. Due to using the life of the target not only does this arrow track them directly, as a result of the Possessive Onslaught style, the target will be unable to use B-rank defensive techniques for 2 posts. By sacrificing further life, the speed of the arrow can be increased to 1-rank above the blood price, but the damage will remain the same.


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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime17th February 2014, 1:45 am

Life Possession SSS-rank.
Life's Steal SS-rank
Express Bypass S-rank.

Possessive Onslaught A-rank
Possessive Onslaught - Purging Arrow Approved.

(You realize why I jacked up the rank of the technique right? I didn't just do it for no reason. Raise all of the techniques ranks and you can leave them as is with them being approved)

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime17th February 2014, 9:05 am

Life Possession - At most I'll raise it to SS-rank. Due to being an extension of Life's Rebirth which is already limited itself, its already hard enough to kill Carmen, and for the fact that Carmen has to fight for control over the body in which if she loses she will die, is why I'm not raising it to SSS-rank. If I would have said full control no battle, which was considered SSS-rank would be a given but this technique has to many limits as is.

Life's Steal - I might raise this one to SS-rank, but it shares the same limits of Life Possession.

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime17th February 2014, 12:50 pm

Mmmkay both SS-rank then. The other two approved

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime17th February 2014, 1:38 pm

done

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0/1 SSS-rank specialty weapon
0/1 SS-rank specialty weapons
0/2 SS-rank weapons
3/5 S-rank weapons
1/1 Large puppet design
0/3 Medium puppet designs
0/5 humanoid puppet designs

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime22nd February 2014, 2:07 am

Name: Heavenly Transfer Technique
Classification: Ninjutsu (Signature)
Rank: SS-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges

Description: With this technique, the user is able to transport objects anywhere at the speed of light, SS-rank speed. When being transferred, the object is engulfed in light and moves to any desired destination through a narrow beam instantly, reminiscent of a bolt of lightning. In all instances, the object transported is placed onto a sort of platform. Although typically restricted to inanimate objects, the technique can be used on living organisms as well. However, as the body is unable to handle the speed involved in the transfer, they would be ripped to shreds being dealt SS-rank damage chakra damage. A living organism is capable of surviving if they possess a SS-rank endurance and defense tier, an accelerate healing technique where they are capable of healing SS-rank damage instantly, or possess a form of immortality that allows the body to survive SS-rank damage.

Name: Accelerated Restoration
Classification: Medical Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank
Class: Supplementary, Passive
Range: Self

Description: This seal being placed on top of the Restoration Seal is meant to do one and only one thing, that is decreasing the amount of time it takes for her to regenerate. With the addition of this seal, the time it takes to regenerate is reduced by 2-posts while retaining the original cost.

Name: Phoenix Song
Classification: Genjutsu, Kinjutsu, Fighting Style (Signature)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: Even though Carmen can never be considered a true Fushicho, she still has a love for the phoenix, more specifically its song. The reason being because this song was considered the only thing that could calm her, during the techniques of this style Carmen cannot go into a frenzy due to Joy of Flames. Making a wise decision Carmen has decided to use what soothes her to plague her targets, in the method of strictly sound based genjutsu. However unlike usual genjutsu, instead of solely affecting one's targets, genjutsu that fall under this style affect everybody including Carmen.

Name: Phoenix Song – Meteor Dance
Classification: Genjutsu, Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank (B-rank blood price, B-rank chakra price)
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: Channeling her life force to her throat, Carmen will release a blood curdling screech, capable of being heard up to 30ft away. All those who hear this screech, including Carmen, will be cast into a genjutsu where the surrounding area will take no change. Rather from the sky, large  fireballs will begin to rain down at A-rank speeds. Each time a fireballs collides with a person they will be dealt A-rank spiritual based damage. This genjutsu lasts for a total of 15 posts.

Name: Piercing Sound
Classification: Ninjutsu, Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid

Description: A marvelous creation that Carmen discovered through the creation of her Phoenix Song style, that she actually uses as an extension towards it. As Carmen channels her life force to her throat in preparation for one of her Songs, she will add in 1-rank of life/blood force so she can control the pitch and frequency of her screech. Instead of the usual high pitch low frequency, she will reverse it making the screech low pitch high frequency. This will make the screech harder to hear, decreasing the range by 10ft but upon being heard will grant the sound based genjutsu a “mental piercing.” This will allow Carmen's Phoenix Songs to pierce through Barrier tiers or mental barriers that defend against genjutsu equal to the rank of the Song.


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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime10th March 2014, 2:42 am

Zzzz Heavenly Transfer lower it to Ripping Discord lest raising the price of the technique to facilitate the speed you are transferring something making it an individual price per object you are transferring. Otherwise everything else is fine.

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime10th March 2014, 11:02 am

Edited

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0/1 SS-rank specialty weapons
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Approved

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Name: Curse of the Undead Immortal
Classification: Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: SS-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: The final step in Carmen's lust for immortality, which requires her to possess Curse of the Immortal, Chained Souls, and Life Rebirth. For this technique to become active Carmen must have already placed her Life Rebirth seal before the circumstance of her losing her soul, by whatever means, thus killing her. Through the process of Life Rebirth, regardless if Carmen has lost her soul, she will be reborn alive though lacking a soul, making her an undead. Being an undead Carmen no longer requires oxygen to survive, cannot be harmed by poisons or toxins, cannot drown but cannot breathe underwater, no longer ages, cannot have children, and can retain full control over one's limbs even if separated.

Name: Blaze Release - Black Sun
Classification: Ninjutsu, Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: SS-rank (SS-rank chakra, S-rank blood price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: With this technique Carmen gathers a large amount of chakra to her hand, creating a small ball of black fire. With the addition of her life force, she will hurl the ball into the air. Upon the ball of fire reaching the height of the clouds, the life force within it will explode not destroying the ball of fire but causing it to expand to the size of a small star, creating a black sun. This sun does nothing harmful rather under the light of both a black and yellow sun, Carmen is capable of making use of her Underworld Arts. This sun can only be destroyed by SSS-rank techniques.

Name: Obsidian Bones
Classification: Ninjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: A reaction that occurred upon Carmen directly infusing her bones with her Blaze release chakra. This result does turn her bones black at the same time superheating them to the point that they are capable of burning through solids equal to the rank of Carmen. However due to Pain's Comfort, the heat of these bones can be increased to the damage she has taken until the heat is released.  These bones can also be destroyed or cut by techniques equal to the rank of the bones which is equal to Carmen's rank.

Name: Underworld Arts
Classification: Kinjutsu, Fighting Style (Signature)
Rank: S-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: By far Carmen's strongest line of techniques due to the very way they must be activated. For starters each Underworld Art can only be used under the rays of both a black and yellow sun, never one. Second, these techniques are neither fueled by chakra or life, rather they are fueled by souls that Carmen steals from the living. Due to souls being their source, techniques from this line deal only natural damage without being classified as Senjutsu. Due to creating this type of technique line, Carmen is unable to have a summoning, which includes having a contract with The Shinigami.

Name: Underworld Art – Obsidian Butterfly
Classification: Kinjutsu, Fuinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: SS-rank (S-rank blood price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: The only technique within the Underworld Art line which does not rely on souls as its source. With the activation of this technique Carmen will release her bones from her back and form them into the shape of large bat wings. Once the bones have been formed, she will light them ablaze turning them into black fiery bat wings, which gives her the ability to fly at SS-rank speeds at the cost of SS-rank blood each post. From the rest of her body, new bones will form wrapping around her body similar to an elegant armor of obsidian bones. The main ability of this technique is to rip out the souls of those who Carmen pins, then seal them within her own body in order to fuel her other Underworld Arts. The amount of energy a soul possess, regardless of where the soul came from, is equal to Carmen's chakra level.

Name: Phoenix Song – Burning Nest
Classification: Genjutsu, Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: C-rank (D-rank blood price, D-rank chakra price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: Channeling her life force to her throat, Carmen will release a blood curdling screech, capable of being heard up to 30ft away. All those who hear this screech, including Carmen, will be cast into a genjutsu where the surrounding area will turn into a phoenix's nest, approximately 50ft in diameter, during the moment when a new phoenix is being born. This means the phoenix's nest will be completely on fire and all those within the nest will be dealt C-rank mental and spiritual damage each post. This genjutsu lasts a total of 7 posts.

Name: Phoenix Song – Erupting Blaze
Classification: Genjutsu, Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank (C-rank blood price, C-rank chakra price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: Channeling her life force to her throat, Carmen will release a blood curdling screech, capable of being heard up to 35ft away. All those who hear this screech, including Carmen, will be cast into a genjutsu where a large column of fire will burst out of the ground engulfing all those within the genjutsu for 2 posts dealing B-rank mental and spiritual damage. This genjutsu lasts a total of 10 posts with the column of fire occurring every 2 posts with a 1 post cooldown before occurring again. When used in conjunction with Phoenix Song – Burning Nest, the column of fire will be released from the nest then begin to coil at B-rank speeds for the entirety of the genjutsu's duration dealing a A-rank mental and B-rank spiritual damage each post.

Name: Phoenix Song – Meteor Dance
Classification: Genjutsu, Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank (B-rank blood price, B-rank chakra price)
Class: Offensive
Range: Long

Description: Channeling her life force to her throat, Carmen will release a blood curdling screech, capable of being heard up to 30ft away. All those who hear this screech, including Carmen, will be cast into a genjutsu where the surrounding area will take no change. Rather from the sky, thousands of large fireballs will begin to rain down at A-rank speeds. Each time a fireballs collides with a person they will be dealt A-rank mental and spiritual based damage. This genjutsu lasts for a total of 15 posts. When used in conjunction with Phoenix Song – Erupting Blaze, the “meteors” will rain down directly into the coiling fire, which is now moving at A-rank speeds, damaging all within it with S-rank mental damage and A-rank spiritual damage every other post.

Name: Flame Craze
Classification: Taijutsu (Signature)
Rank: D-rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: Another benefit from being one who simply wants to watch the world burn. Being that Carmen's mind is completely filled with fire and destruction, mental damage which is received from flames can never break her mind regardless if the damage occurs or not.


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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime30th March 2014, 9:58 pm

Curse of Undead Immortal, also add she loses the other things which occur for living beings namely the ability to procreate and age. Also the SS-rank Endurance I can't allow unless it's by consuming an equal amount of blood. Reasoning being if I allow perma-tier's without a constant cost outside of awakenings others will follow...and no not happening.

Obsidian Butterfly, same problem as Curse of Undead Immortal for SS-rank Speed tiers.

Underworld Arts - I really like this. I'm tempted to allow this only one three conditions. 1st Carmen is unable to obtain a Summon Contract due to breaching the Natural Order by using captured Souls to fuel her Senjutsu Techniques. Also doing such means The Shinigami also can't be contracted by her because she's stealing from him...never good. And Third if those are added I'll approve it only to be disputed via a mod vote.

Every other technique other than those three are approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime30th March 2014, 10:09 pm

Curse of the Undead Immortal and Obsidian Butterfly - No problem

Underworld Arts - Summon contract, fine with that. The Shinigami part is also a good thing, my plan was to learn the Shinigami then use it to steal her soul, then well survive and piss it off. Thus surviving its technique she gains its power to steal souls, thus pissing the Shinigami off further. The Shinigami was always part of this plan since the beginning.

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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime30th March 2014, 10:52 pm

Everything's approved then and yeah that's good rofl, it also give the technique more sense ICly not to mention extra CD because The Shinigami never likes people who can't die after all it is the Death God.

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Name: Crushing Sound
Classification: Kinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Mid

Description: Yet another marvelous creation discovered by Carmen through the creation of her Phoenix Song style, that is used as an extension of it. As Carmen channels her life force to her throat in preparation for one of her Songs, she will add in 1-rank of life force/blood so she can highly compress the sound as it is released from her mouth, creating a shock wave trail of sound, that will fly out 40ft before dispersing, which will collide with the target dealing physical damage and moving at speeds equal to the rank of the Song being used. When this method of release is used however, the Phoenix Songs shift from sound to touch based genjutsu. Due to the shift to touch based, the Phoenix Songs will now only affect the target who is hit by the shockwave, but also due to the power of Phoenix Song now being concentrated on one person, the damage delivered to the target, both mental and spiritual, will be increased by 1-rank. If Piercing Sound is used along with this technique, then the range of the shockwave is reduced by 10ft while the piercing ability is raised to 1-rank above the rank of the Song. If used along side one of her blaze release ninjutsu, which is released from the mouth, the speed of the ninjutsu will be increased to speeds equal to the Song, and will add chakra based damage equal to the spiritual based damage of the Song to the Song's range of damage.

Name: Cursed Seal of the Banshee
Classification: Juinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank (B-rank blood price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This specific Cursed Seal can only be placed upon women and npcs or pcs who are shinobi/mercenaries. Once placed it will turn their skin and hair a ghostly white, a process which cannot be reversed, essentially granting them the appearance of a banshee. After the transformation has occurred the new banshee will gain access to the Death Song line of genjutsu, be capable of detecting immortals, demons, other underworldy creatures up to 50ft away, the ability to fly where they fly at a speed equal to their speed, which when they do so they appear as spirits instead of living beings, and their nails grow to 7ins each, which are capable of cutting through defenses equal to their rank. They will retain and continue to have access to all their former techniques. Being a juinjutsu by increasing the blood price by 1-rank, Carmen is capable of freeing the target of their free will, making them completely loyal to her.


Name: Death Song
Classification: Genjutsu, Kinjutsu, Fighting Style (Banshee Only)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: This set of genjutsu was created by Carmen for express use to those who are under the influence of Cursed Seal of the Banshee. Following the Phoenix Song, the Death Song is purely sound based, created as the banshee wails. However instead of the user being plagued, all those excluding the user is cast into the genjutsu as long as they hear the sound. The main threat of these songs is that the longer one is within the genjutsu, the harder it is to escape it. Once the genjutsu reaches a certain level, it will become a fabrication and kill its target.

Name: Death Spike
Classification: Taijutsu (Banshee Only)
Rank: C-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: To those Banshee who are a little more impatient than others, by constantly releasing their wail over the course of the Death Song, each post, the total number of posts it takes to rank up will be decreased by 3 posts each post.

Name: Death Sentence
Classification: Taijutsu (Banshee Only)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: An effect that occurs when multiple Banshee are performing the same Death Song within close proximity of each other, the range of the Death Song. This works by the wail of each Banshee bouncing of the other to intensify the sound making them stronger, which will increase the rank of the Song by 1-rank for each Banshee who is singing the same Song.

Name: Death Song – Lung Collapse
Classification: Genjutsu, Kinjutsu, Fabrication (Banshee Only)
Rank: C-rank (C-rank chakra, D-rank blood)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: By releasing a powerful wail that will spread over a range of 30ft, all those who hear this sound will be cast into a genjutsu. Those who are cast into this genjutsu will experience their lungs failing as they are dealt C-rank spiritual damage each post. The reason for this genjutsu not dealing mental damage is because the mental damage is being stored until the genjutsu shifts into a fabrication, when upon doing so all the mental damage will be felt at once on the target's lungs directly. This genjutsu remains at C-rank for 10 posts, where it will become a B-rank, for every 5 posts after the genjutsu will increase by 1-rank. Upon reaching A-rank, the genjutsu will turn into a fabrication and  release all the stored mental damage to the target, then end. With each increase in rank, the power is also increased.


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PostSubject: Re: Carmen's Box of Fun   Carmen's Box of Fun Icon_minitime14th April 2014, 2:29 am

Zzzz mmmkay. Just note Fabrication without time limits have a constant price.

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Name: Cursed Seal of the Imp
Classification: Juinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank (B-rank blood price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This specific seal can only be placed on small sized creatures. Upon being placed on them it will forcibly transform them into an imp, a small creature known for its red skin, horns atop its head, bat-like wings, and barbed tail. Once transformed the new imp will gain a form of immortality where the imp is linked to the user's mortality, if the user cannot die the imp cannot die and vice versa. These imps lose access to all their former techniques upon transforming and no longer possess chakra and now gain blood reserves equal to 17 year old and below Yoroi. Being a juinjutsu by increasing the blood price by 1-rank, Carmen is capable of freeing the target of their free-will making them completely loyal to her.

Name: Cursed Seal of the Banshee
Classification: Juinjutsu (Signature)
Rank: A-rank (B-rank blood price)
Class: Supplementary
Range: Short

Description: This specific seal can only be placed on women, both pc and npc, who are shinobi/mercanary. Upon being placed on them, the woman's skin and hair will permanently turn a ghostly white. Once transformed the new banshee will gain the ability to, once every 10 posts, become intangible, allowing both physical and chakra techniques to pass through them. A benefit of the banshee is that they do retain their techniques before transforming, if they retain their free-will they are able to learn further techniques, if they lose their free-will they lose their ability to learn further techniques other than Banshee exclusive. In terms of chakra reserves, if they lose their free-will their chakra reserves will become equal to a samurai, while the rank the banshee is classified as is 1-rank below the user. Those who retain their free-will, suffer no loss in chakra reserves. Being a juinjutsu by increasing the blood price by 1-rank, Carmen is capable of freeing the target of their free-will making them completely loyal to her.

Name: Spirit Sense
Classification: Kinjutsu (Banshee Only)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Long

Description: A natural ability of the banshee is to sense other underworldy creatures. Up to 50ft away, the banshee is capable of sensing and pinpointing immortals, vampires, werewolves, and other underworldy type creatures.

Name: Banshee Flight
Classification: Kinjutsu (Banshee Only)
Rank: D-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: A natural ability of the banshee is flight, however when doing so the banshee takes the appearance of a spirit rather than a living being. This also allows the banshee, flight speed equal to their speed.

Name: Night Vision
Classification: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu (Signatture)
Rank: D-rank
Class: Passive
Range: Self

Description: Being born within the darkness of the Land of Shadows Carmen's eyes have adapted to the point that she can make out silhouettes in darkness. With the addition of chakra, directly flowed to her eyes, she can clearly see in darkness with no problem.

Name: Imp Morphing
Classification: Kinjutsu (Imp Only)
Rank: B-rank
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self

Description: With their main purpose of being spies and informants, the imps method of gathering information is performed by transforming themselves into different creatures. Taking advantage of the Cursed Seals transformation application, by sacrificing a C-rank amount of blood the imp is capable of transforming themselves into creatures up to the size of Medium.
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Zzzz if no one else has a problem? I'll have this approved.

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